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Punyanagarikar
Tuesday, March 15, 2005 - 4:26 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

maa^DÊ jara gaÜYTIca naava dovanaagarIt krala kaÆ Gaašt šMga`jaIt ilahIla gaola.

hI maaJyaa eka AazvaNaI caI gaÜYT..

Punyanagarikar
Tuesday, March 15, 2005 - 5:15 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

itlaa naivana Garat yao}na kala tIna maihnao Jaalao. kalaca k^laoMDr pihla hÜt tInao. navaIna XaaLot iXakvala hÜt tIlaa k^laoMDr baGaayalaa. pihlyaa pihlyaaMda ByaayalaI hÜtI tI naivana XaaLot. šMga`jaI yaot nasao itlaa. tI maÜzI [maartÊ to maÜzo vaga-Ê TapTIipt rhaNaaáyaa %yaa iXaixaka. Aaš caa raga Aalaa hÜta itlaa šMga`jaI XaaLot Gaatlyaa ba_la. pNa mau>acyaa AašnaIca itlaa (a XaaLot Gaalaa mhNauna saaMigatla hÜt. mau>a pNa %yaaca XaaLot hÜtI.

mau>a. mau>a XaI itcaI iktI Cana maO~I jamalaI hÜtI. AgadI pihlyaaMda mau>acyaa GarI BaoTlaÜ %yaa idvasaa pasauna. AaiNa mau>acyaa Aa}Tha}sa maQyao rhat Asalyaa mauLo AgadI caÜvaIsa tasa tI mau>a barÜbarca AsaayacaI. mau>acaI Aaš pNa iktI caaMgalaI hÜtI. itlaa AaByaasaalaa zovauna GyaayacaoÊ KoLayalaa rhu VayacaoÊ AgadI itlaa jaovaayalaa sauQha qaaMbavauna GyaayacaI.
itcaIca Aašca itlaa AÜrDayacaI. kXaalaa %yaa maÜz\yaa laÜkat vaavartosa Asa mhNaayacaI. to tulaa iXakvayacaa Kca- krtayat toca ]pkar Aahot maaJyaavarÊ Asa saaMgaayacaI. tXaI baašMnaI naÜkrI saazI AT GaatlaI hÜtI itcyaa Aašlaa. maulaIlaa iXakvaa. Kca- AamhI krtÜ.

baaš. baaš mhNajao mau>acaI Aaš. itcaI Aa[ mau>acyaa Aaš laa ‘baaš’ mhNaayacaI. mhNauna tI pNa %yaaMnaa ‘baaš’ mhNaayacaI. itcaI Aa[ mau>acyaa GarI kama krayacaI. caÜvaIsa tasaacaI maÜlakrINa. ekda mau>a naI Asa mhTlaÊ tr baaš itlaa ragaavalyaa hÜ%yaa. mhNaalyaa hÜ%yaa maÜlakrINa naahI mhNaayaca. ha}sakIpr mhNaayaca.

AaiNa maga eko idvasa Aašlaa mau>acaa vaaZidvasa saajara krayacaa Asalyaaca baašMnaI saaMigatla. yao%yaa XainavaarI kok kapayacaaÊ AaiNa itcaa sagaL\yaa ima~ maOi~iNanaa baÜlavaayaca Asa baaš mhNaalyaa. mau>anaI AaiNa baašMnaI itlaa pNa AavajaU-na AamaM~Na idla. itcaI Aaš %yaa idvaXaI Kup vaoL kamaat ADkNaar hÜtI.

pNa itlaa maa~ kQaI ekda XanaIvaar yaotÜ AahoÊ Asa Jaala hÜt.


Prajaktad
Tuesday, March 15, 2005 - 5:30 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

Aro vaa ² saurvaat caaMgalaI Jaaila Aaho.

Punyanagarikar
Tuesday, March 15, 2005 - 9:06 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

mau>a naI sauwa Aaplyaa vaaZidvasaalaa kaya kaya krNaar ho itlaa saaMgaayalaa sauÉvaat kolaI. mau>acaI paTI-caI vaNa-na eokuna tI klpnaaMcyaa rjyaat bauDUna jaayaI.

itlaa DÜL\yaa samaÜr Garavar kolaolao rÜXNaaš idsao. ek Balaa maÜza kok AaiNa %yaavar maoNaba<yaa imaNaimaNa tanaa idsaoÊ navaIna Í,a^k GaatlaolaI mau>a AaiNa tIÊ Ôugao AaiNa iJaima-L\yaa laavauna tyaar kolaolaa ha^laÊ paXva- saMgaIt mhNauna laavalaolaI %yaa dÜiGaMcaI AavaDtI gaaiNaÊ %yaaMcao XaaLotlao ima~ maOi~NaIÊ %yaaMnaI AaNalaolaI igaF,T\sa... sagaL sagaL AgadI itcyaa DÜL\yaa samaÜr yaoš.
itcyaa Aaš naI paTI-t Gaalaayalaa itcyaa saazI ek navaIna D/osa Gaotlaa. mau>a saazI itnaI svataÁ ek ga`IiTMga kaD- tyaar kola. AaiNa XaovaTI ekdacaa Xainavaar Aalaa.
sakaL pasaunaca Garat QaaMdla idsaayalaa laagalaI. itcyaa Aaš laa tr Aijabaatca Ôusa-t nhvatI. karNa mau>a cyaa ima~maMDLa barÜbarca itcyaa Aa[ baabaaMca ima~maMDL pNa yaoNaar hÜt. kimat kmaI 75 maaNasa trI AXaNaar. %yaaca barÜbar [tr GaratlaI kama hÜitca.

tI maa~ Aaja Kup KuXa hÜtI. Aaja Aaš naI maagao na laagata tI tyaar vhayalaa laagalaI. itnaI navaIna Í,a^k Gaatlaa. vyavasqaIt kosa ivaMcarlao. hatat ga`IiTMga, kaD- Gao}na tI saaMigatlaolyaa vaoLocyaa AaiQaca mau>a kDo pÜhÜcalaI. itlaa mau>alaa to kaD- sagaL\yaaMcyaa AaiQa Vayaca hÜt. kaD- baGauna mau>a ekdma KuXa JaalaI. tI mhNaalaI ho itcyaa baqa-Do ca baosT igaF,T Aaho. mau>aca ho baÜlaNa eokuna tI saatvyaa Aasamaanaat pÜcalaI ²
paTI-cyaa tyaarIt itcaI Aaš svayaMpak Garat hÜtI. baakIcaI tyaarI pNa caalaU hÜtI. AgadI itcyaa svaPnaaMcyaa rajyaat hÜtI tXaI. tovhZ\yaat itlaa kÜpáyaat zovalaolaI 20 25 pakITM idsalaI. sauMdr rMgaIt kagadat baaMQaunaÊ saubak Axarat p`%yaot paikTa var ilaihla hÜt
"A Party Favor with Love from Mukta" itnaI mau>a laa ivacaarla kI paTI- Ô^vhr caa Aqa- kaya. tXaI mau>a mhNaalaI kI jasao itlaa laÜk igaF,T Gao}na yaoNaarÊ tsa tI sauwa GarI jaatanaa %yaa sagaL\yaaMnaa ek igaF,T doNaar. %yaalaa paTI- Ô^vhr mhNatat.

tI svatÁ iXaca hsalaI. itlaa hI to paTI- Ô^vhr imaLNaar. kaya Asaola bar %yaatÊ Asaa ivacaar kro kro páyaMtca %yaaMcyaa ima~maMDLatlao pihlao phuNao Aalao. %yaaMcyaa barÜbar maga mau>a AaiNa tI rmalao.
baGata baGata sagaLoca jamalao. kok kapayacaI vaoL JaalaI. ek maÜza kok ha^la cyaa maQyaBaagaI zovalaolyaa Tobalaa var AaNauna zovalaa. %yaavar imaNaimaNa%yaa maoNaba<yaa hÜ%yaa. mau>a naI maga tÜ kok kaplaa. itlaa vaaTlaÊ JaalaÊ Aata kok Kayacaa AaiNa GarI jaayaca. itlaa hI saMQyaakaL kiQaca saMpU nayao Asa vaaTt hÜt. maga itlaa punha laxaat AalaÊ to paTI- Ô^vhr Asaolaca kI Aaplyaa barÜbarÊ (a saMQyaakLcaI AazvaNa mhNauna.

tovhZ\yaatÊ Aatlyaa KÜlaItuna ek jaadUgaar baahor Aalaa ²


Punyanagarikar
Wednesday, March 16, 2005 - 9:23 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

paTI-t jaadU cao KoL Æ ho itlaa maaihtca nhvat ²
tÜ jaadugaar %yaaMnaa jaadU cao KoL daKvaNaar hÜta. %yaa saazI %yaalaa ek madtnaIsa hvaa hÜta. %yaanao ivacaarlaÊ kI kÜNa %yaacaI madt krola Æ tsaa itnaI hLuca hat var kolaa.
jaadUgaar itcyaa kDo baGauna hsalaa. mhNaalaa yaoÊ malaa madt kr. evhZ\yaa sagaL\yaaMcyaat itlaa %yaanao inavaDlaM ho pahuna tI KuXa JaalaI. tIcaI kLI KulalaI. itlaa AapNa rajaknyaa AahÜt AaiNa ho Aapla svaPnaaMca Xahr AahoÊ Asa vaaTuna gaola. itnaI jaadUgaaralaa ÔulaM AaNauna doÊ %yaacaI TÜpI AaNauna doÊ %yaacyaa KoLat kQaI JaÜpuna daKva tr kQaI ]DI maaÉna daKvaÊ AXyaa p`karcaI madt kolaI. Kr mhNajao itlaa tr tI gammatca vaaTt hÜtI ²

XaovaTI ]XaIr v(ayalaa laagalaa tsao hLU hLU sagaLo Aapaplyaa GarI jaayalaa laagalao. jasa jasa ekok jaNa GarI inaGat hÜtoÊ tsa tsa mau>a AaiNa baaš %yaaMcyaa hatat ek paTI- Ô^vhr dot hÜ%yaa.
itlaa maa~ itcyaa Aaš saazI qaaMbaayaca hÜt. Aaš ca kama Aavarla kI itcyaa barÜbarca tI ra~I GarI jaaNaar hÜtI. krta krta sagaLo GarI gaolao. Ô> tIca ]rlaI.

itcyaa Aašca kama ekdaca saMpla. Ta^vaola laa hat pusat itcaI Aaš baahor AalaI AaiNa baašMnaa mhNaalaI kI saaMigatlaola sagaL kama saMpla. Aajauna kahI krayaca Aaho ka Æ baaš mhNaalyaa naahIÊ Aata ]Va naohomaI saar#yaa yaa.
tovhZ\yaat kÜpáyaat basalaolyaa itcyaa kDo baašMca laxa gaola. tI [tka vaoL jaagaI Aaho ho pahuna %yaaMnaa AXcaya- vaaTla. mau>a kiQaca JaÜpayalaa gaolaI hÜtI. Kr mhNajao tI sauwa poMgatca hÜtI.
Aaš barÜbar tI darat inaGaayacyaa tyaarIt ]BaI hÜtI. tXyaa baaš mhNaalyaa qaaMba. itlaa vaaTlaM Aata %yaa AaplaM paTI- Ô^vhr AaNaayalaa gaolyaa AsatIla.

itcyaa DÜ@yaat %yaa pikTacao Anaok ivacaar yaot hÜto. kaya Asaola bar %yaa paikTat Æ eKada KoL Æ kI mau>a kDo hÜtI tXaI sauMdrXaI baahulaI Æ rMgavaayaca pustk Asaola tr iktI majaa. itlaa rMgavaayalaa Kup AavaDayaca.
tI %yaa Ôovhr ca paikT sauwa japUna zovaNaar hÜtI. iktI Cana kagad hÜta %yaacaa. cakcakNaara. baairk naxaIkama Asalaolaa. (a saMQyaakaLcaI ek Aazvana. %yaa kagada kDo pahuna punha %yaa jaadUgaaracyaa jaadU cyaa Xahrat AapNa hrvaUna jaa} Asa itlaa vaaTla...

baaš prt baahor Aalyaa. mhNaalyaaÊ Aaja tU Aailasa mhNauna paTI-t majaa Aajauna vaaZlaI. ho Gao tuJyaasaazI.

tI maa~ Aaš cyaa pdra AaDuna nausatIca baašMcyaa hatatlyaa 100 ÉpyaaMcyaa naÜTo kDo baGat raihlaI...



-- samaaPt --


Punyanagarikar
Wednesday, March 16, 2005 - 9:50 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

maaJyaa pihlyaa gaÜYTI evhZI Cana naahI ilaihlaI gaolaI hI gaÜYTÊ Asa malaa vaaTt.
kahI
improvements saucat AsatIla tr ja$r saaMgaa. AaiNa hÜÊ spellings ba_la cau. BaU. Va. Gyaa.

Ashwini
Wednesday, March 16, 2005 - 10:08 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

puNyaÊ Aga kqaa Canaca ilahIlaI Aahosa tU hI sauwa. ‘itcaI’ maanaisakta KUp Cana rMgavalaI Aahosa. XaovaT qaÜDa AjaUna Kulavata Aalaa Asata tr AiQak pirNaamakark JaalaI AsatI. kdaicat to party favors cao AaNaKI qaÜDo vaNa-na AaiNa itlaa vaaTNaarI %yaaba_lacaI AsaÜXaI qaÜDI AiQak p`kT JaalaI AsatI tr XaovaTalaa AaNaKI nyaaya imaLalaa Asata.
AsaÜ ho Aaplao maaJao mat Jaalao. baakI tuJaI kqaa malaa Krca AavaDlaI.


Eliza
Wednesday, March 16, 2005 - 10:26 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

PN Ê Canaca Aaho kqaa. malaa hI jaast AavaDlaI. inaragasata Aaho kqaot.

Punyanagarikar
Wednesday, March 16, 2005 - 10:47 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

AiXvanaIÊ malaa hI XaovaT qaÜDa abrupt vaaTlaa. qaÜDsa edit k$na vaaZvayacaa p`ya%na kolaa Aaho.

eilaJaa.. thanks ga.. pNa Aajauna tuJyaa ‘manaa tuJaa rMga ksaa’ saarK ilahayacaa p`ya%na krto Aaho..

Eliza
Wednesday, March 16, 2005 - 11:59 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

thanks ga PN pNa ‘manaa...’ effective hÜtI karNa maI tI parts maQyao TklaI. salaga ilaihlaI AsatI tr i don't know.. malaa naahI qaÜD@yaatÊ pirNaamakark ilahIta yaot. :-(

Prajaktad
Wednesday, March 16, 2005 - 12:12 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

ip`yaa² inaragasa manaaica vyaqaa.. chaan maaMDila Aahosa .

Ashwini
Wednesday, March 16, 2005 - 1:19 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

puNyaÊ ekdma capKla.. .. ..

Shraddhak
Wednesday, March 16, 2005 - 2:07 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

Cute gaM puNya ... AavaDlaI hI pNa gaÜYT²

Deepanjali
Wednesday, March 16, 2005 - 2:56 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

PN,
Krca cute Ê CÜTIXaI kqaa..
eKaVa serial caa episode Cana hܚla ..


Rachana_barve
Wednesday, March 16, 2005 - 4:42 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

PN sahI ilaihlaIyaosa hI pNa gaÜYT :-)

Pha
Thursday, March 17, 2005 - 3:58 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

PN Ê kqaa AavaDlaI² %yaa CÜT\yaa maulaIcyaa najarotUna rMgavalaolaM paTI-caM ica~ ijavaMt tr vaaTtMca... pNa %yaa paXva-BaUmaIvar baašMcyaa [tr pahuNyaaMpoxaa yaa maulaIlaa " vaogaLM " paTI- fovhr doNyaatlaa kaÐT/asThI jaaNavatÜ.

Mitraa
Thursday, March 17, 2005 - 12:29 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

Kup Cana gaÜYT Aaho PN ²²²..
XaovaTI kaya hÜNaar ho maahIt Asalyaanao AaQaIpsaunaca hLhL laavaUna zovato.


Punyanagarikar
Thursday, March 17, 2005 - 3:00 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

savaa-Mcao manaa pasauna AaBaar ² AiXvanaI cao p`itiËyao ba_la AaiNa improvements saucavalyaa ba_la manaÁ pUva-k AaBaarÊ
baakI savaa-Mnaa p`Ü%saahnaa ba_la Qanyavaad..


Sakheepriya
Saturday, March 19, 2005 - 3:55 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

PN, KUpca AavaDlaI gaÜYT... ‘itcaI’ inaragasata manaalaa spXaU-na jaato...

Orchid
Monday, March 21, 2005 - 2:22 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

PN Kup Cana Aaho gaÜYT. XaIXa-k vaacauna mana BautkaLat gaolao. maaJyaa vagaa-tlyaa AamhI kahI maulaI saÜDuna baaAkIcyaaMnaa Aaplaa vaaZidvasaca maahIt navhta. XaaLot daKla krNyaapurt 15 august ikMvaa 26 january hI tarIK AsaayacaI. p`%yaokIlaa 4-5 BaavaMD Asalyaanao AašvaDIlaaMnaa ijaqao vaaZidvasaca maahIt nasaayacaa itqao tÜ saajara krNao hI tr durcaIca gaÜYT JaalaI.sahja Aazvalao AaiNa tumha savaa-MXaI XaoAr kravaosao vaaTlao.

Sanghamitra
Thursday, March 24, 2005 - 12:39 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

puNya kXaalaa ilaihilasa gaM AXaI gaÜYTÆ
mhNajao ilaihlaI Aahosa KUp Cana pNa DÜL\yaat paNaI yaotM naa...


Punyanagarikar
Thursday, March 24, 2005 - 9:20 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

bar ga saMGaima~aÊ puZlyaa vaoLI AanaMdI gaÜYT ilahIna .. OK ? Aata hsa pahu..

Dhondopant
Thursday, March 24, 2005 - 12:13 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

paTI- Ôovar jarI naahI imaLalaa trI baašMnaI jaI XaMBaracaI naÜT dIlaI tI... itlaa naahI trI itcyaa Aašlaa na@kIca ]pyaÜgaI pDlaI Asaola .. itcyaa pdrat jarI inaraXaa AsalaI trI itcyaa Aašlaa ho barÜbbar maahIt Asaola...

... AaiNa ekda ho sa%ya pcavala kI AapNa maÜlakrINa AahÜt AaiNa Aaplyaalaa kamao kravaI laagaNaar Aahot kI maga mana hI AadracaI jaast Apoxaa zovat naahI... Aailayaa BaÜgaasaI Asaavao saadr yaa ]>Ip`maaNao itcaI Aaš ho rÜja sahna krt Asaola... pNa kÜvaL\yaa maulaIlaa %yaacao kayaÆ itcaI inaraXaa hÜNaarca ...

... trIhI baašMcaI vaagaNauk kItItrI caaMgalaI Aaho...

ekuNaca ... Cana kqaa Aaho... rcanaa cyaa " jyaulaI " maQyao AaiNa yaa kqaot ha ek sauMdr frk Aaho.. jyaulaI maQao hI toca vaastva Aaho pNa %yaalaa kaÉNyaacaI Jaalar AiQak Aaho... karNa %yaa kqaotlyaa maulaIlaa garIbaIcaI jaaNaIva JaalaolaI Aaho.... yaa kqaot Ajauna %yaa maulaIlaa vaastvaacaI jaaNaIva JaalaolaI naahI %yaamauLo AapÜAapca tI baajau kmaI Aaho...

ekuNaca... dÜnahI kqaa Kupca Aavadlyaa... Qanyavaad.





 
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