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Punyanagarikar
Tuesday, March 01, 2005 - 3:03 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

gaÜYT ilaihNyaacaa ha maaJaa pihlaa p`ya%na. gaÜYT ilahayacaI savaya nasalyaa mauLo bayaa-ca cauka saapDitlaÊ ilaKaNaat AaiNa ilaihNyaacyaa XaOlaI maQyao sauQha.. tovha cau. BaU. Va . Gyaa.

Punyanagarikar
Tuesday, March 01, 2005 - 3:16 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

‘e Aaš.. mhNajao tumhI AayaÔola Tavar baiGatlaat Æ ’ manaalaI cao to ]d\gaar eokuna raigaNaIlaa ekdma Aaplyaa lahana piNacaI AazvaNa AalaI.. ithI itcyaa Aaš laa ivacaart AsaoÊ ‘Ašyyaa AašÊ mhNajao tumhI ArÜMVacaa GaaT ra~I cyaa vaoLI Ô> TÜ^ca- cyaa p`kaXaat ]trlaat Æ ’...
Aaplao Aa[ vaDIlaÊ ho Aaplyaa AayauXyaacao stMBa evZca maula iXaktatÊ Aa[ baabaaMnaI hI %yaaMcyaa ‘lahana piNa’ kahI QaaDsaI p`yaÜga kolao AsatIlaÊ Asa kÜNaa maulaalaa ka vaaTt naahI Æ raigaNaI laa svataÁ cyaaA ivacaaraMcaca hsau Aala...

‘saaMga na .. AXaI kaya hsatosa ga ƒ manaalaI nao punha Aašlaa ivacaarla..
‘hÜ ga manaoÊ baabaa AaiNa maI AayaÔola Tavar baiGatlaa AahoÊ ÔÜTÜ pNa Aahot Aamacao... bahutok ÔÜTÜMcyaa poiTt AsatIla baGa...’
maga lagaoca manaalaIcaa ÔÜTÜ phaNyaasaazI h+ .. tÜ purvaayacaa mhNauna itcao baabaa tI ÔÜTÜ caI poTI XaÜQaNa.. %yaaMnaa ‘kdaicat maaL\yaavar AsaolaÊ caZtanaa saaMBaaL ro’ mhNauna raigaNaI naI saaMgaNa.. Aalaca sagaL...
to ÔÜTÜ ekdacao saapDlaoÊ AaiNa baap laok ÔÜTÜ phaNyaat rMgaUna gaolao...

raigaNaI maa~ p^irsa cyaa ivacaarat gauMtlaI... p^irsa... iktI vaoLa vaacala hÜt AapNa pustkatÊ sagaLI pustk hoca saaMgaayacaI.. ‘p`oma krNaayaa-MnaI ekda trI jaava p^irsa laa’... ho tI kQaItir AamaÜd laa baÜlalaI hÜtI vaaTt.. itlaa hI Aazvat nhvat.. kiQatrI lagnaa AaQaI iÔrayalaa gaolaÜ Asatanaa baÜlaNyaacyaa AÜGaat... AapNa lagnaa naMtr k^naDa maQyao rhayaca.. (acaa Aaplyaavar naaih mhTla trI taNa AahoÊ Aaplyaa AakaMxaaÊ ApoxaaÊ inaraXaa ... %yaalaa saaMgatanaa itcyaa kDuna p^irsa ba_la baÜlala gaola Asaava... pNa %yaanaI to AazvaiNat zo}na itlaa hnaImaUna saazI p^irsa laa naola hÜt... tInaca idvasaÊ pNa %yaanaI ‘AapNa saaMigatlaola laxaat zovala’ .. ho Aazvaunaca raigaNaI AnaMdUna gaolaolaI...

raigaNaIlaa lagnaacyaa vaoLocaI AazvaNa JaalaI... DIsaombaracaa maihnaa hÜta.. caaMgailaca qaMDI hÜtI.. lagnaa naMtr Gar saÜDuna pr@yaa Garatca naahI.. tr pr@yaa doXaat jaayaca.. (a ivacaaranaI raigaNaI GaabarlaolaI.. lagna AgadI tÜMDavar Aalaola..
Aata AapNa Asa mhTla... kI ‘malaa ekT\yaanaI [t@yaa laaMba rhayacaI iBatI vaaTto’.. tr maga Aaš caa caohora ]trNaar.. tI svatahacao AEaU dabauna AaplaI samajaut kaZNaar.. Aaplyaa laa saaMgaNaar.. ‘Aga vaoDa baaš.. tU ekTI kuzo Aahosa.. AamaÜd Aaho naa tuJyaa barÜbar.. baGa tulaa ekTIlaa ivamaana p`vaasa nakÜ mhNauna %yaanao svatÁ ca itkIT sauQha badlauna tuJyaaca F,laašT ca Gaotla...’ pNa trIhI Aašlaa manaatuna ha ivacaar Kat rhaNaar.. Aapna maulaIlaa [t@yaa laaMba dotÜ AahÜt... ksa hÜNaar itca..
ho sagaL raigaNaIlaa DÜL\yaa samaÜr idsat hÜt.. mhNauna tI gaPp basalaolaI.. dÜna idvasaat AapNa [tko maÜzo ksao JaalaÜ Æ ervaI Aaš laa kaihhI maÜkLopNaanaI saaMgaNaaroÊ AaiNa vaoL p`saMgaI itcyaa XaI BaaMDNaaro AapNa Aaja itlaa [tko ka duravalaÜ Æ

kahI p`YNaaMnaa ]<ar nasatat...


Punyanagarikar
Tuesday, March 01, 2005 - 3:48 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

%yaaca qaMDIt AamaÜd AaiNa tI p^irsa maQyao pÜhÜcalao.. ek maokaMnaa AÜLKNyaacyaa p`yatnaat...
AamaÜd naI itlaa AayaÔola Tavar daKvalaa.. var caZuna gaolyaavar kaya sauMdr idsala p^irsa... laala CpracaI Gar.. DÜMgaravar vasalaolaI.. rsto.. %yaavar [valyaaXyaa BaasaNaayaa- gaaD\yaa.. qaMDIt sauwa sauroK idXaNaarI ihrvaL... Aat Asalaolyaa k^Ôo maQauna kÜ^ÔI caa drvaLNaara sauMdr vaasa...
sauyaa-sta naMtr imaNa imaNa idXaNaaro p^irsa cao idvao.. tI qaMD hvaa.. AamaÜd caI kMpnaI... %yaa sagaL\yaacaI majaaca kahI AÝr hÜtI...

Baartat qaMDI iktI kmaI Asato.. ho raigaNaIlaa p^irsa maQyao jaaNavalao.. AapNa AaNalaolyaa garma kpD\yaaMcaa %yaa qaMDI maQyao Kr tr kahI ]pyaÜga nhvataÊ ho kLuna sauQha AamaÜd kDo naivana ja^koT maagaayalaa itlaa saMkÜca vaaTt hÜta.. nausto kana AaiNa DÜk jarI vaayaa- pasauna saurixat zovalaoÊ tr qaMDI kmaI vaajaolaÊ Asa ivacaar kÉna itnao AamaÜd laa ivacaarla hÜtÊ

‘jara malaa baro GaoiXala ka roÆ p^irsa caI AazvaNa mhNauna ƒ
‘baro mhNajao ƒ AamaÜd cyaa Aavaajaat ]igacaca Aaplyaalaa Kup ÔrD šMga`jaI yaot naahI mhNauna kimapNaa Baasalaa hÜta itlaa...
‘baro mhNajao Í,oMca TÜpI ro...’
‘hÜ GaI}yaa kI’ AamaÜd caT\kna mhNaalaa... %yaa ]<arat Aaplyaalaa pOsao Asalaolyaa navayaa-cyaa Aavaajaacaa Baasa Jaalaa hÜta ka Æ

%yaa saMQyaakaLI to baro XaÜQat ihMDlao.. gallaI baÜLatuna iÔrtanaa CÜT\yaa CÜT\yaa k^Ôo maQauna rs%yaavar pDNaayaa- p`kaXaat tInao AamaÜd caa caohra hLuca caÜÉna baiGatlaa.... Aaplyaa baayakÜlaa qaMDI vaajato AahoÊ (a kaLjaI barÜbarca itcyaa ivaXayaI vaaTNaarI AapulakI %yaacyaa caohoáyaavar spYT idsat hÜtI.. kdaicat AapNa %yaalaa baGatÜ AahÜt ho na kLlyaa mauLo baosaavaQa pNao to Baava idsauna gaolao ka Æ
%yaanao iktI vaoLa svatÁ ca ja^koT itlaa AÜ^Ôr kola.. pNa %yaaca ja^koT Gaotla tr %yaalaa qaMDI vaajaolaÊ Asaa ivacaar kÉna itnaI to itt@yaaca vaoLa nakarla...
XaovaTI itca mhNaalaI hÜtIÊ ‘kXaalaa evhZI kaLjaI krtÜsaÊ jaa}do.. maI raihna tiXaca’...
(avar AamaÜd caa caohora Aazvalaa itlaa.. itcaI baro caI hÝsa purvaayalaa QaDpDNara (a naahI mhTla trI Aajauna AnaÜLiKca Asalaolaa maaNausa ekdma rD\kunDIlaa Aalaa..
‘naahI ga ragaI.. tulaa maI samar maQyaI AaNaNaar hÜtÜ p^irsa laa.. pNa tovha sau+I imaLola kI naahI kahI saaMgata yaot naahI.. mhNauna Aataca Pla^na kolaa.. [tkI XaÜ^T- naÜiTsa hÜtI mhNauna tInaca idvasa jamala.. %yaat [tkI qaMDI Asaola Asa Kr mhNajao malaa samajaayalaa hva hÜt.. pNa DÜ@yaatca raihla naahI... tu AXaI ekTI tuJyaa savaš cyaa sagaL\yaa vastU saÜDuna [qao laaMba maaJyaa saazI AailasaÊ AaiNa Aata tu kQaI nhvao to ek baro maagato Aahosa tIhI maI do} nakÜ kaÆ ’ GaayakutIlaa yao}na %yaanao ivacaarla hÜt...
%yaacaa tÜ lahana maulaa saarKa ihrmausalaolaa caohra baGauna raigaNaI laa kihtrI ivaica~ca vaaTla... mhNajao kaya vaaTt Aaho ho nakLtca kuzotrI ek AaplaopNaacaI jaaiNava JaalaI... AaiNa to Baava Aaplyaa caohoyaa- var ]maTlao bahutok... AamaÜd naI to barÜbar AÜLKlao ka Æ Asaa ek ivacaar tovha Aaplyaalaa caaTuna gaolaa...

pNa %yaacyaa %yaa baÜlaNyaanaI AamaÜd AaiNa Aaplyaa maQyao ek Avya> naat tyaar JaalaÊ evhZ maa~ dÜGaaMnaahI kLla.. AaiNa maga kahI na baÜlataca AaplaI ekmaokaMcaI AÜLK pTlaI...

hnaImaUna cao ÔÜTÜ AapNa ca@k maaL\yaavar TaklaoÊ (aca raigaNaI laa hsaUca Aala.. saMsaaracyaa caakÜirt kQaI ADklaÜ Aaplyaalaa kLlaca naahI...

‘Aa[ yao na ga ÔÜTÜ baGaayalaa...’ manaalaI cyaa AavaajaanaI raigaNaI Baanaavar AalaI...

itcao paya maa~ nakLt Aaplyaa kpaTa kDo vaLlao... %yaacyaa varcyaa kPyaat maagao itnao hat Gaalauna ek kagadI ipXavaI kaZlaI... %yaatla to baoro baahor kaZuna tI baraca vaoL to baGat raihlaI... Aata rMga iÔ@ka pDlaa hÜta %yaacaa.. AaiNa ]igacaca ]savaayacaI iBatI GaalaNaara ek Qaagaa sauQha baahor Aalyaa saarKa vaaTt hÜta.. pNa %yaa baorocaI }ba maa~ tXaIca hÜtI Aajauna....

‘malaa paz Aahot to ÔÜTÜ... sagaL\yaaca AazvanaI ÔÜTÜt naahI kOd krta yaot manau’ Asa mhNauna manaalaIcyaa p`YNaaqa-k caohoyaa- kDo baGauna tI svatÁ iXaca hsalaI...


samaaPt


Yog
Tuesday, March 01, 2005 - 3:56 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

vaah ² ekdma short and sweet !

Tulip
Tuesday, March 01, 2005 - 4:01 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

PN mastca. Krca short and sweet

Rachana_barve
Tuesday, March 01, 2005 - 4:08 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

e mast ga :-) .... .... ..

Arunima
Tuesday, March 01, 2005 - 5:05 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

Kr naaih vaaTt ik pihlaaca p`ya%na Aaho mhNauna. CÜTI AaiNa Cana kqaa.

Arch
Tuesday, March 01, 2005 - 5:05 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

puNyaÊ Cana ilaihla Aahosa ga.



Avdhut
Tuesday, March 01, 2005 - 5:27 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

sauroKÊ Short and Sweet but Fit

Punyanagarikar
Tuesday, March 01, 2005 - 5:41 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

e sagaL\yaaMcao manaapasauna AaBaar..

Aca-Ê to ‘baro’ kola Aaho ²
title maa~ badlata yaot naahI Aaho. trI ‘baro’Ê tu vaoLot barÜbar ]ccaar saaMigatlaasa ² ..

Kr tr gaÜYT ilahI mhNauna malaa rcanaa mhNaalaI.. Ô> to itnaI caoYTo naI mhTla hÜtÊ AaiNa maI seriously Gaotla.
punha ekda sagaL\yaaMnaa
positive response ba_la thanks

Rachana_barve
Tuesday, March 01, 2005 - 7:41 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

pNa tU gaÜYT sahIca ilaihlaI Aahosa. :-O ... AjaUna eKadI ilaihlaIsa trI pLola

Shraddhak
Wednesday, March 02, 2005 - 6:00 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

puNya mastca... CÜTIXaI AaiNa Cana gaÜYT²

Somesh
Wednesday, March 02, 2005 - 6:40 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

short and sweet ...!!!

Rajasee
Wednesday, March 02, 2005 - 7:39 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

PN mastca CÜTIXaI AaiNa Cana gaÜYT

Sampada_oke
Wednesday, March 02, 2005 - 9:13 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

puNya Ê mastca . p^rIsacyaa AazvaNaI jaagyaa kolyaasa .

Eliza
Wednesday, March 02, 2005 - 9:25 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

so cute PN. :-) mastca.

Prajaktad
Wednesday, March 02, 2005 - 10:32 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

ip`yaa²
mast ilahlayasa²..Aagaid taja TvaTivat...Aasaca ilaiht rha²


Hems
Wednesday, March 02, 2005 - 11:27 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

ip`yaaÊ mastÊ trla ilaihlayasa.
AavaDlaI kqaa²


Maitri
Wednesday, March 02, 2005 - 11:56 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

punya
Atishay sundar.
chhoti ani sahaj goshta. vachanyachya oghat welecha bhan rahat nahi,

Apurv
Wednesday, March 02, 2005 - 2:53 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

vaah² vaah² Canaca ilahIlao Aaho :-)

Punyanagarikar
Wednesday, March 02, 2005 - 3:20 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

sagaL\yaaMcao manaa pasauna AaBaar.. Asaoca tumha sarvaaMcao p`Ü%saahna pazIXaI Asau do.. thanks
(a vaÉna Aajauna ek... maI jar gaÜYT ilahu XaktoÊ tr Barpur baakIcao maayabaÜilakr pNa ilahu XaktatÊ Aajauna naivana naivana HGkraMnaI sauQha [qao ilahava AXaI AaplaI maaJaI ek [Ca..

Priya
Wednesday, March 02, 2005 - 3:24 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

PN, Canaca ilahIlaM AahosaÊ saaQaMÊ saÜpMÊ AaiNa naoTkM.

Paragkan
Wednesday, March 02, 2005 - 4:02 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

Good one PN !

Storvi
Wednesday, March 02, 2005 - 4:39 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

good! short and sweet.

Lalu
Wednesday, March 02, 2005 - 10:27 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

puNyaÊ ilahIt rha maulaI. :-)

Ashwini
Wednesday, March 02, 2005 - 10:44 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

puNyaÊ Krca Cana ilaihlaM Aahosa ga.

Champak
Friday, March 04, 2005 - 8:32 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

chhaan aahe kathaa!!!


mee pan lihu kaa ek :-)

Punyanagarikar
Friday, March 04, 2005 - 11:30 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

‘ek’ Asa Xabd ilaihNyaa eovajaIÊ ek gaÜYT ilaihilasa tr caalaola ro campk ²
sagaL\yaaMcao positive p`itiËyao ba_la AaBaar.. puZcyaa vaoLI Aajauna improve krayaca p`ya%na krIna

Manee
Friday, March 04, 2005 - 12:55 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

puNyaÊ Canaca Aaho AgadI²²

Athak
Friday, March 04, 2005 - 2:48 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

Really good one Ê vaaTt naahI pihlaaca p`ya%na Ê Canaca .

Jayavi
Saturday, March 05, 2005 - 8:21 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

e mastca gaM :-) AaiNa phIlaaca p`ya%na mhNauna tr KUpca Cana ²²

Pha
Monday, March 07, 2005 - 3:15 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

vaa² mastca jamalaIyao kqaa.




 
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