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Hitguj » Views and Comments » मायबोली-हितगुज » what to write (and what not to) on hitguj » Archive through February 18, 2004 « Previous Next » Dharmadhikari Thursday, March 27, 2003 - 8:09 pm:      those people are good listners! Nrn Tuesday, April 22, 2003 - 8:14 pm:      hi me tar navinch aahey hya prakarala.ekach gost sangavishi vatate ki kasahi aso hya site mule ekdum aplya lokat/gharat parat alyasarkha vatla.maza sarkhe loka ji marathi manasancha samparka sathi asusleli asatat tyancha sathi tar hya site varcha vachaylach milna swarga sukha peksha motha aahey.u may feel i am exagerrating,but its the truth.i pray for this site to continue for years together and for the seniors to continue their anubhavache bol which will help to maintain the quality of the site.. Mukund Sunday, April 27, 2003 - 4:06 pm:      namaskar maMDLI² maI [qao Aaz idvasaapUvaI-ca saBaasad JaalaÜ Aaho pNa yaa Aaz idvasaat malaa sagaLo AnaUBava Aalao AitXaya gahna ivaYayaavar saKÜla ]cca djyaa-cyaa cacaa- vaacaNyaat Aalyaa tsaoca ivanaÜid ilaÓaNa baGaayaalaa imaLalao.kahI jaNaaMcyaa TÜmaNao maarayacyaa savayaI baGaItlyaa.kvaIta vaacalyaa laoK hI vaacalao %yaavacaI- cacaa- pNa vaacalaI . ho sava- vaacauna Asao vaaTto ik ekndrIt yaa saa[TcaI ³mhNajao yaa saa[Tcyaa saBaasadaMica´baÝiwk patLI Kup vacyaa- patLIcaI Aaho Asao mala vaaTto.Aata kahI Apvaad saÜDlao tr yaa saa[Tvacyaa- vairXz saBaasadaMina kaLjaI k$ nayao Asao malaa vaaTto AaNaI AapNa AXaI Apoxaa zo] nayao ik yaoqao yaoNaayaa- sagaL\yaaMXaI AaplaI maO~I jauLola ikMvaa sagaL\yaaMXaI AapNa sahmat hÜ].ikMbahunaa yaa saa[Tcyaa inamaa-%yaalaa pNa AXaI Apoxaa nasaavaI jaunao to saÜnao AXaI vaR<aI na zovata jaaNakar laÜkaMnaI %yaancao ivacaar AaNaI ilaKaNa caalauca zovaavao AaNaI jar kÜNaI navaa saBaasad caukt Asaola tr %yaalaa idXaa VavaI AaiNa %yaanao vaad Gaatlaa tr pamar mhNauna dula-xa kravao AapNa sagaLo AayauXyaacyaa vaoga vaogaL\yaa TPPyaat AahÜt hohI jaaNakaraMnaI laxaat Gyaa. AapNa sagaLo jaI ivaivaQata yaa maayabaÜlaIvar AaNatÜ %yaatca maayabaÜlaIcaI KUbaI Aaho Asao malaa vaaTto.[qao Asao ilahU naka Asaoca ilaha Asaa A+ahasa QaÉ naka karNa kÜNaalaa imaiXklapNaa faijalapNaa AavaDt nasaola pNa naomaka tÜca kaihMnaa Baa]na jaatÜ mhNatat naa vyai> itt@yaa p`ÌtI² tr isainayar saBaasadanaÜ htaXa hÜ] naka AaiNa tumacao ivacaar AaiNa KoiLmaoiLnao ilaihNyaaica p`qaa caalauca zovaa iTkocaI pvaa- na krta AaiNa caaMgalao ]dahrNa satt yaa maayabaÜlaIvar idsau Vat Relax Thursday, June 19, 2003 - 5:20 pm:      Wow.. you guys are too fast! I had a few comments in one of the forums and they are getting deleted left and right. I am talking about the Views and Comments forum - Paradeshaat Rahatana - Kharcha Koni Sosava. The first comment I had posted was quite relevant to the discussion, then there were some pro and anti arguments. All that is gone (including my first message) and after that, I posted twice since I saw that it got deleted. I mean C'mon why am I being treated as an abuser of Hitguj? Do you need a credit card to validate me or something to see if I am a spammer? I am new, that's all what I am.. This is what I have posted there now in response to someone who had answered to my query about why my comments were getting deleted:-------------- jaÉr maI tÜ h@k naakart naahIyao. Pan asa mazhya hatun kai pramaad ghadla te tari kalunde. Ki mi join zhalybarobarach Maayaboli chya marjitlya lokanviruddha bolalo ? ;) nakÜ nakÜ malaa admin caa h@k mauLIca nakÜya !!.. Mala vatata ithe sarvach Freedom of Expression cha hakka gajavtayt - fakta mich nahi. So malach ashi vagnuk milnyache karan maI majaI-tlaa naahI mhNaUna kI kayaÆ maayabaÜlaI mhNajao US maQalao maharaYT/ maMDL tr hÜt naaihyao naaÆ kI navaIna laÜkanaa %yaat Gausaayalaa kÜNaacyaa trI majaI-t rhavaM laagatMÆ Maybe ]Va ho vaacaUna to ha ID block krtIla ... hmm! Ashishchaskar Thursday, June 19, 2003 - 5:32 pm:      Relax, tumhI jao ilaihlao hÜto %yaalaa personal attack Asao mhNatat. baáyaaca vaoLolaa Aaplaa hotU nasalaa trI Asao ilaihlao jaato AaiNa gaOrsamaja hÜtat. maga ivaYaya BalatIkDo laagatÜ. %yaamauLo Admin/Moderators AXaI desciplinary action Gaotat. Its not at all personal hovaodavao. ivaYaya caukIcyaa maagaa-laa laagaUna maayabaÜlaIvarcao vaatavarNa gaZUL hÜ} nayao evaZaca ]_oXa AsatÜ. AaiNa admin/moderator tumhalaa ]<ar doNaar naahItÊ tumhI maagaU naka. maaJaIhI Anaok posts Asaoca delete Jaalao Aahot. AapNaca ivacaar k$na zrvaayacao kI AapNa ilaihlao %yaanao na@kI kaya Jaalao. maayabaÜlaIvar yaa Ê ÉLaÊ maga tumhalaa [qalaI gaMmat kLola. Aataca kÜNatohI mat banavaU naka. baGaa pTlao tr. Relax Thursday, June 19, 2003 - 7:54 pm:      ja,$r pT\laM.. ek gaÜYT Ô> hI Aaho kI personal attack fakta mi karat navto.. Ekhadyane asa lihila ki "If you don't have the guts (??) to give birth to babies at your own expense.." vagaire.. tar, tyala response pan tyach surat milato. eKaVanao vaar kolaa tr %yaacaa p`itkar pNa Gaotlaa paihjao. tÜ vaar Ajauna itqao Aho pNa p`itkar remove krNyaat Aalaaya.. This is wrong. In any case, I withdraw my case. Maayboli is a good site and the discussions are interesting. I definitely wouldn't want to muddy the waters. Fake_id Thursday, June 19, 2003 - 9:14 pm:      relax..rajkaranat barech pochalele distay ;)...tumhi baramatiche ki amethi che Jojo Friday, June 20, 2003 - 12:26 pm:      That's the spirit Relax, just move on! -- Jojo consultancy firm Swaagat_samiti Tuesday, June 24, 2003 - 2:09 pm:      sausvaagatma\ !!! Fake_id, ihtgaujavar Aaplao haid-k svaagat. ihtgaujatfo- Aaplyaalaa hI CÜTIXaI BaoT . ihtgaujavarIla sava- ivaBaagaaMnaa AvaXya BaoT Va . dovanaagarI laoKnaasaazI ]pyau> maaihtI yaoqao pha. dovanaagarI Beti Wednesday, July 02, 2003 - 6:07 am:      malaa maayabaÜlaIvarcyaa kivataMvarcyaa TIkoba_la kaho mato maaMDayacaI Aahot. baayakaMcyaa jaaDIp`maaNaoca kivata yaa ivaYayaavar AsamaMjasa AaiNa ]qaL ivanaÜd AaplyaakDo ivalaxaNa laÜkip`ya Aaho. AgadI so called kavyap`omaI maayabaÜlaIkrhI yaatUna sauTlaolao naahIt. yaa]laT kivata samajaavaUna GaoNyaacyaa dRYTInao creative TIka @vaicat hÜto. AaiNa AXaI TIka AaiNa %yaatUna cacaa- JaalaIca tr kvaIMcao A%yaacaar [%yaadI ]qaL comments var LOL Rofl krNaaro AaiNa v & C var evaZ\yaa tovaZ\yaanao hmarItumarovar yaoNaaro lagaoca cacaa- baMd kra Asaa AarDaAÜrDa sau$ krtat. baro hÜto serious TIka tovha tI zraivak eokUna GaoNaaáyaa ikMvaa vaad GaalaNaaáyaa laÜkaMvar hÜto. maaJaa Aaxaop TIkolaa naahI zraivak laÜkaMvar hÜNyaalaa Aaho. bahuXaÁ hoca laÜk baro ilaihtat. Asao Asatanaa vaašt ilaihNaaáyaaMvar qaoT TIka krayacaI naahI AaiNa CupI TIka krtanaa sabagaÜlaMkar comments maarayacyaa Asao [qao TIkocao ZÜbaL sva$p Aaho ( yaat maI gaQaDa yaa iD kDUna yaoNaaáyaa TIkolaa vagaLlao Aaho. tI ‘AvaNa-naIya’ Asato. ) . Kro phata kivataMcyaa tulanaonao kqaa ikMvaa lailatmaQaohI kahI Ôar ]cca laoKna AaZLUna yaot naahI. pNa %yaaba_la baaYkL ivanaÜd hÜt naahIt. kivata yaa Tayapayalaa va paDayalaa saÜPyaa Asalyaanao %yaa jaast yaotat mhNaUnahI Asaola. karNao kahI hI AsaÜt.. pNa ho TIkocao sva$p badlaayalaa hvao Asao malaa manaapasaUna vaaTto. yaasaazI kaya krta yaošlaÆ... any sincere thoughts/ comments are welcome! Bombayviking Wednesday, July 02, 2003 - 6:35 am:      AapNa kivata krtÜ mhTlaM kI laÜk ]gaaca Gaabartat... ek naa QaD BaaraBar icaMQyaa Asaa kahIsaa p`kar %yaat hÜtÜ... r laa T laavalaa ...yamak jauLlao ik JaalaI kivata tyaar... ik%yaok kivata (a ³ Aqaa-t maayabaÜlaIvarcao kahI sanmaanaIya Apvaad vagaLuna ´ %yaaca category maQaIla Asatat.... iTka hÜNaM svaaBaaivak Aaho... jaovha tumhI kÝtukacaI Apoxaa zovata tovha iTkolaa sauwa saamaÜro jaayalaa hvao... kQaI hI iTka Ôarca vaOyai>k patLIvar hÜto.... ik%yaokda ho Aaplao kÝtuk Aaho ik iTka Aaho [tka %yaat saamya Baod AsatÜ... (a iTkomauLo ek maayabaÜlaIkr pragaMda Jaalaa.... ho saujaana maayabaÜlaIkraMcyaa Qyaanaat Asaolaca... AsaÜ...XaovaTI ixap`a maatocaa ]pdoXa maa~ malaa pTlaa..... "IF YOU CAN'T AVOID IT THEN ENJOY IT" Milindaa Wednesday, July 02, 2003 - 7:07 am:      baoTIÊ malaa pihlaa mau_a farsaa pTt naahIyao.. pihlaI gaÜYT mhNajao kÜNata ivanaÜd ]qaL Aaho ho kuNaI zrvaayacao Æ maanya Aaho kI jaovha saRjanaXaIla TIkocaI Apoxaa Asato tovha ivanaÜd vaacaayalaa nakÜsao vaaTt AsatIla... pNa kahI kahI vaoLolaa p`%yaxa TIkopoxaa Ap`%yaxa TIka kolaolaI barI Asato Asaa maaJaa trI AnauBava Aaho. sagaL\yaaMnaaca TIka kolaolaI AavaDto Asao naahI AaiNa kovaL %yaa vya>Inao ilaKaNaacao Eama Gaotlao Aahot mhNaUna KÜTI stutI krNao jamatoca Asao naahI.. AjaUna ek mhNajao [qao baáyaaca users cao kanafaT\yaa naava pDlaolao Aaho. %yaaMnaI kahIhI ilaihlao trI %yaalaa ]qaLÊ baaYkL yaa sadrat Qarlao jaato ³jasao Ajjaukalaa BaaMDNaasaazI jabaabadar Qarlao jaato... itcaI caUk nasalaI trIhI tsaoca...´ %yaamauLo ik%yaok vaoLa djao-dar ivanaÜd kÉnahI tÜ na kLta laÜkaMnaI %yaavar kahIhI baÜlalaolao maI baiGatlao Aaho.... jyaaMcaa ramadasaaMcyaa iXakvaNaIvar ivaXvaasa Aaho %yaaMnaI maaJao pÜsT naahI vaacalao trI caalaola. dusara mau_a zraivak laÜkaMvar hÜNaaáyaa TIkocaa... punha [qao KUp saapoxata Aaho. " bahuXaÁ hoca laÜk baro ilaihtat " . yaa vaa@yaatUna kaya saucavaayacao Aaho Æ baáyaa ilaihNaaáyaa laÜkaMvar TIka hÜ] nayao Æ yaa tUna malaa ek Kup jaunaa vaadacaa mau_a Aazvalaa.. tÜ kahIsaa " laÜkaMnaa kLNaaáyaa kivata kI kovaL gaUZÊ dubaÜ-Qa ³tqaakiqat djao-dar´ kivata " yaa saMbaMQaI hÜta... [qao malaa kÜNaakDohI AMgaulaIinado-Xa krayacaa naahI pNa %yaatUna Asaa inaYkYa- inaGaalaa hÜta kI ilaihNaaáyaanao ilaiht jaavao AaiNa vaacaNaaáyaanao zrvaavao kI to vaacaavao kI naahI.. tovha samajaa malaa eKaVa kivacaa ivacaar krNyaacaa dRYTIkÜna AavaDt nasaola tr maI %yaacyaavar TIka kolaI mhNaUna kuzo ibaGaDlao... Æ yaavar maI trI ekca ]paya saucavaona... " naIr xaIr ivavaok " AaiNa sarto XaovaTIÊ kqaa va kivata yaaMcaI tulanaa krNyaacaa ]_oXa kLU Xaklaa naahI.. sava- ilaKaNa ho kÜNa%yaahIÊ kÜNaacyaahI caoYTocyaa ]_oXaanao naahI. Nvgole Wednesday, July 02, 2003 - 7:35 am:      AamacyaaXaI tr kÜNaI kahI baÜlathI naahIÊ kahI saaMgathI naahI AaiNa kahI eokthI naahI. jao sagaL\yaaMsaazIca ilahItat to AamhI AamacyaasazIca ilahIlao Aaho Asao samajatÜ. maga ilahU dot kI %yaaMnaa. narond` Beti Wednesday, July 02, 2003 - 10:00 am:      ra^ibana AaiNa imailanda mau_a TIka AsavaI ik naahI.. ³caaMgalao ilaihNaaro ikMvaa vaašT.. kÜNaavarhI´ ha naahIca. tI AsaavaIca. pNa ijaqao jaavao itqao Ô> kvaIMcaa saukaL.. kvaIMcao A%yaacaar yaa táhocao ivanaÜd kivata na kLNaaro ikMvaa kLNaarohI jara jaastca vaoLa krtat hI vastuisqatI Aaho. ra^ibanaÊ kAÜ]tukabarÜbar TIkahI sahna kra AXaa ]pdoXaacao p`yaÜjana kLlao naahI. kivata ilaihlaI jaato tovhaca to AQyaa)t Asato. pNa maga tI jaI vya>I r laa T jauLvato itcyaavar kra. maÜGama baÜlaNyaacaI Zala Gao} naka. vaar krayacao tr JaolaayacaI tyaarI zovaa. imailanda saapoxatocaa mau_a iktIhI taNalaa trI maayabaÜlaIvarcaI TIka maI mhNato yaa vaga-vaarIt yaot naahI Asao tulaa mhNaayacao Aaho kaÆ baroÊ ivanaÜd ]qaL ik naahI ho zrvat yaot naahI.. kivatobaabat maa~ to yaoto.. ho ksao kaya bauvaaÆ AaiNa tulaa ekacaI kivata ikMvaa ivacaar AavaDlao naahI mhNaUna tU ihtgaujacyaa kvaImaa~aMcao vaaBaaDo kaZNaarÆ kaÆ maI Aaxaop yaalaaca Gaotoya. jaastIt jaast qaoT TIka maI Qa$na kovaL 5 jaNaaMcyaa kivataMvar vaacalaI Aaho. to Asao XamaaÊ p`saadÊ praga. poXavyaacyaa kivataMcyaa so called dubaÜ-Qatoba_la [tko cava-Na Jaalao Aaho ik punha ilahayacaI garja naahI. (a pacaatlao caÜ]GaojaNa bahutok vaoLa caaMgalaoca ilaihtat. maI svatÁ ba_la kahI baÜlaNao Ap`Xast Aaho. AaiNa AamacyaapOkI kuNaIhI TIkoba_la patLI saÜDUna ]<ar idlyaacao malaa Aazvat naahI. TIkocyaa patLIba_la hoca mhNata yao[la Asao naahI. ]laT\pxaI gaulamaÜhravar kivataMcao pIk ]dMD Aalao ik TvaaLIcaohI yaoto. AaiNa Aamacao kana QarNaaro vaIrvar tovha saÔašnao sarsa@T gaÜÔNaI caalavaUna itqalyaa p`amaiNak kivataMcaahI ]pmad- krtat. AaiNa khI vaoLa tr [tkohI ta%kailak karNa laagat naahI. saQyaa gaulamaÜhravar barca kaL caaMgalyaa kivata yaot Aahot. trI sahnXa>Iba_lacao ]llaoK yaoNao qaaMbato kaÆ ikMvaa qaaMbavalao jaato kaÆ kqaa AiNa lailatcaa ]llaoK AXaasaazI ik tohI kahI Ôar ]cca Aahot Asao naahI pNa GTP krtanaa kuNaI Asao mhNatanaa idsaonaa malaa ik tU kqaa ilahUna Aamacyaavar A%yaacaar krtÜsa ikMvaa krtosa... sartoXaovaTI mau_a constructive criticism caa .. to iktpt hÜtoÆ ekUNaca kivatokDo phayacaI dRYTI [tkI TvaaLIcaI Aaho ik TIka maga tI kXaIhI AsaÜ itlaaca p`aQaanya imaLto. ho vaašT kivataMcyaa saukaLamauLo GaDto Asao ek karNa mhNaUna maanya k$. trI kivataMvar cacaa- hÜ}na ivacaaraMnaa caalanaa imaLavaI yaasaazI inadana maI kolaolao sincere p`ya%na yaaca vaR<aImauLo AyaXasvaI Jaalao Aahotca naaÆ mhNajao sauQaarNaa krayalaa jaavao trI TIkakarMkDUna TvaaLI AaiNa na kravao trI Aaplao sau@yaabarÜbarÜbar AÜlao jaLtoca Aaho.. ho barÜbar naahI. ho sa( tovhaca hÜ} Xakto jaovha tIkotUna negative [tkoca positive kahI imaLola. p`cailat TIkotUna kaya inaYpÙa hÜtoÆ maUzBar sensitive jaIva.. jao puZo maagao baro ilahU Xaklao Asato .. to pLUna jaatat. maaJyaasaarKo maUK- BaaMDt rhatat AaiNa kivata paDNaaro paDt rhatat. [qaohI naIr xaIr ivavaokacaa mau_a ka laagaU k$na phat naahI kuNaIÆ Ashishchaskar Wednesday, July 02, 2003 - 10:31 am:      This is really not encouraging. kovaL maayabaÜlaIvarca navho tr sagaLIkDoca ‘kivata’ AaiNa ‘kvaI’ ha caoYTocaa ivaYaya ka Jaalaaya yaacaa ivacaar hÜNao AavaXyak Aaho. yaalaa jaast k$na kvaIca jabaabadar Aahot. caaMgalyaa kivataMnaa ]%sÔut- dad imaLto ha Ô> maayabaÜlaIcaaca naahI tr ekMdirtca AnauBava Aaho. jaÜpya-Mt kivatokDo gaaMiBayaa-nao phaNyaacaa p`ya%na hÜt naahI tÜpya-Mt kivata AaiNa %yaacao kvaI ha caoYTocaaca ivaYaya rhaNaar Aaho. AaiNa hI p`amaaiNakta kivatotUna idsaayalaa hvaI. spYT AaiNa inasaMidgQa ² vaajapoyaI ekda paikstanalaa ]_oXaUna mhNaalao hÜto ‘ p`amaaiNakta kI Aignapirxaa XabdÜMsao nahI vyavaharsao hÜtI hO² ’ kivatocyaababatIt hI pirxaa inavvaL kivatod\vaaroca hÜto. AaiNa ho pTvaUna VayacaI jabaabadarI kovaL kvaI vagaa-caI Aaho. risakaMcaI ikMvaa so called iTkakaraMcaI naahI. Beti Wednesday, July 02, 2003 - 11:18 am:      AaiNa TIka p`amaaiNakÊ saaxaopI AaiNa AcaUk laxya saaQaUna kolaolaI AsaNao hI jabaabadarI kuNaacaIÆ tIhI kvaIMcaIÆ dusaáyaa Xabdat maI var ]llaoKlaolaI vaR<aI kovaL maaJyaa klpnaaivaXvaatca Aist%vaat Aaho kaÆ maga kivata gaaMiBayaa-nao GaotlaI jaavaIÊ Aaplyaa ]NaopNaavar saaQak baaQak mato samajaavaIt yaasaazI p`yaasa kolao tr pdrI pDNaaáyaa QaÜMD\yaaMcao kayaÆ ik tIhI kvaIMcyaa kmaa-caI ÔLoÆ Ashishchaskar Wednesday, July 02, 2003 - 11:51 am:      jaoMvha klakRtI p`amaaiNak Asato toMvha hÜNaarI iTka hI sauwa ³ bahutaMXaI ´ p`amaaiNakca Asato. tumhI vaanagaIdaKlao idlaolyaa kvaIMvar kQaI Ap`amaaiNak iTka JaalaI AahoÆ ikMvaa TvaaLI JaalaI AahoÆ poXavyaacyaa dubaÜ-Qatocaa ivacaar naMtr k$yaat. tumhI mhNata tI vaRtI inaiXcat Aaho. AaiNa saglaIkDoca AXaI vaRtI Asato. jasao kvaIMcao hÜto tsaoca iTkakaraMcaohI hÜto. pNa iTka hI mauLat klaakRtIvar Asato. %yaamauLo klaakRtIcao sva$p ho hI iTkocao sva$p zrvaayalaa karNaIBaUt Asato. AaiNa p`maaiNak kvaIMnaa kayama yaÜgya p`itsaad imaLalaa Aaho vaaTto. Aata [qao kivatoivaYayaI baÜlaayalaa AaiNa constructive cacaa- krayalaa tumacyaaiXavaaya kuNaIca tyaar nasato ho tumacao AaiNa maaJao dudO-va. Beti Wednesday, July 02, 2003 - 12:54 pm:      maI Asao mhNaalao kuzo mhNaalao yaaMcyaavar Ap`amaaiNak TIka JaalaI.. pNa jaovha saba GaÜDo baara T@ko hÜtat tovha tI TIka %yaaMcyaavarhI nasato kaÆ AaiNa jar %yaaMcyaavar qaoT TIka hÜto tr [traMvar ka naahIÆ tovha p`amaaiNakpNaacaM GaÜDM kuzo poMD KatMÆ klaaÌtIcao sva$p... kahI p`maaNaat Asaola naa.. pNa mhNaUna precise TIkocaI jabaabadarI TIkakar TaLU naahI Xakt. tÜ jaovha tI TaLtÜ tovhaca maI var ]llaoKlaolaI pirisqatI inamaa-Na hÜto. jar Asaola Kroca kivatocyaa djyaa-caI icaMta tr caukt Asaola itqao inaBaI-D saaMgaa .... baaYkL ivanaÜd AaiNa maÜGama TIkonao kahI maÜjako p`amaaiNak Aahot %yaaMcyaa tLmaLIcaa Apmaana k$ naka.. hI [tkI basic Apoxaa Aaho. pNa sagaL\yaaca maUL kivatot Aaho mhTlyaavar TIkocyaa djaa-ba_la p`Xna ivacaarNao maUK-pNaa hÜtÜ naahI kaÆ precision... sincerity... authenticity.. all these virtues a poet must stand by.. but the critic .. he is above all these mundane requirements... and how could he be held responsible for his own opinions... alas! they are nothing but humble derivatives of original poem... Aamaona² Ashishchaskar Wednesday, July 02, 2003 - 1:19 pm:      they are nothing but humble derivatives of original poem >>>> very precise. p`amaaiNak iTkakar kivatocao sva$p pahUna ]id\vagna hÜt naahI ikMvaa %yaanao hÜ} nayao Asao tumhalaa mhNaayacao Aaho kaÆ eKada so called p`amaaiNak iTkakar jaoMvha maÜGama AaiNa baÜcaNaarI iTka krtÜÊ toMvha %yaat ]id\vagnata nasaUna kovaL kui%satpNaaca AsatÜ ha samaja kXaacyaa AaQaaravar AahoÆ sensetivity Ô> kvaI laÜkaMmaQaoca Asato AaiNa iTkakaraMmaQao nasatoÊ yaa inaYkXaa-caa AaQaar kayaÆ kivata AaiNa kvaI yaapOkI iTkakaranao kXaaXaI p`amaaiNak rhavao AXaI tumacaI Apoxaa AahoÆ AaiNa jyaalaa tumhI inaiBa-D iTka mhNata tIhI hÜtoÊ pNa jyaaMnaa Jaopto %yaaMcyaa baabatIt. tumhalaa baáyaaca vaoLa AXaa comments imaLalyaa Aahot ho tumha naaka$ Xakt naahI. AaiNa jyaaMnaa hI iTka Jaopt naahIÊ %yaaMcyaavar baLjaÜrInao kravaI ikMvaa %yaaMcyaaivaYayaI sahanauBaUtI daKvaavaI ha Aaga`h kaÆ iTkakaranao Ê samaIxakanao kQaIca ]id\vagna hÜ} nayaoÆ AaiNa %yaa ]idgnatotUna jar sarcasm janmaalaa Aalaa tr jabaabadar kÜNaÆ Now I can not stop giving example. I am sorry guys. Please check latest poem on Gulamohar BB. kahItrI ‘[tko p`oma kravao’ AXaI Aaho. Do u want poetry lovers to accept those lines as a poetry? This is just romanticism and not poetry. Aata [kDo sahanauBaUtInao phavao AXaI tumacaI Apoxaa AsaolaÊ tr izk AahoÊ I rest my case!!! Beti Wednesday, July 02, 2003 - 1:58 pm:      pNa p`amaaiNak TIka maÜGama AsaUca kXaI XaktoÆ baLjaÜrIcaa saMbaMQa yaotÜ kuzoÆ TIka hI TIka Asato.. kivata vaacaNao hI baLjaÜrI nasaola tr TIka vaacaNaM kXaI AsaolaÆ hÜ malaa imaLalyaa AXaa inaBaI-D p`itiËyaa ... pNa iktI vaoLa %yaacabarÜbar ho Asao ivanaÜd eokavao laagalaoÆ p`Xna sarcasm caa naahIca.. sabagaÜlaMkarpNaacaa Aaho.. AaiNa yaahI pÜsTnausaar sava- jabaabadarI kvaIMcaI AaiNa TIkakar yaa savaa-Mvar dXaaMgauLo ]rlaolaa .. tovha maI gaPp basaavao ho Kro.. naahI baa.. ]laT maI toca saaMgato ik Aahoca sensitivity tr tI sensibly vaapra.. inayama Ô> kvaIMnaa TIkakar AinaÉw punava-sau.. ho maa~ mast Aaho.. calaa AapNa AajapasaUna iXaMgao maÜDUna yaa KÜMDat saamaIla hÜNaar... hsaNaaro hsaUhI XakNaar naahIt karNa maga maI kvaiya~I kuzo AsaonaÆ savaa-t XaovaTIcaa ha sahanauBaUtIcaa mau_a kuzo AalaaÆ maI tÜ maaMDlaolaa naahI. tI kivata inavvaL romanticism Asaola.. pNa %yaa eka kivatova$na sava- ihtgaujacyaa djyaa-var kXaI comment hÜNaar to [qaoca pha. itqao saaro icaDIcaUp² sagaLIkDo iXatava$na Baatacaa inayama AaiNa trI AamhI naIr xaIr ivavaokI rajahMsa... sorry for the sarcasm... but it has resulted from elsewhere! Ashishchaskar Wednesday, July 02, 2003 - 2:22 pm:      I am resting my case with due respect to all poets/critics on Maayboli. Mvelanka Wednesday, July 02, 2003 - 2:33 pm:      kivata kaya ikMvaa itcyaavarcaI TIka kayaÊ ikMvaa itcaI p`XastI kayaÊ kXaalaa gaMBaIrpNao manaavar Gyaayacao AaiNa kaya falatU mhNaUna saÜDUna Vayacao to vaacaNaara manaÜmana zrvatca AsatÜ. ZÜMgaIpNaa iktIhI saÜMga AaNalao trI far kaL lapUna rahat naahI. AaiNa p`amaaiNakpNaacaa Aadr sava-ca jaNa manaÜmana krIt Asatat. jyaaMcyaa kivata caaMgalyaa AsatatÊ %yaaMnaI ZÜMgaI TIkakaraMcao ³AaiNa stuitpazkaMcaohI´ ilaihNao [tko manaavar Gao}na Aaplyaa inaima-tIvar duYpirNaama hÜ} dovaU nayaoÊ Asao malaa vaaTto. Ajjuka Wednesday, July 02, 2003 - 6:29 pm:      beti tuzi concern mala patali pan mala sang constructive criticism ha maayboli sarakhay houshi forum madhe possible aahe ka? nukatach aaplaach vaad zala hota prasiddhi etc ya vishayavar tyala dharun mi houshi ha shabd vaparatey. tumhi 4-5 jan sodalat tar pramanik pane kelelya tikela samore jane jamate ka sagalyanna? tuch ek udaharn mala dile hotes ekada. eka 'x' maaybolikarala jevha tu sangitles ki tuzya kavitanmadhe shabdanchi aatashabaji khup asate tevha tyane dilele neo-romanticist uttar ch ghena udaharanadakhal. jar ithe konala honest criticism nakoy tar to yeilach kashala? mala anek kavitanvar anekada kahi mhanavese vatate and its not always 100% goody goody pan mi mhanat nahi karan mag tu swatala kon samajates ase mhanayala maaybolikar tayar asatat. mi ghabarat nahi pan i have had it with these people who has no clue abt consrtuctive criticism whatsoever. mi fakt kahich lokanna honest opinion dete bakichyanna anullekh. Ithe shakya nahiye constructive criticism sarakhi goshta. tyamule mazyasarakhe kavita paadanare tech karat rahanr. mag tumhi 4-5 jananni changlya kavita lihilyat tarihi ya lokanchyamule tavali hot rahanar. It is not fair at all pan tarihi.... katha ni kadambarichya babatit ase vinod hot nahit he manya aahe ni tithe sadhya je kathanche pik aaley tyala kahi arth nahiye he sagale manya aahe tarihi.... AC, kuthalihi tika hi poornapane kalakrutivar avalambun asatehc ase mhananyat tu khup gallat karatoyas.... aho roopam aho dhvaneem karanare kiti jan aahet aaj maaybolivar ni ekandarit samjatach... tu pan manya karashil na.. kavita pramanik aahe mhanun tika pramanik aahe yala chhed denare udaharan tula kavitanchya BB var attahi disel... Dr Ashutosh chi kavita ni tyavarachi 1-2 daat kadhayachet kadhi yeu ashi keleli comment... koni keley te tithe jaunach bagha... ajun ek assumption ki pramanik tikakar asane... maaybolichya babtit te khup rare aahe. ajun ek ki pramanik kavinna yogya pratisaad milalay he je tu mhanatos tyabaddal... vaa chhan, sundar, apratim ha pratisaad yogya ahe ase vatate? talking abt constructive criticism... are these words capable of CC? no they are not. poorna jababdari hi kavichi kadhich nasate. ti aasvadakachi hi asate itar kuthlyahi kalakrutipramane. aasvadakane swatachi kshamata vadhavanyacha prayatn ka karu naye? baki kahi asel nidan ya babtit tari mi eka vyaktila credit dein jine mala anekada kavitechya rasagrahanasambandhi pustake sang ase vicharale hote. ok pustake vachun he ghadatech ase nahi pan at least talamal tari mahatvachi hoti... aso... Mvelanka Wednesday, July 02, 2003 - 6:57 pm:      malaa ek saaMgaaÊ kivatoba_la vaašT mat ilaihNaara Ap`amaaiNak ksaa AsaolaÆ mau_ama KÜTa KÜTa vaašTpNaa kÜNa kXaalaa krIlaÆ haMÊ eKada caaMgalao baÜlat Asaola tr to Ap`amaaiNak AsaNyaacaI Xa@yata trI AahoÊ karNa KÜTo KÜTo caaMgalao baÜlaNyaamaagao kahI svaaqa- AsaNyaacaI Xa@yata trI Aaho. qaÜD@yaatÊ caaMgaulapNaa ³eKado vaoLosa´ ZÜMgaI AsaU Xakola pNa vaašTpNaa ZÜMgaI ksaa Asaola ÆÆ ³caaMgaulapNaa p`%yaokvaoLI ZÜMgaI AsatÜ Asao maI mhNaalaolaÜ naahI AaiNa tsao malaa mhNaavayaacao naahI.´ Nirakar Wednesday, July 02, 2003 - 8:18 pm:      Aaja kala maaybaÜilakr Ôrca Baa}k Jaalaolao idsatayat. iTko ba_la maaJao mat jyaa xaiNa kivata p`isaw hÜto ³saa[T var iknvaa [tr maQyamatuna´ %ya xaNaI it piblak caI hÜtoÊ %yaÙ pihjao tsao to %yaa kivatovar ³pyaa-yaanao kiva var´ iTka karitlaÊ No one should feel bad about that. saaQaI gaÜYT AahoÊ eKid vyai> jyaa xaiNa saava-jainak ³ leader, artist etc ´ hÜtat %ya xaiNa to iTkolaa pNa samaÜr jaatat AaiNa %ya.Aa %yaat kaihca vaaTt naih maga maaybaÜila kr-ina tir ka seriously GyaavaoÆ MF Husain var mhatacaa-L vagaOro iTka krNaaro kaya kmaI AahotÆ pNa tÜ pihjao toca krt AsatÜ. Cricketrs var hatat bat na Gaotlaolaoca jaast iTka krtat %yaat maga [qalao kiva pNa AalaotÊ toMvha kuzo gaolaa hÜta raQaa sauta tuJaa Qama-Æ Asao ivacarvaosao vaaTto qaÜD\@yaat kvaIM pihjao tsao ilahvaoÊ itkkrnao pihjao tsao ilahvao ]igaca saonsaÜr kÉ nayao. Disclaimer: Auther of this post here by affirm that No intentional personal attack was intended at the time of writting this post. Auther also expresses his apology for not taking serious efforts in learning mingarji. The post is bilingual and not confirmed to so called pure marathi has nothing to do with pride of Marathi or didn't want to hurt naybody who likes to see posting in Marathi*. *Marathi: A language spoken in central part of India, Horses from this region used to vist Atak for drinking water in old days. This languge has many dilects and all are pure as per each regional local univercites. Saurabh Wednesday, July 02, 2003 - 8:47 pm:      inarakarÊ mahoXaÊ baoTIcaa mau_a pUNa-pNao vaogaLa Aaho. jar malaa itcaa mau_a kLlaa Asaola tr itcaa Aaxaop ha janarlaašjD ³sabagaÜlaaMkarÊ ha Xabd malaahI navaIna hÜta²´ TIkovar Aaho. kivakoMd`It TIka vhavaI Asao itcao mhNaNao Aaho. AaiNa jao pUNa-pNao barÜbar Aaho. hÜtM kaya kI TIkotlaa naomakopNaa kaZUna Taklaa kI maga TIkakaraMvar kahIca inaba-MQa ]rt naahI. karNa kÜNatahI kvaI %yaa iTkakaralaa kÜNatoca p`Xna ivaca$ Xakt naahI. ivacaarlao Asata ‘tuJyaa kivataMba_la baÜlalaÜca navhtܒ AXaa kaKa var krNaM saÜpM hÜtM. tumhI eKaVa klaaÌtIvar AaiNa %yaacyaa klaakaravar naomakI TIka krayacaM baMQana paLlaMt mhNajao maga maa~ KrÜKrca tumhalaa %yaa klaaÌtIvar ivacaar krayacaI paLI yaoto karNa saMBaavya ]laT p`XnaaMnaa ]<aro doNyaacaI jabaabadarI gaL\yaat yao}na pDto² AaiNa malaa vaaTto naomakI hIca jabaabadarI TaLNyaasaazI sabagaÜlaaMkar TIka bahutok laÜk krtanaa idsatat. Beti Wednesday, July 02, 2003 - 11:29 pm:      dhanyawaad saurabh ..... couldnt be more precise! Bee Thursday, July 03, 2003 - 4:09 am:      Nirakar .. bhauuk nawhe bhawook asa shabd aahe to :-) charcha khup chhan chalali aahe. Giriraj Thursday, July 03, 2003 - 11:52 am:      paMcaT iTka krNaaáyaaMnaa dÜYa do}na kahI ]pyaÜgnaahI karNa AaXaIXa mhNatÜ %yaap`maaNaoca maaJaahI AnauBava Aaho kI ‘kvaI ’ ha ek vaoMQaLa AaiNa vyavaaharacao štr kÜNatoca ]VÜga na yaoNaara p`aNaI AsatÜ Asao bahutokaMcao mat Asato² kivata krNao ha gauNa nasaUna ek dugaU-Naca samajalaa jaatܲ %yaamauLo maI maaJyaa kivata kQaI javaLcyaa mhTlyaa gaolaolyaa ima~aMnaahI kQaI daKvat nasatÜ...² jarI ha maaJaa vaOyai>k AnauBava Asalaa trIÊqaÜD\yaafar frkanao ha AnauBava vaOiXvak Aaho² maayabaÜilakr kvaIca yaa matalaa cauikcao zrvaU Xaktat..² karNa Aaplyaatlao kuNaIhI inaraXaotUna ikMvaa kahI kama naahI mhNaUna kivata ilahIt nasaavaot² Most of us are well qualified and working on dignified posts! ha ek mau_a malaa trI far mah%vaacaa vaaTtܲ Nvgole Friday, July 04, 2003 - 7:20 am:      igarIrajaÊ Aaplao inairxaNa AgadI barÜbar Aaho. narond` Santosh_mestry Wednesday, February 18, 2004 - 8:11 am:      maayabaaoila yaa saa[-Tlaa BaoT idlaI AaiNa malaa marazI ilahayala jamalao %yaaba_la maI maayabaaocao SatSaha ?NaI Aaho

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