sagrya, jabri! tuzya sinhachi janmakatha pan sahi aahe. arey leka pan to shevatacha sher no zeps! btw, mala don urdu shabdanche artha pahije aahet. tu sangu shakashil ka ? te shabda pudhil pramaane : mohasin, aawargi
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thanks supriya, thanks shrini!!! are shrini tula havya aslelya shabdanche artha pudhil pramane re! aawargi :- aawargi mhanje udantappu pana arthat kaslihi chinta nasne! ani mohsin mhanje shayar cha naav ahe. jya sher madhye shayar cha naav asta tya sher la 'makta' asa mhantat. mhanje thodkyat tya ghazal var tya shayar chi maktedari kiwa adhikar ahe asa yacha artha hoto. mhanje marathit kasa... 'tuka' mhane ata rahilo upkara purata! agdi tasach! btw tu jya ghazal baddal vichartoys ( ye dil ye pagal dil mere....) ti mohsin naqvi navachya shayar chi asun ghulam ali ne gayli ahe.( if i am not mistaking!) and once again thanks for the responce!
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ha ghya ankhi ek..... rusanyaas haay mazya keles tu nikami hasalis tu jarashi,ann vitalalo punha mee!
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sagar, sahi sher! pan tu dilela artha julat nahi ase vatate (ti gazal barobar aahe, infact ti aikunach mala he shabda kalale...) udaantappupana mhanaje 'aavaragardi' na ? karan 'ye dil, ye pagal dil mera, kyon buz gaya, aawaragi' madhe 'udantappupana' basat nahi. tasech mohasin baddal mhanashil tar to sher asa aahe : 'kal raat tanaha chand ko dekha tha meine khwab mein, mohasin muze raas aayegi shayad sada, awaaragi' yacha artha kasa lavayacha ?
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shrini, ya sher madhe Mohsin mhanaje don arth gheta yetat...ani hich tya lokanchi khasiyat asate... mohsin he shayar cha naav ahe ani tyacha arth generous asahi gheta yeto....
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thanks all!!!
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aali cha khara arth mahit ahey kay ? as in "Yaad rakh sikandar ke hosale to aali the Jab gaya tha duniya se dono haath khali the"
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kya baat hai!!!! mast re asamee
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ithe ha 'aali' shabd bahuda buland, motthe ya arthee aala asava. anyatha, ha shabd maanaane motthya manasansathi vaparatat urdut. e.g aalijaa.N
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sagar are maze nahiye ha sher. "Chadhta Suraj dheere dheer dhalta hai dhal jayega" ashi ek kawalli ahey tyatla ahey. bhayanak depressing song ahey chyayala....
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arey konitari tya sheracha artha sanga na, to 'Mohsin muze...' vala (mazya aadhichya posting madhe lihilay mi to).
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Shrini, Tush ne takalay bagh "mohsin" cha artha.. "generous". "aawaragi" mhanje eka thikani na thambane asa pan hota. sada bhatkat rahane. sher vachalyavar ka kon jane Raj Kapoor cha "awara hu, ya gardish me aasman ka tara hu" he aathavala gaana.
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nuktech http://www.ebazm.com/dictionary.htm ya sitevarun pudhil shabdanche artha milavale : aawaargi : loiter, waywardness mohsin : benefactor, obliging raas aanaa : to find suitable. pan tarihi tya sheracha artha 'click' zala nahi...
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Asami : ti 'chadhata suraj ..' kawali me asankhya vela aaikaliye pan lok ti ashi kaahi joshat mhanataat ki ti depressing vaatatach naahi.
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Well Gayatri it all depends...3-4 aaaikalyanantar arthakade laksh jaate ani mug depressing vatate. "Yaad rakh sikandar ke hosale to aali the Jab gaya tha duniya se dono haath khali the ....................Na uske saathi hai Ab na woh rustam hai Na ghode haathi hai Kyon .. baitha hai aaj aapni shan O shaukat par Shamma bhi nahi jalati aaj inke durbat par Sar uthake chalne wale Kab tak dhoka khayega Chadhta suraj dheere dheere dhalta hai dhal jayega " he mala tar depressing hote. Aniyatale pudhache kadve tar Hey Raam !!! "Chhin ke dault teri waqt ka chalan denge bhai .. tere do gaj kafan denge...." Nako mala pudhachya oli lihavyashahi vatat nahit.
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kahi varshanpurvi aanakhi eka udas shayarichi ashi vaat lavali hoti .. ishq mai hum tumhe kya bataaye kis kadar chot khaye huve hai .. aaj hi hamane badale hai kapade aaj hi hum nahaye huve hai ..
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Chadhata Suraj jya proper urdu kawwalichya cassete madhe aahe tya khooop terrible aahet saglyach, maut, kabar, dafan shivay dusra kahich nahi tyat. me nahich aiku shaklo laksha deun tya saglya..
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are mitranno maf kara pan apan jar marathi sher ani shayri var bollo tar jast bar hoil karan hya bb cha naav ahe 'marathi ghazal ani sher' dont mind u people plz.
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are kuthe gayab zale sagle???????
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