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Nagarchadeepak
Friday, February 11, 2005 - 1:57 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

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Kiru
Monday, February 14, 2005 - 1:29 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

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Menikhil
Monday, February 14, 2005 - 2:23 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message


‘vaadLvaaT’ cao XaIYa-k gaIt mau_ama pÜsT krvaosao vaaTlao ho ica~ pahuna

kQaI saagar inaLaš
kQaI XanK naI iXamplao
kQaI candNao iTpur
tuJyaa DÜL\yaat vaacalao

kQaI ]trlaa cand`
tuJyaa maaJyaa AngaNaat
svaPna paKrancaa qavaa
ivasaavalaa AÜnJaLIt

kQaI kaLÜK BaIjalaa
kQaI iBajalaI phaT
hunkarlaa nadIkaz
kQaI hrvalaI vaaT


Darshetkarsmita
Tuesday, February 15, 2005 - 6:45 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

are menikhil

mala vaatate kavita - vaadalvaat chya 4 line raahilya, please poorna karsheel kaa ?

smita

Anandg
Tuesday, February 15, 2005 - 3:31 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

‘jaIva’ ‘iXava’ Ana ‘AiQak’ ‘]Nao’
‘nar’ ‘maadI’ cao d\vaOt jaunao.
‘XaUnya’ ‘ek’ cyaa ixaitjaamaagao
XatrMgaI pNa sausvaPnao


Menikhil
Tuesday, February 15, 2005 - 11:26 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

'Darshetkarsmita'

XaovaTcya 4 AÜLI naITXyaa Aazvat naaiht...trIhI p`ya%naa krtÜ

vaaáyaa pavasaacaI rat
kQaI Baasaat .... ³saa^rI Aazvat naahI ha Xabd´
kQaI Qausar Qausar
ek vaadLacaI vaaT


Bhala_popat
Wednesday, February 16, 2005 - 8:51 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

kuzo hÜta ÆÆ

vaa vaa ² @yaa baat hO


Manee
Wednesday, February 16, 2005 - 12:28 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

vaaáyaapavasaacaI gaaja
kaLo Baasa gacca daT
kQaI Qausar Qausar
ek vaadLacaI vaaT


Giriraj
Wednesday, February 16, 2005 - 1:00 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

baáyaaca idvasaaMnaI Aalaat ismata tumhI²

baGaa yaava$na kahI saucato kaÆ
³Ôulaacaa copyright: JaaD AaiNa inasaga-
ÔÜTÜcaa copyright: AamhI svatÁ
AaiNa hatacaa copyright: idnaoXamaamaa ]Ô- dineshvs ²



Prasadmokashi
Wednesday, February 16, 2005 - 2:41 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

ik$Ê tu TaklaolaM ica~ Kupca AavaDlaM...

Xabdat pkDayacaa p`ya%na..

saaMja..

tma maalavaU laagatÜ
sauya-ikrNaaMcyaa jyaÜtI
AXaa xaNaasa vaaTto
tuhI Asaavao saÜbatI

saaMjaavalyaa vaaTovar
jaoMvha laaMbato saavalaI
DÜL\yaamaQao trLtI
kahI AMQaUk caahulaI

pMK GarT\yaat yaotI
irto vaaTto AaBaaL
caarI idXaaMcyaa kuXaIt
Baro kÜvaLa AMQaar

Xabd kXaalaa hvaotÆ
maÝna baÜlao sava-kahI
Knt [tkIca kI hI
saaMja inasaTunaI jaaš

~ p`saad


Kiru
Thursday, February 17, 2005 - 12:44 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

p`saadÊ Ka~Ica hÜtI.. kahItrI saundrÊ Kup Cana AsaM kahI yaoNaar yaa ica~amaagaÜmaaga. Apoxaop`maaNao JaalaM.
kaya baÜlaU Æ ica~ Canaca Aaho pNa tuJyaa XabdaMnaa ]pmaa ca naaihyao..
manaatlaI ‘hurhur’ XaovaTcyaa kDvyaat.. ivaXaoYat : XaovaTcyaa dÜna AÜLIt Ap`itma ]trlaIyao...


Knt [tkIca kI hI
saaMja inasaTunaI jaaš


saUyaa-stacao xaNa far jaIvaGaoNao Asatat naahI Æ

Tulip
Thursday, February 17, 2005 - 12:55 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

vaa.. p`saad Ôarca sauroK ²²²

Dineshvs
Thursday, February 17, 2005 - 9:13 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

Waiting for SchoolBus !!!sb

Shwet_2000
Thursday, February 17, 2005 - 9:14 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

Prasad,

Are kiti chan lihitos tu!!!



Raghav
Friday, February 18, 2005 - 12:09 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

vvaa ² p`saad maÜkaYaIÊ
Ap`tIma kivata.


Paragkan
Friday, February 18, 2005 - 9:39 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

PM Ê ‘ica~kivata’ ha tuJaa hatKMDa p`kar banalaa Aaho Aata.
Kasaca ²


Shriramb
Friday, February 18, 2005 - 9:52 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

Prasad, chhan aahe kavita!

Paragkan
Friday, February 18, 2005 - 10:16 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

maaJaahI ek p`ya%na - Kiru cyaa ica~ava$na

[qaoca jaraXaI qaaMba saKo gaM
nakÜsa maalavaU saMQyaakaL
AakaXa ËMidlao tmadUtaMnaI
k$ Ata ixaitjaacaa saaMBaaL

vaLUna maagao pahu nakÜ gaM
saavalyaaMsa naa ]rlaa Aakar
hlakoca Ba$yaa rMga manaaitla
Jauklyaa naBaasa tÜca AQaar


Yaggojoshi
Friday, February 18, 2005 - 11:13 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

vaaTocyaa QauLIt
maaÓNaar ka tumhI..
‘yau A^nD Aaya’ caI gaÜDI
caaÓNaar ka tumhI..
pustkacaM gaaNaM
gaaNaar ka tumhI...
‘skUla calao hma’
³punha´ yaoNaar ka tumhI..



Anandg
Saturday, February 19, 2005 - 2:16 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

igairrajaÊ tuJyaa ica~asaazI..

Copy Right (?)

GaoNaar ksaa hÜ
"Copy Right" kXaacaa Æ
pirvat-na ha tr inayama Asao saRYTIcaa.

hatatunaI jaašla AÜGaLUna jar vaaLU
tr kaya Ka~I kIÊ itcaaca hܚla vaocaa Æ

caurgauLunaI jaašla ivaskTUna jar XaalaU
tr kaya Ka~I kIÊ rahIla %yaaca GaDIcaa Æ

vaaáyaanao jaašla iÔskTUna raMgaÜLI
maga kaya Ka~I kI tsaaca rahIla saacaa Æ

ivatLlaa baÔ- jar punha iqajavaNyaa jaala
tr kaya Ka~I kI inaGaola %yaaca mauXaIcaa Æ

TvaTvaIt puYpo kÜmaojauna jaatIla
jair navyaa navaolyaa ]Va kL\yaa yaotIla
trI kaya Ka~I vaarsaa %yaaca CTaMcaa Æ

Ap`itÌt Aivart ina%ya inaraLa xaNa ha
hatatunaI jaašla AÜGaLUna jar xaNa ha
kaTa ]laTaih ksaa ifrola GaDIcaa Æ

GaoNaar ksaa hÜ
"Copy Right " kXaacaaÆ



Prasadmokashi
Sunday, February 20, 2005 - 9:31 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

maMDLIÊ tumha savaa-Mcao AaBaar.

ik$Ê saaMja kivatonao malaahI ek samaaQaana idlao.

pragaÊ " ixaitjaacaa saaMBaaL " hI klpnaa AavaDlaI.

yaÜgaoXa AaiNa AanaMd ... sahI ro..

~ p`saad


Prasadmokashi
Sunday, February 20, 2005 - 9:49 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

igairrajaÊ ica~ pahuna ]iXaranao saucalaolao kahI ivacaar..

maM~

tLhatavar GaotlaolaI fulaM
do}na jaatat
Aaplyaa saugaMQakupItlao kahI kNa
tLhatacyaa kzINa kÜrD\yaa %vacaolaa...

jar
yaa fulaaMnaa fulavata Aalyaa Asa%yaa
tLhatavarIla naiXabaacyaa roYaa sauwa...
tr...

tr kdaicat " puYpM samap-yaamaI " ha kovaL ek maM~ rahIlaa nasata...

%yaanao AayauYya badlata AalaM AsatM...

~ p`saad


Dineshvs
Sunday, February 20, 2005 - 11:19 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

vaa p`saad. kavya Kup AavaDlaM.

AaiNa anandq igairraja cyaa AvaKL Xabdanaa pNa kavyaat gauMflatÊ Kup Cana.

Ôulao ksalaI hÜtI tI maaiht naahI. JaaDavarcyaa ÔulaaMcaa ÔÜTÜ Gaota yaot nav*taÊ mhNauna hatat GaotlaI. Aa^ik-D vaaTt AsalaI trI ih Aa^ik-D\sa naahIt.


Sanghamitra
Tuesday, February 22, 2005 - 11:12 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

ik$ ica~ far sauMdr Aaho ro.
%yaamauLo qaÜDa ]iXar Jaalaaya trIhI...

kuzo saaMDlao koXar AaiNak kuzo tPt laailamaa.
kuzo ivaragaI krDa psaroÊ kuzo XaaMt naIilamaa.
AayauYyaacao kOk rMga Ana\ AapNa saaxaIdar.
ipsaahunaI Jaalao hlako manaÊ vaRqaa tnaacaa Baar.

- ima~a

AjaUna ek version

AXaI ]trlaI saMQyaavaoLaÊ ivatLUna gaolao saaro BaÝitk.
]rlaI saarI dÜna manao Ana\ %yaat trMgao Baava AlaÝikk.
- ima~a


Kiru
Wednesday, February 23, 2005 - 12:28 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

hM..
p`saad ‘maM~’ Ap`tIma.. igaircyaa ica~alaa Cana nyaaya idlaasa.

‘%yaanao AyauYya badlata AalaM AsatM’
hI AÜL ivacaar krayalaa laavaNaarI.

ima~a.. caar AÜLIMmaQyao tu ica~ca DÜL\yaaMpuZo ]Ba kolaMsa. sahIca..
f> ek tËar.. [qalaM tuJaM yaoNaM inayamaIt hÜvaU dot



Jayavi
Wednesday, February 23, 2005 - 2:54 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

p`saadÊ Kupca Cana ²²

ima~aÊ jabardst ²² AaiNa Krca tuJaM yaoNaM qaaMbavaU nakÜsa gaM AsaM maQao maQao ²²


Dineshvs
Wednesday, February 23, 2005 - 3:06 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

ismataÊ kivata ihMdIt AsalaI mhNauna kaya JaalaoÊ Kup AavaDlaI. tumacyaa ÔulaaMba_lacyaa BaavanaaMcaa maI Aadr krtÜ. pNa Ô> ih Ôulao mau_ama KuDlaolaI navhtI hÜ. igairYa ikMvaa maIÊ kÜNaIih štko inaYzur naahI.´ Ô> KalaI pDlaolaI ]calalaI hÜtI.

Giriraj
Wednesday, February 23, 2005 - 3:47 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

p`saad sahIca ro.. dÜGaohI p`saad AgadI jabarI Aahot maayabaÜlaIvarcao²

ima~aÊAXaIca ek saMQyaakaL baxaIsa gaM... KUp idvasaaMtUna vaoL kaZlaasa


Sanghamitra
Wednesday, February 23, 2005 - 4:29 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

Qanyavaad maMDLI.
maaJyaa kivata pUvaI- vaacaUnahI maI [qaM yaot rhavaM AsaM mhTlyaaba_la.
KrMca QaIracao Aahat tumhI laÜk. :-)
AjaUna caar AÜLI %yaaca ica~avar saucalyaa. itqaMca add krtIya.


Jayavi
Wednesday, February 23, 2005 - 9:28 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

ima~aÊ tuJyaa 'add'ed lines Terrific Aahot gaM ²² ‘ivatLUna gaolao saaro BaÝitk’ Ap`itma ²²

ismataÊ ekdma saaQao sarL Xabd vaaprlyaamauLo Kupca Cana vaaTtoya vaacaayalaa. Good One ²²


Meghdhara
Thursday, February 24, 2005 - 3:20 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

p`saad saaMja maM~ Ap`itma. ima~a Cna.. ik$ idnaoXa igarI sauMdr fÜTÜ.
idnaoXa yaa fulaaMcyaa inaima<aanao.. tumacaa p`vaasa Ê p`saadcaI ismatacaI kivata manaat AaLvat rahIna.

igarI Qanyavaad Ê tU dovanaagarIt ilaihlyaamauLo ismatacaI dusarI kivata vaacalaI.

ismataÊ Asahayyata pTto pNa.. maa kܚ mauJa jaOsaI na hÜgaI... ka barMÆ ApraQaIpNaacaI Baavanaa KMt .. AM hM .. yaa Baavanaolaa jaast p`Ü%saahana do} nakÜsa..

naI kivatocaa baIbaI cauklaaya..

maoGaa


Sanghamitra
Thursday, February 24, 2005 - 4:14 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

p`saad Aaja kivata vaacalyaa.
AitXaya sauroK BaaYaa AaiNa Baava sauwa.
pNa maagao malaa jaaNavalao hÜto toca prt ekda
³maI ilaihlao hÜto kI naahI Aazvat naahI mhNaUna.´
p`%yaok kivatovar ek JaakÜLlaI Baavanaa hvaIca kaÆ AsaÜ. cau.Bau.Va.Gyaa.
AanaMd copyright AgadI pTlaI. :-)
yaÜgaoXa iktI gaÜD kivata Aaho hI. pNa qaÜDI vaaZvalaI AsatI trI caalalao Asato kI.
PK ixaitjaacaa saaMBaaL. yaavarca ek kivata hܚla.
ismata eKadI ihMdI kivata zIk Aaho pNa [qaM AapNa sagaLoca marazI AaiNa marazIba_laca Aaga`hI AhÜt AsaM malaa vaaTtM.


Darshetkarsmita
Thursday, February 24, 2005 - 5:09 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

mitra, thanks for suggestion

pan mala vaatate jar kavita cha khara aanand aanee arth jaanoon ghenyaachee ichchaa asel tar bhasha hee kadheech aad yet naahee, kavita aaplya bolakepana muley manavar maat karate, tyaala bhashecha bandhan/seema nasate....

"shabdaavaachoon kadate jevhaan,
shabdaanchyaa palikadache,
kavitecha bhaav mahatvaach,
bhaasha bandhan kashaala have,

thanks "mitra" ,bagh tula he patate kaa
bhaashe vaachoon kadhee kunaache adate kaa,
marathee aaplyaala jodate, hee khaatree asel tula,
hindi vegda karat naahee, he maaheet nasel tula,

tari raag maanu naye,
hyaat vegla jaanu naye,
aapan sagale aahotach marathee,
pan paheele bharatvaasee.


smita


Prasadmokashi
Thursday, February 24, 2005 - 9:25 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

idnaoXaÊ igarIÊ ikÉÊ maoGaa

AiBap`ayaaba_la AitXaya AaBaarI Aaho ro maI tumacaa:-)

ima~aÊ

kÜNatahI Baava maI jaaNauna baujauna kivatot Takt naahI gaM.
kivataMvar Asaa kivacaa control AsatÜ Asao malaa vaaTt naahI.
pNa tuJaI p`itiËyaa AavaDlaI... maaJyaa kivataMcaa malaaca ivacaar krayalaa laavaNaarI.
maI svata %yaa JaakÜLlyaa Baavanaolaa kmaI laoKt naahI %yaamauLo Asaola kdaicat.
" gaulaXana kI fkt fulaÜM sao nahI kaMTÜMsao BaI ijaÙat hÜtI hO " ... ho pTNaara

pNa maI na@kIca ivacaar krona. Thanks a lot .:-)

~ p`saad


Moderator_8
Thursday, February 24, 2005 - 9:45 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

Ìpyaa [qao ihMdI kivata pÜsT kÉ nayaot. [qao f> marazI ilaKaNa Apoixat Aaho. p`stut kivata yaoqaUna hlavaNyaat yaot Aahot.
kLavaoÊ gaOrsamaja nasaavaa.





 
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