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Charu_ag
Tuesday, August 16, 2005 - 4:44 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

‘tu mhMjao naa Aijabaat sauQarNaar naahIsa ’ÊXaOlajaa laT@yaa ragaanao mhnaalaI.

‘baaš saahoba ÊAhÜ hoca tr vaya Aaho ibaGaDayaca’Ê ivajaya.

‘Aata pÜrkTpnaa puro. cala JaÜp AalaIya. ]Va la^ba laa naahI ka jaayaca roÆ ]Va imaTIMga Aaho maaJaIÊ sakaLI ABaI p`acaIlaa pNa lavakr jaayacaya’Ê XaOlaja jaaMBaš dot JaÜpL\yaavaÉna ]zu laagalaI.

‘imaTIMga kaya rÜja ca Aho. Aajacaa idvasa ]Va yaonaar Aaho kaƒ ivajaya hI itt@yaaca h+anao mhNaalaa.

‘hMAÊ hangover ]trlaa naahI vaaTt Ajauna²

ivajaya prt itcaa hat AÜZuna KalaI basavau laagalaaÊ ’yao naXaa ijaMdgaIBar nahI ]trogaa.‘

’AÜhܲ puro Aata Dayalaa^ga baajaI. ra~Bar Torosa varca qaaMbaayacaa ivacaar Aaho ka kayaÆ

‘tumhI baayaka mhMjao naa maulaKacyaa Arisak’Ê itcaa hat JaT\kt ivajaya naarajaInaoca mhNaalaa.

‘bar baabaa. ho baGa basalao.’

‘Aata kXaI²’

‘Aro idvasaBar pahuNyaacaI vad-L . tu hI qaklaa AsaXaIla.’

‘ek saaMga Aajacaa idvasa kuNaacaaÆ Aaplaa kI pahuNyaaMcaaƒ

‘hMÊ Aajacaa idvasa²²’ KuXaIt yaovauna XaOlajaa ivajayalaa ibalagalaI.
itcyaa laaMbasaDk kosaavaÉna hat ifrvat ivajayanao hlakoca itcyaa kpaLavar Aaplao AÜz Toklao. XaOlajaa manaÜmana sauKavalaI.

‘XaOla’
‘hM’

‘idvasa ksao pTapT sartat naahI. Asa vaaTtya jaNau kalaca BaoTlaÜya AapNa.

’hÜ roÊ baGata baGata sa<aavaIsa vaXa- JaalaI. ‘

’sa<aavaIsa vaYa-²‘

itcaa hat hatt Gaot ivajayanao ivacaarlaoÊ
’XaOlaÊ ek ivacaaÉÆ‘

’haÊ ivacaar naa .‘

’tu sauKI Aahosa naa Ƒ

’ivajyaaÊ tulaa maahIt Aaho ka ro gaolaI sa<avaIsa vaYao- tu haca p`Xna malaa ivacaartÜyasa‘. itnao %yaacyakDo paht ]<ar idlao.

’AaiNa tu hI malaa hoca ]<ar dotIyaosa.‘

qaÜDo saavaÉna basat %yaacyaa ]javaa hat Aaplyaa dÜnhI hatat Ga+ pkDuna XaOlajaanao qaÜDo gaMBaIr hÜt ivacaarlao
’AaiNa maI ]<ar badlalao tr kaya krXaIlaƑ AaiNa tI imaXkIla hsalaI

’*mmmaÊ krNaar trI kaya mhnaaÆ qaÜDa ]XaIr Jaalaaya.‘Ê ivajayanao hI itt@yaaca idlaKulaasa pNao dad idlaI.

’AroÊ kaya ro vaoD\yaasaarKo p`Xna ivacaartÜsaÆ saaMga kaya kmaI kolasa tu maaJyasaazI. sagaL kahI imaLalaya. saÜnyaasaarKa saMsaar AahoÊ Aapla Cana Gar AhoÊ dÜna gaÜMDsa maula Aahot. AaiNa kaya hva Asat ro² ‘Ê %yaacyaa KaMVavar DÜko zovat XaOlajaa mhNaalaI.
’]laT kQaI kQaI malaaca vaaTt..‘

’kaya vaaTtƑ

’ik tuJyaa saar#yaa smaaT- AaiNa ska^lar maulaalaa %yaavaoLI kuNaIhI doKNaI maulagaI imaLalaI AsatI. maaJyaasaar#yaa saamaanya..‘


’XaOla ʑ caohra AÜMjaLIt Gaovauna itcyaa paNaIdar DÜL\yaat paht ivajaya hrvauna gaolaa hÜtaÊ ’malaa kuNaIhI nakÜ hÜtI.
jaoMvha tu malaa BaoTlaIsa toMvha maaJyaajavaL kaya hÜtÆ naÜkrIcaa p<aa naahIÊ GarcaI pirisqatI baotacaIca. f> tu malaa saaqa idlaIsa. saMsaartlao iktItrI caTko tulaa maaJyaamauL saÜsaavao laagalao. kQaIhI malaa ekT pDu idla naahIsa kI tËar kolaI naahIsa. ra~ ra~ jaagalaIsa Ê maaJaa psaara Aavarlaasa AgadI toMvha pasauna to Aaja pya-Mt ....

‘ivajauÊ Aata puro ro. d`uYT laagaola maaJyaa sauKalaa ’ %yaacyaa AÜzaMvar XaOlajaanao hat zovalaa.

‘e Kr Kr saaMgaÊ kaya pa(lasa ga maaJyaatƒ itcaa hat hatat Gaovauna %yaanao ivacaarlao.

‘Kr saaMgauÆ AgadI Kr saaMgau kaya AavaDla tuJyaatƒ qaÜDsa AMga JaTkT XaOlajaanao ivacaarlao.

‘hÜ AgadI Kr.’

‘tuJyaa hatcaI ka^fI’ XaOlajaa imaiXklaPNao mhNaalaI.

‘XaOlauÊ tu mhNajao naa’ ivajayanao naaTkIpNao vaakuna maujara kolaaÊ
‘jaÜ hukuma maoro hujaur. Aa<aa Gaovauna yaotÜ .’
Aaina gauNagauNat payaáyaa ]tÉna ikcana kDo gaolaa.

XaOlajaa svatÁXaIca ivacaar kÉ lagalaIÊ sa<aavaIsa vaYao- JaalaI BaoTuna. pNa jaNau kahI kalaca GaDlyap`maaNao sagaL vaaTtya. tI saa^ilaD sToT caI la^ba. itqaoca AaplaI BaoT JaalaI. dÜGaohI gauMtt gaolaÜ. AapNahI nakLt JaÜkuna idla svatÁla %yaacyaat. kaya paihla %yaacyaatÆ sagaL\yaanaa hvaI Asato tXaI AayauXyatlaI sao@yaurITIÊ saoÔ F,yaucarÆ na@kIca naahI. AayauXyaatlaI sauK imaLtIla ka to maaiht navht . f> sauKI AayauXyaacaI Ka~I hÜtI.

GarI sauÉvaatIlaa kuNaIhI tyaar nasatanaa ivajayaXaIca lagnaacaa h+ Qarlaolaa. XaovaTI Aaš baabaa naI hI ivarÜQa saÜDuna jaavayaalaa isvakarlao. sauÉvaatIcao sT/gala cao idvasaÊ ekmaokanaa samajauna Gaot kaZlaolao to xaNaÊAašMcaa Aajaar. sTayapoMD maQyao Gar caalaonaaÊ maga ivajayaNao iXakvaNyaa Gyaayalaa sauÉvaat kolaI. Gar Aaina la^ba maQyao AaplaI hÜNaarI QaavapLÊ idvasa Bar qaklyaanaMtr ra~ ra~ jaagauna kolaolao poprcao TayaipMgaÊ maga yauinavai-sa-TItlaI naÜkrI. ivajayacao vaaZto kamaÊ AiBajaIt p`acaI cao Aagamana. %yaaMcyaa pazImaagao QaavaNaoÊ %yaaMcao baalapna AapNahI AnauBavaNao.

maula maÜzI hÜt phtanaa hI ivalaxana AanaMd imaLtÜ naahI² dupT\yaat maavaNaarI tI [valaI [valaI ipla Aata 20 - 22 vaYaa-caI JaalaI. Aapaplyaa AakaXaat ]Du laagalaI. Aaja hI paKaraMcyaa icavaicavaaTanao Gar ksa hrkuna jaat. %yaaMcyaatlao Ésavao fugavaoÊ vaiDlaaMsaarKaca ]mada svaBaava. Aaja Kasa mammaI ppacaa A^inavasa-rIcaI icamaurD\yaaMcaI paTI-. sagaLca ksa kahI xaNaat GaDlyasaarK vaaTtya.

hlaka JaÜka Gaot XaOlajaa Bau%kLat hrvauna gaolaI hÜtI.

‘Gyaa ma^DmaÊ garma garma ka^fI’Ê ivajayanao ka^fIcaa T/o TIpa^ya var zovalaa tXaI XaOlajaa Baanaavar AalaI.

ka^fIcaa ek GaÜT Gaovauna qaÜDI trtrI AalaI.
‘*mmnaÊ ka^fI kravaI tr tuca. AajahI cavaIt kaDIcaa frk naahI. Aaz\vatya la^ba maQyao rÜja saMQyaakaLI tu ka^fI krayacaasa.’

‘malaa qaÜDca maahIt hÜt kI inavvaL yaa ka^fIsaazI tu ca@k maaJyaaXaI lagna krXaIla.’ itlaa icaDvat ivajayanao ka^fIcao GaÜT Gaotlaa.

‘Aro tuJyaa hatcaI ka^fI GaotlaI toMvhaca zrvalaÊ lagna krayaca tr yaacyaaXaIca. ka^fI [%kI caaMgalaI krtÜyaÊ tr svayaMpakhI na@kIca caaMgalaa krt Asanaar. iDla kahI vaašT navhtÊ inadana maaJyaasaazI trI.’ %yaacyaakDo paht XaOlajaa KT\yaaL pNao mhNaalaI.

XaOlajaacao vaa@ya saMpto na saMpto tÜca ivajaya laa zsaka laagalaa.
‘Aro hLu.’
‘Aga tuJyaa svayaMpaka vaÉna Aazvalaʒ zsa@yaamauLo DÜL\yaat Aalaolao paNaI pusat ivajaya mhNaalaa

‘Aaz\vatyaÊ lagna hÜvauna dÜna caar idvasaca Jaalao hÜto. pahuNao nauktoca gaolao hÜto. maavaXaI Aaina maamaI f> hÜ%yaa. lagnaanaMtr pihlyaaMdaca evaQaa maÜkLa vaoL imaLalaa hÜta. tu maaJyaajavaL AalaIsa AaiNa hLuca kuXaIt iXarlaIsa. ’


‘tulaa naa nakÜ to laxaat raht’Ê evaZ\yaa vaYaa-naI doiKla %yaa AazvaNaInao XaOlajaa gaÜD laajalaI.

‘Aga ksaa ivasaroNaÆ tulaa pihlyaaMdaca evaZ javaLuna paht hÜtÜÊ AaiNa tu AgadI laaDat yaovauna ivacaarlasaÊ ’AhÜ varNa ksa krayacaÆ‘Ê AaiNa tÜ maÜzmaÜz\yaanao hsau laagalaa.

’Aro jara hLu hsa naaÊ maula jaagaI v(ayacaI. dmalaIt Aaja idvasaBar‘Ê
XaOlajaa Aaplao hsau Aavart ksao basao mhNaalaI. ’ Aaš mhNaalyaaÊ Aga ]Va jara lavakr ]zuna varNa Baat laavatosa kaÆmaaJaI GaabargauMDI ]DalaI . maga kaya krNaarÊ kuNaalaa ivacaarNaarƑ

ka^fI saMpvauna kp iTpa^yavar zovat XaOlajaa mhNaalaI.’AašnaI Krca Kup samajauna Gaotla. pÜTcyaa maulaIsaarKa jaIva laavalaa. ‘ XaOlajaacao DÜLo nakLt paNaavalao.

’ivajauÊ AašMca krNyaat maI kuzo kmaI tr pDlao naahI roÆ‘Ê DÜko %yaacyaa KaMVavar zovat XaOlajaanao ivacaarlao.

’XaOlaÊ Aga tuJyaakDuna jaovaZ Xa@ya hÜt tovaZ tu kolasa. kQaI maahorca kÝtuk kola naahIsa kI svatÁcao laaD kÜD kÉna Gaotlao naahIsa. evaZ\yaa maÜz\yaa GarcaI maulagaI Aaplyaa Garat kXaI rahNaar Asa itlaa saarK vaaTayaca. pNa tu kQaI jaaNaIva kÉna idlaI naahIsa.‘

’ivajauÊ Aro AašMcyaa svaBaavaamauLoca tr sagaL jamauna Aala. maahorI dÜna caar tasaaMsaazI jarI gaolao trI jaIva AašMkDoca laagalaolaa Asaayacaa.

‘hÜÊ Aazvatya naaÊ ekda ra~I dÜna vaajata mahoXalaa GarI saÜDayalaa laavala hÜtsa. ’

‘Aro %yaavaÉna mahoXadada AaiNa vaihnaI AjaunahI maaJaI caoYTa krtat. ’

‘ek kLt naahIÊ tumha maulaInaa maahorI gaolyaavar saasarI prtayacaI evaZI AÜZ ka AsatoÆ ’

‘ tumha puÉYaanaa naahI kLayaca Aamha baayakaMca mana. baašca mana GaarIsaarK Asat. kuzohI jaavaudoÊ iktIhI ]Mca BararI maaÉdotÊ najar maa~ ipllaavar AaiNa GarT\yaavar Asato. GarT\yaacaI }ba Ê %yaa BaIMtItlaI naatIÊ %yaa saavalaItlaa ijavhaLa Ê sagaL sagaL itca Asat. itcaa vaIk pa^šMT AaiNa saamaqya- hI toca ’

BaÉna Aalaolao DÜLo AaiNa mana saavart XaOlajaa ]zu laagalaI.

‘XaOla’Ê ivajayanao itlaa punha KalaI basavalao. itcyaa maaMDIvar Aapla DÜk zovalao. %yaacyaa kurL\yaa kosaatuna baÜT ifrvatÊ XaOlajaa hI svatÁcyaaca ivacaarat hrvalaI.

AakaXaakDo baGat ivajaya mhNalaaÊ ‘XaOlauÊ malaa tulaa kahI saaMgaayacaya.’
‘baÜla naaʒ %yaacyaa DÜL\yaat paht XaOlajaa mhNaalaI.

itcaI najar caukvat ivajaya ]zuna basalaa.

‘XaOlaÊ kQaI kQaI vaaTtÊ maI ... mhNajao....’ kaya baÜlaavao to na saucauna ivajaya XaaMt basalaa.

‘Aro kaya JaalaÆ kahI ToMXana Aaho kaÆ bar vaaTt naahI kaÆ ’

‘naahIÊ maI zIk Aaho’Ê itcyaa hatatuna Aaplaa hat maagao Gaot tÜ mhNaalaa.

‘maga kaya Jaalaƒ
‘malaa tulaa kahI saaMgaayacao AahoÊ pNa kXaI kuzuna sauÉvaat kÉ toca kLonaasa Jaalaya’Ê najar KalaI JaukvaIt %yaanao ]<ar idlao.
%yaacyaa pazIvaÉna hat ifrvat XaOlajaa %yaalaa QaIr do} laagalaI.

‘tulaa naMidnaI AazvatIyaÆ pazk saraMcaI sTuDMT. [qao ka^nÔrMsa saazI AalaI hÜtI. hÜsTolavar saÜya JaalaI naahI mhnauna AaplyaakDoca raihlaI.

’hMÊ itca kayaƑ

’ malaa tuJyaaiXavaaya kuNaaba_lahI vaaTla naahI pNa f> ekdaca .....‘
XaOlajaa nao AaplaI najar dusarIkDo vaLvalaI.

’f> kahI xaNaÊ itcyaakDo paihlyaanaMtr vaaTla kI jar tuJyaa jaagaI tI...... ‘ maana KalaI Gaalauna ivajaya ksaabasaa mhNaalaa.

%yaa inarva XaaMttot tÜ ekaMt baosaur Jaalaa. kahItrI ivaskTtyaÊ kahItrI hatatuna inasaTlaya hI jaaNaIvaca jaIvaGaoNaI AsatoÊ naahI ² vaYaa-nauvaYaa-caI naatI xaNaat AnaÜLKI hÜtat.


%yaa Baosaurtolaa Cod dot XaOlaajaanao idGa- Xvaasa Gaotlaa.
’ivajauÊ AaiNa AazvatyaÊ %yaanaMtr AapNa kahI idvasa kÜlhapurlaa gaolaÜ....‘ DÜL\yaatIla paNaI inakranao qaÜpvaIt XaOlajaa ]zlaI.

’mhNajao....‘ ivajayahI itcyaa pazÜpaz kzD\yaaXaI gaolaa.

’hÜ ivajayaÊ tulaa itcyaaba_la kaya vaaTla to kLla hÜt malaa...‘Ê XaOlajaacao DÜLohI itlaa dgaa dovau laagalao.

’malaa maaf krÊ XaOlauÊ maaJyaa manaat Asaa ivacaar yaalaa nakÜ hÜta‘Ê
ivajaya itcyaa samaÜr ApraQyaasaarKa ]Baa raihlaa.

’ivajayaÊ naMidnaI saar#yaa sauMdr AaiNa bauwImaana maulaIbadla kuNaalaa AakYa-Na vaaTnaar naahI² AaiNa Aasa>I f> tulaaca vaaTt hÜtI Asa naahI tr itlaahI tuJyaaba_la.....‘

ivajayanao XaOlajaalaa javaL AÜZlao.
’tulaa kaya vaaTla Asaola.... tu kahIca ka baÜlalaI naahIsaƑ

%yaacao hat saÜDvat XaOlajaa k+\yaalaa rolauna ]BaI raihlaI.

’ivajayaÊ %yaa kahI inasaT%yaa xaNaaMcaI KuNa malaa AayauXyaBar vaagavaayacaI navhtI. maI kahI icaDuna baÜlalao AsatoÊ BaaMDlao AsatoÊ tu p`%yau<ar idla AsatÊ Xabdanao Xabd vaaZlao Asato. AaiNa AapNa f> ekmaokaMcao lacako tÜDlao Asato. maga AayauXya %yaa jaKmaa BarNyaatca gaola Asat. ‘
%yaacyaa DÜL\yaalaa DÜLa iBaDvat XaOlajaa baÜlau laagalaI.
’svatÁcaa Apmaana igaLt manaatlaI iktItrI vaadL maI XaaMt kolaI.
mhNaunaca naMtr tulaa Gaovauna kÜlhapurlaa gaolaoÊ %yaa vaatavarNaatuna baahor. tulaa iktI ApraQaI vaaTtya ho kLt hÜt malaa. maga tulaa TÜcaunaÊ baÜlauna malaa ptI ­ p%naIca sauMdr piva~ naat ivad`up navht kryaca. AaiNa naa%yaaMcaI ksaÜTI AXyaa xaNaIca tr laagat Asato. tumha dÜGaanaa jao vaaTla to xaiNak hÜt. %yaa xaullak gaÜYTIcaI cacaa- kÉna Ê vaad Gaalauna %yaalaa mah%va Vayaca navht. kuNaacyaahI eka caukImauL Aaplao puZcao iktItrI sauMdr xaNa ka Gaalavaayacao ² ]gaaca AapNaca gaazI maaÉna gauMta kÉna tÜ saÜDvat basaNyalaa kahI Aqa- AsatÜ kaÆ.

manaatla AaBaaL BaÉna Aala.
‘ivajauÊ Aaja tulaa ho p`amaaNaIkpNao saaMgaavasa vaaTla yaatca sagaL AalaÊ AaiNa nasat saaMigatlasa trI malaa kLla hÜt. navara baayakÜca naat ho kacaosaarK AsatÊ svacCÊ inatLÊ pardXa-kÊ ittkca naajauk. %yaavar AÜrKDa pDayalaa ek xaNa hI purosaa AsatÜ. maga kahIhI kraÊ iktIhI p`ya%na kra tDa jaatÜ pNa AÜrKDa jaat naahI. malaa ha AÜrKDahI nakÜya AaplyaamaQyao.’
%yaacyaa papNyaaMcyaa kDaMvarcao paNaI baÜTanaI Alagat iTpt XaOlajaa %yaacyaa imazIt ivasaavalaI.
AakaXaatla caaMdNa hI jara jaastca ]jaLla.

samaaPt







Moodi
Tuesday, August 16, 2005 - 5:10 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

caaÉ Xabdca Aazvat naahIyaot
[tko sauMdr tu ksao ilahu Xaktosa gaÆ ekmaokaMmaQaIla hI ivaXvaasapuNa- naa%yaacaI AÜZ Ana ho samajautdar p`omaca kdacaIt maaNasaaMnaa AiQakaiQak javaL AaNat. Ap`itma ² AXaIca ilaiht jaaÊ qaaMbau nakÜsa.qaÜD@yaat ilaihlaIsa pNa ]%kTtonao ilaihlaIsa


Sampada_oke
Tuesday, August 16, 2005 - 5:25 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

caa$ Ê Cana jamalaIyao kqaa . XaOlajaacyaa BaavanaaMnaa ]<ama Xabdbaw kolaMsa . vaacataxaNaIca kqaa manaalaa BaavalaI . :-)


Pha
Tuesday, August 16, 2005 - 5:34 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

caa$Ê caaMgalaI maaMDlaIsa kqaa² Cana.

Sanghamitra
Tuesday, August 16, 2005 - 5:51 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

caa$ kqaa AitXaya lahana time span maQao GaDNaarI pNa naomakI ...

Prashantkhapane
Tuesday, August 16, 2005 - 6:11 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

As usual, fantastic work. To me a story/writing is successgul if it creates a 'picture' (of the setting/backgroud, surrounding, characters without face) in my mind. Your style does that.
Keep it up.
Prashant

Aj_onnet
Tuesday, August 16, 2005 - 6:32 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

caa$Ê ekdma mast. Cana ²

Gandhar
Tuesday, August 16, 2005 - 6:39 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

caaÉÊ CÜTI pNa Cana Aaho kqaa.. :-)

Nalini
Tuesday, August 16, 2005 - 7:05 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

caaÉ kqaa AitXaya sauroK Aaho. AaiNa Aqa-puNa-.

Manee
Tuesday, August 16, 2005 - 7:22 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

Cana²²² .... .. ..

Somesh
Tuesday, August 16, 2005 - 8:09 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

good one, short and sweet...!!

Divya
Tuesday, August 16, 2005 - 8:18 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

caaÉ Kupca jamauna AalaIyao kqaaÊ AgadI DÜL\yaasamaÜr GaDto Aaho Asa vaaTt. Keep it up.

Apm1277
Tuesday, August 16, 2005 - 10:23 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

kathaa khoop chaan aahe !!

Hems
Tuesday, August 16, 2005 - 5:19 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

caa$ , Cana ilaihlaIya kqaa .. AaiNa naoTka Aaho XaovaT ! good job!

Sayonara
Tuesday, August 16, 2005 - 6:25 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

Cana Aaho gaÜYT. short and sweet .

Kmayuresh2002
Tuesday, August 16, 2005 - 8:27 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

caaÉÊkqaa Cana vaaTlaI vaacaayalaa.. navara baayakÜmaQaIla naato ksao Asaavao to qaÜD@yaat pNa naomakopNaanao dXa-valao Aahosa

Bee
Tuesday, August 16, 2005 - 10:15 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

caa$Ê caaMgalaI maaMDlaIsa kqaa.

Manmouji
Tuesday, August 16, 2005 - 11:35 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

caa$Ê malaa kqaa AavaDlaI pNa ek gaÜYT pTlaI naahI. saaMigatlaI tr caalaola kaÆ naahI sagaLo caaMgalao mhNat Asatanaa ho mhNajao cauka kaZNaara ivaËut zrNyaacaI iBatI vaaTto.

Rupali_rahul
Wednesday, August 17, 2005 - 2:20 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

caaÉ kqaa tr Agaidca inama-L Aaho AaNaI Asa samajautdarpNaa p`%yaoknao Aaplyaa AMgaI baaNavalaa tr Kupca naatI iTku Xaktat.


Charu_ag
Wednesday, August 17, 2005 - 2:33 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

p`itsaadaba_la savaa-Mcao manaapasauna AaBaar. tumacyaa savaa-Mcyaa evaZ\yaa Cana Cana AiBap`ayaaMmauLca tr ilahavasa vaaTt.

manamaÝjaIÊAhÜ maI Aa<aa kuzo ilahayacaI QaDpD krto Aaho. %yaamauLo tumhI cauka saaMigatlyaa tr malaaca madt hܚla. tumacao suggestions AvaXya saaMgaa.


Manmouji
Wednesday, August 17, 2005 - 3:24 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

hI malaa na BaavalaolaI baaba Aaho. kqaocyaa [tr sava- details maQyao dÜGaaMmaVo ivatuYT yao] XakNaara p`saMga tovaZa serious Asaavaa Asa kqaa vaacatanaa vaaTlao naahI. %yaavarcyaa reactions vaÉna kaihtrI BayaMkr GaDuna gaolao Aaho Asao laxaat yaoto. (at maI (a p`%yaxa GaTnaocyaa seriousness ba_la baÜlat nasaUna tI GaTnaa jyaa p`karo kqaot yaoto %yaap`karo tI tovhZI serious vaaTt naahI. pNa baakI sagaLo ]<ama.

Milya
Wednesday, August 17, 2005 - 4:37 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

caa$ Cana. tuJaI XaOlaI AgadI natural vaaTto

Aqa-hI Cana kqaocaa

va. pu. naI mhNalyaap`maaNao saMsaarat ek xaNa BaaLNyaacaa baakI saaMBaaLNyaacao


Ramvn
Wednesday, August 17, 2005 - 4:47 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

kqa Ôar sauroK AavaDila Aaplyalaa.

Badbadi
Wednesday, August 17, 2005 - 5:57 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

charu, short & sweet :-)

Limbutimbu
Wednesday, August 17, 2005 - 6:06 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

AajacaI maaJaI pÜsT na ]Nao na}²
caa$Ê Cana ilaihlaI hosa gaÜYTÊ XaovaT mastca²
Asa javaLpasa sagaLIkDca hÜt² kbaula krNyaaca QaaDsa Ana kolaolyaa kbaulaIba_la saamBaaLuna GaoNyaacaI vaR<aI maa~ fa||r kmaI AaZLto
maaNasa cauktatÊ cauku Xaktat ho maanya kÉna caukancao AÜrKaDo manaat ka baaLgaavaoÆ AaNaI maaNasao mhNajao jaIvaaBaavaacyaa naa%yaacaI maaNasaoÊ kÜNa Xa~U naahIt²
tr hI gaÜYT ekdma pTlaI²
:-)

Limbutimbu
Wednesday, August 17, 2005 - 7:35 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

AajacaI maaJaI pÜsT na. ]Nao Aaz kI saat²
manamaÝjaIÊ tumacyaa dÜnhI pÜsT vaacalyaa²
phIlyaa pÜsT maQalaI tumacaI Xanka rast ho² malaa %yaacaa AnauBava ho²
dusaáyaa pÜsT maQao tumhI mhNata tsao %yaa isairyasa GaTnaocao AiQak tpXaIlaat vaNa-na kolao Asata ...
1. kqaocyaa maUL gaaByaavar mhNajaoca jaÜ AaXayaÊ jao t%va laoiKkolaa vya> krIt rhayaca ho %yaakDca laxa ]Duna pnQara vaIsa vaYaa-npuvaI-cyaa GaTnaovar iKLlao Asato. mauL ]_oXa tI GaTnaa kaya kXaI hÜtI yaaca vaNa-na krNyaacaa nasauna AXaa GaTnaomauL inamaa-Na hÜNaarI pirisqatI kXaI vaogaL\yaa pwtInao hataLta yaoto ho laoiKkolaa daKvaayacao AsalyaamauL %yaa GaTnaocao gaaimBaya- daKvaayacyaa fndat laoKIka pDlaI nasaavaI
2. sa<aavaIsa vaYaa-nacyaa sansaarIk jaIvanaa nantr hÜt Asalaolyaa sanvaadat %yaa tXaa GaTnaocaa ]llaoK yaošla tovha tÜ saÝmyapNaoca yaoNao Apoixat hoÊ tsaa tÜ yaoNaar nasaola tr p%naIcyaa iknvaa pitcyaa saamaÜpcaaracyaa sanvaadasa Aqa-ca na rahuna XaovaTcao inaYkYa-ÉpI ivavaocana Aqa-hIna hÜvau Xaklao Asato

cau. Bau. Va. Gyaa.

maa~ tumacaI Xanka rast ho² majakuracyaa laambaIca banQana nasat tr tumhI mhNata tsa %yaa p`sangaalaahI vaoToja dota Aala Asat Asa malaa vaaTt²
bahutok laoiKkocaa ]_oXa %yaa p`sangaacaa kovaL ]llaoK krNyaacaaca AsaavaaÊ %yaasa vaoToja dovauna %yaacaI ikmmat vaaZivaNao itlaa Apoixat nasaavao²
:-)

Rahulphatak
Wednesday, August 17, 2005 - 7:47 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

Charu_ag Ê kqaa Cana ² XaOlaI AgadI sahja ina AÜGavatI Aaho. XaovaTcaI kacaocaI ]pmaa KUp AavaDlaI ²

Rachana_barve
Wednesday, August 17, 2005 - 1:25 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

caa$ mastcaÊ Cana ilaihtosa AgadI

Seema_
Wednesday, August 17, 2005 - 1:28 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

Cana ... Ajauna ilahI

Gautamvc
Wednesday, August 17, 2005 - 2:37 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

C_ag , good one .. ..

Manmouji
Thursday, August 18, 2005 - 1:10 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

ilambau tulaa maola TaklaI Aaho.

Charu_ag
Thursday, August 18, 2005 - 3:10 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

ilaMbauÊ kqaolaa maÜja@yaa AiNa samap-k Xabdat maaMDlyaaba_la tuJao Kasa AaBaar.

manamaÝjaIÊ tumacaI XaMka rast Aaho. Aata kuNaalaa kÜNatI gaÜYT iktI serious vaaTavaI ha jyaacaa %yaacaa p`Xna AsatÜ. [qao hI GaTnaa mah%vaacaI nasauna %yaacao pDsaad ksao ]maTu Xaklao Asato AiNa to ka AaiNa ksao TaLta yaovau Xaktat ha AaXaya malaa mah%vaacaa vaaTlaa. mhNauna malaa %yaavar jaast focus krNyaacaI AavaXyakta vaaTlaI naahI. pNa hI XaMka ]pisqat kolyaaba_la Qanyavaad. puZcyaa ilaKnaacyaa vaoLI qaÜDa balance zovaNyaacaa p`ya%na krona.


Manmouji
Thursday, August 18, 2005 - 3:40 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

caaÉ malaa mau_o pTlao. Qanyavaad

Tulip
Thursday, August 18, 2005 - 6:47 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

caaÉ. Cana Aaho kqaa . Aata puZcaI maÜzI ilahI.

Chinnu
Thursday, August 18, 2005 - 1:59 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

caaÉtšÊ kqaa BaavailacaÊ iXaYa-kih samap-k Aaho.




 
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