laxaat zova ²
jaovha Ba$na yaotM mana
XabdaMcyaa QabaQabyaanaM
Ana vahavaM vaaTtM baofama hÜ}na...
kDokpaáyaaMcaI pvaa- na krta...
naomakM tovhaca... tU maa~...
saMnyaaXaasaarKa inaÁstbQa...
XaaMt... QaIrgaMBaIr...
maaJyaa ]faLlaolyaa laaTa
Acaanak baMidst hÜtat JaDponao
Ana BaavanaaMcyaa hÜtat gaargaÜT\yaa.
trIhI..........
gaargaÜT\yaaMnaa ekmaokaMvar Gaasalao kI...
punha izNagaI poTtoca naa ²
mhNaUnaca..... laxaat zova ²
har maanaNaaáyaaMpOkI naahIca maI ²
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wah sumati pharach chaan..pan ekach change suchawasa waatato..ithe dhabdhabyaaiwaji prawah haa shabd ekdum fitt basu shakel..
madhav
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Jayavi
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| | Monday, May 09, 2005 - 5:45 am: | 
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saumatIÊ hI tuJaI positive thinking caI kivata KUpca AavaDlaI ²
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Champak
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| | Monday, May 09, 2005 - 10:46 am: |
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kyaa baat hai , mast aahe kavitaa!!
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Joo
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| | Monday, May 09, 2005 - 10:46 pm: |
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Kup AavaDlaI... vaogaLI Aaho²
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saumaitÊ kivata AavaDlaI ...
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Shabd
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| | Wednesday, May 11, 2005 - 12:54 am: |
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sumati , tuzhya kavita pharach sunder asatat. sahi
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saumatIÊ Cana Aaho kivata. malaa saMdBa- kivata saMga`hatlyaa kivataMcaI AazvaNa JaalaI.
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Chinnu
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| | Wednesday, May 11, 2005 - 3:00 pm: |
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saumaaÊ tuJaI izNagaI sahI Aaho ga² har kQaI maanaUca nakÜsa²
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qaaMbaayalaaca hvaM ²
katrvaoLI jaIvaalaa hI ]dasaXaI hurhUr
AMtma-naat KÜlavar... daTlaolao kahUr
Ba$na AalaolaM AaBaaL maÜkLM...
vhayalaaca hvaM ²
inadana tÜvar trI malaa...
qaaMbaayalaaca hvaM ²
ka naohmaI JaaDanaMca... saÜsaayacaI panagaL
saarM do}na sava$na punha irtI irtIca AÜMjaL
gaudmarlyaa XvaasaaMnaI Aata...
baÜlaayalaaca hvaM ²
inadana tÜvar trI malaa...
qaaMbaayalaaca hvaM ²
vasaMtacao jaaNao Ana... EaavaNaacao yaoNao
kQaItrI Jarolaca inanaadt roXaImagaaNao
}na saa$na... caaMdNaM...
barsaayalaaca hvaM ²
inadana tÜvar trI malaa...
qaaMbaayalaaca hvaM ²
AÜZ ]gava%yaa saUyaa-caI... kaLÜK daTtanaa
AÜZ tuJyaa saÜbatIcaI... Dava navaa maaMDtanaa
hLdI }na laovaUna mana...
naacaayalaaca hvaM ²
inadana tÜvar trI malaa...
qaaMbaayalaaca hvaM ²
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Chinnu
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| | Thursday, May 12, 2005 - 11:34 am: |
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Nice positive thinking Suma. Very nice. vaastvaaXaI Kup javaL ilaihtosa.. bar vaaTto vaacaayalaa.
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Pama
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| | Thursday, May 12, 2005 - 1:06 pm: |
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saumaitÊ KUpca Cana .dÜnhI kivata sauMdr .
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Mi_vikas
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| | Friday, May 13, 2005 - 1:36 am: |
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saumaitÊ
ekdma layabaQd kivata ²
malaa caalahI laavaayalaa jamalaI.
AanaMd WIgauNaIt Jaalaa ²²
....Aata qaaMbaayalaaca hvaM ²²²
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Jayavi
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| | Friday, May 13, 2005 - 2:59 am: |
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saumatI GREAT .... .... ²²
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sumati.. dhund karnaari kavita..keep it up..
madhav
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Athak
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| | Wednesday, May 18, 2005 - 11:52 pm: |
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saumatI Ê Canaca .. .. ..
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madhav sahi khup chan. tu kudhala sampadak aahes. Sahi Re Sahi
vinni
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Pama
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| | Thursday, May 19, 2005 - 9:07 am: |
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AbaÜlaI...
tI idsalaI dUr kuzoÊ
xaNaBar %yaa vaLNaavar.
AbaÜlaIcao saDo saaMDUna Ê
CoDUna gaolaI saUr.
baobaMQa hÜ}na vaoicat gaolaÜÊ
jao laagalao hatI.
kQaI fulaaMcaI pKrNaÊ
kQaI iXaMplyaatlao maÜtI.
tI yaola kQaI Gao}naIÊ
AÜMjaLBar caaMdNao.
%yaa idvasaacaI Aasa AjaUnaIÊ
nasao dujao maagaNao.
AbaÜlaIcaI fulao raihlaIÊ
tXaIca payaaKalaI.
ekda na vaLuna paihlaIÊ
itnao itcaI saavalaI.
ixatIjaavarcaI XauËcaaMdNaIÊ
saaja koXarI lyaalaI.
pacaÜL\yaacyaa vaaTovarlaIÊ
saaMja AbaÜlaI JaalaI.
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Mi_vikas
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| | Thursday, May 19, 2005 - 11:27 am: |
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pama,
kivata AavaDlaI keep it up ! 
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Maitri
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| | Thursday, May 19, 2005 - 1:06 pm: |
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pama
surekha kavita
keep going!!
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Swasti
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| | Monday, May 23, 2005 - 2:16 am: |
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tulaa pihlyaanda pahtaca maaJao DÜLo camakNa
najarolaa najar iBaDtaca Ê papNyaanca JaukNa
laÜkancyaa GaÜL@yaat tulaa XaÜQaNa
AaiNa tuJa laxa jaatacaÊ maaJa dUsarIkDo baGaNa
Kr tr ....
tulaa tonvhaca kLayalaa hva hÜt
tuJaa ivaXaya inaGataca Ê maaJa baava$na jaaNa
AÝzavar nakLt naava yaotacaÊ pTkna saava$na GaoNa
kQaI ivacaarat gaZNa Ê kQaI KuXaIt AsaNa
kQaI ]gaacaca maaJa svataXaIca hsaNa
Kr tr ....
[tranaa konvhaca kLayalaa hva hÜt
hllaI sagaL\yaa kivata tu Jyaavarca saucaNa
basalyaabasalyaa ÊbaÜTanaI maI tuJa naava igarvaNa
idvasaBar ksalyaaXaa QaundIt vaavarNa
AaiNa sanQyaakaLI ivanaakarNa mana hLva hÜNa
Kr tr ....
evhanaa maaJa malaaca kLayalaa hva hÜt
svaist
mao 2005
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Ôarca Cana Aaho svaatI.
Agaid manaatlao ivacaar maaMDlaosa.
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agasti sundar kavita..
Madhav
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naar
BaaLI imarvaIt caMd`kÜr
tI naar salajja hsalaI
DÜLo TpÜro paNaIdar
kTyaar kaLjaat GausalaI
XaalaU BarjarI KaMVavartI
Xaala malamalaI naosalaI
naqa kÜyarI pacaUcaI
kTyaar kaLjaat GausalaI
caala itcaI DÝladar
yaÝvanaanao mausamausalaI
Balao BalaohI Jaalao GaayaaL
ha||ya... kTyaar kaLjaat GausalaI
vaoNaI ]Dvat pazmaÜrI tI
hI roXaImagaaz ksalaI
JauLUk do}na laavaNyaacaI
tI Kudkna gaalaI hsalaI
-- dIpstMBa * maayabaÜlaI
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Swasti
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| | Wednesday, May 25, 2005 - 10:11 am: |
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dIp Ê
dusayaa- kDvyaat kahItrI gaDbaD idsatoya
duÉst kra baGau jara
baakI Jakasa
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dIp XaalaU Aaina XaalaI caI jaagaa badlaO ik khI gadbad hÜnaar naahI
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idpU Cana Aaho ro. AitXaya sauroK AsaNaar hI tuJaI naar.
Xaala malamalaI KaMVavartI
XaalaU Baja-rI naosalaI
AXaI rcanaa psaMt naahI ka tulaaÆ
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Nirnay
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| | Friday, May 27, 2005 - 1:12 pm: |
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wa deepstambha.....
are marathi charole koni lihit ka ?
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Kiru
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| | Friday, May 27, 2005 - 3:15 pm: |
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sanmaI kaihtrI gaÜMQaL Aaho evaZ na@kI..
XaalaU BarjarI KaMVavartI
Xaala malamalaI naosalaI..
ih sauMdr naar samaÜr AalaI %yaavaoLosa dIPyaa na@kI iXaXaa-sanaat AsaNaar.. 
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Manini
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| | Monday, May 30, 2005 - 4:13 am: |
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%yaalaa maI kLvalaM Aaho
[qao Aata yao] nakÜsa
tuJa naava laavato trI
malaa kQaI pahu nakÜsa
tulaaca sagaLM idlaya pNa
tulaa saad doNaar naahI
tuJaIca maI Aaho pNa
tuJyaakDo yaoNaar nahI
tuJaI Aaz\vaNa Gao]na jagaona
pNa kahI maagaNaar naahI
tulaa sagaLM gauipt saaMgauna
tuJyaa saazI rDNaar nahI
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Kiru
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| | Monday, May 30, 2005 - 5:29 am: |
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pmaa AbaÜlaI sahjaÊ saÜpIÊ sauMdr.. Kup AavaDlaI
evhanaa kLayalaa hva hÜt mast jamalaIya svastI..
maainanaI tuJaI kivata manaapasaUna AavaDlaI. pTkna vaaTUna gaolaM kI hI kivata ilaihNaarIca naava maainanaI
ca Asaayalaa hvaM.
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Nirnay
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| | Monday, May 30, 2005 - 3:30 pm: |
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manini hi kavita tula kashi kay suchali?
ya kavitetlya "ti" la as kay ghadlay......manhun ti dukhhi zaliy..........
nirnay
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maanaInaI Cana kivata Aaho..
%yaalaa tU kLvalaM Aaho
[qao Aata yaovaU nakÜsa..
vaaT %yaacaI pahtanaa
tUhI kQaI rDU nakÜsa..
maaQava..
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Manini
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| | Tuesday, May 31, 2005 - 12:29 am: |
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laÜkhÜÊ
AaBaar maanaayalaa Xabdca Apuro Aahot.
manaapasauna Qanyavaad...
maainanaI
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