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Prasad_shir
Monday, January 17, 2005 - 5:59 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

tUca gaa ro....

BaoTNyaalaa vaaklao AaBaaL saaro
saaMga tU AatatrI yaoXaIla ka roÆ

QaavaunaI maagao tuJyaa vaoD\yaap`maaNao
EaaMt Aata jaahlao baoBaana vaaro

saÜDunaI yao tU tuJyaa AakaXagaMgaa
caaMdNao gaavaatlao yaa gaMQaNaaro²

daTlaa caÜhIkDo AMQaar toMvha
tovaNaara tUca tU hÜtasa naa roÆ

QaRpdo XvaasaaMt maaJyaa AÜvatanaa
AMtrohI jaIvanaacao tUca gaa ro²

Tusharvjoshi
Monday, January 17, 2005 - 8:46 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

p`saadÊ

baáyaaca idvasaaMnaI gaja,la vaacaayalaa Cana vaaTlao. ivasauBaa} baapTaMnaI ekda naagapUrat Aalyaavar CÜT\yaa bahracyaa eka gaja,laocao kahI Xaor eokvalao hÜto. %yaacao vajana baGa Asao...

mastIt gaat jaaro
dotIla saaqa saaro

DÜL\yaaMmaQao bauDalao
inaXNaat pÜhNaaro...

malaa kaya sagaLo Xaor Aazvat naahIt pNa malaa %yaavaoLI tI gaja,la farca AavaDlaI hÜtI. tuJyaa yaa gaja,laocyaa vajanaa mauLo %yaa XaoraMcaI AazvaNa JaalaI baGa.

tuYaarÊ naagapUr

Tusharvjoshi
Monday, January 17, 2005 - 9:24 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

ha ek p`ya%na. jaaNakar risakaMnaI maaga-dXa-na kravaoÊ hI AiBalaaXaa...

tU TaLlaosa karo
Jaalao ]dasa vaaro

gaa} nakÜ punha tU
qaMDavalao inaKaro

gadI-t maaNasaaMcyaa
XaÜQaU kuzo malaaro

maaJao tuJao jamaonaa
hI AÜZ Kasa karoÆ

daTUna p`aNa yaotÜ
BaoTUna jaat jaaro

tuYaar jaÜXaIÊ naagapUr

Prasad_shir
Tuesday, January 18, 2005 - 4:26 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

tuYaar...

daTUna p`aNa yaotÜ
BaoTUna jaat jaa ro...

vaa... @yaa baat hO²

Paragkan
Tuesday, January 18, 2005 - 9:38 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

kya baat hai .. donhi chhaan !

Prasad. LTNS

Yog
Tuesday, January 18, 2005 - 12:10 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

"maaJao tuJao jamaonaa hI AÜZ Kasa ka roÆ "
sahIca roÊ ek saundr kavyamaya ivarÜQaaBaasa..

Kiru
Wednesday, January 19, 2005 - 12:30 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

p`saad.. Cana.
tuYaar Kasaca..


Jo_s
Wednesday, January 19, 2005 - 1:23 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

prasad mastach
tushar prayatna chhaan
gazal prakaar tasaa avaghadch, tari chaan pelalaay

Jayavi
Wednesday, January 19, 2005 - 3:58 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

p`saadÊ tuYaar... sauroK²² KrM tr gaJala ha p`kar malaa naITsaa kLt naahI pNa expressions ekdmaca sahI Aahot. Canaca ilahIlaIyao dÜGaaMnaIhI ²²

Sanghamitra
Wednesday, January 19, 2005 - 5:04 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

p`saad vaa
tuYaar sahIca
daTUna p`aNa yaotÜ...
pNa AiBalaaYaa maQalaa Ya ha tuYaar maQalyaa Ya saarKaca ilahayacaa AsatÜ. ~D


Prasad_shir
Thursday, January 20, 2005 - 6:27 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

Qanyavaad maMDLI .. .. praga hmmm...!

Prasad_shir
Thursday, January 20, 2005 - 6:28 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

maaMDilak

hÜtÜ kQaItrI maI sama`aT AMbarIcaa
maI maaMDlaIk Aata catkÜr BaakrIcaa

jao saazvaUna JaalaoÊ inasaTUna jaat gaolao
Aalaa malaa kQaI naa AMdaja payarIcaa

gadI-t BaÜvatalaI ho gaardIca saaro
Ana XaÜQatÜ fukacaa maI saUr baasarIcaa

ho r> AaTlaolaoÊ to r> baaTlaolao
r>asa rMga naahI kÜzoca KatrIcaa

dahI idXaaMsa gaolaÜ XaÜQaat maI sauKacyaa
naa paihlaa kQaIhI maI saUya- AMtrIcaa

Kshipra
Friday, January 21, 2005 - 12:29 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

kXaI gaJala ² ksaM ilaihNaM ²
ksaM tuJaM ridf jauLvaNaM ²
ksaa inaGaola [qaUna paya
vaoD laagaola naahItr kaya...:-)

Jo_s
Friday, January 21, 2005 - 1:10 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

prassad joratach chaalaly, masta
Kshipra prtikriyaa jabardast.
pan "RADIF" mhanaje kaay.

Daksha
Friday, January 21, 2005 - 1:47 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

prasad aani tushar just great,zakassach.

Prasadmokashi
Friday, January 21, 2005 - 2:17 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

p`saadÊ

vaa ² AitXaya sauMdr gaJala.

~ p`saad

Prasadmokashi
Friday, January 21, 2005 - 2:21 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

gaJala yaa kavyap`karaba_la ek maahItIpuNa- laoK.

http://www.manogat.com/node/640

~ p`saad

Paragkan
Friday, January 21, 2005 - 2:48 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

XaovaTcao 2 Xaor Kasa²

Peshawa
Friday, January 21, 2005 - 4:05 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message


vaoQa Gaot baaNa itxNa ek Aalaa
jaKmaasa jaunyaa vaadLI jaaga Aalaa

poTlaolaa sauya- inaqaLt darat hÜta
DÜL\yaat AaEayaasa QagaQagata AMQaar Aalaa

Xvaapdo jaagaIca hÜtI ]da<a maaNasaaMcaI
rxaNaasa maaJyaa ksaa ek vaalyaaca Aalaa

Gaava GaalaNaaro jaoMvha dovhara XaÜQaIt hÜto
jaKmaat dova maaJyaa Avaicat BaLBaLUna Aalaa




Yog
Friday, January 21, 2005 - 4:35 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

vaah poXavao tumhIpNa. @yaa baat hO²

Tusharvjoshi
Friday, January 21, 2005 - 10:06 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

ip`ya ima~gaNaÊ

9 April 2004 laa saarMga nao idlaolaI p`itiËyaa šqao punha p`stut krtÜya...

http://69.94.96.131/cgi-bin/hitguj/show.cgi?tpc=75&post=499819#POST499819
Aata qaÜD gaJala vyaakrNaaba_la...

AapNa saayalaIcaIca gaJalasad`uXa kivata pahu.

qaaMbalyaa *Luvaar tanaa tU kuzo Æ
AasavaaMnaI ivatL\tanaa tU kuzo Æ

[qao pihlyaa AÜLItlaa laGau­gauÉ Ëma phavaa
ga gauÉ la laGau
vyaakrNaat iXaklyaap`maaNao itna itna XabdaMcao gaT kÉyaa
pihlaI AÜL
galaga lalaga lagaga galaga

dusarI AÜL
galaga galala gagaga laga

[qao lagaoca kLto kuzo cauk JaalaIya. laGau gauÉ Ëma paLlaa gaolaa naahI mhNauna hI Kup sauroK klpnaa AsaunahI gaJala hÜt naahI. ³saayalaI xamasva... tulaa KccaI krNyaaca ha p`ya%na naahI.´
AXyaa rItInao puNa- gaJalacaa AaËuitbaMQa cauktÜ
phIlyaa Xaorat laGau gauÉ Ëma zrlao kI to puZo badlau nayaot.³gaJalamaQyao paca ikMvaa %yaapoxaa jaast Xaor Asaavaot.´

gaJala AxargaNa va`u<aap`maaNao maa~a va`u<at hI ilaihta yaoto. pNa [qao dusaáyaa AÜLIt ek maa~a kmaI Aaho.

Ajauna maaihtIsaazI p`saadcao jaunao pÜisTMga caok kravao.

http://69.94.96.131/cgi-bin/hitguj/show.cgi?tpc=75&post=509584#POST509584
10 May 2004 laa p`sannaa nao idlaolaI p`itiËyaa punha p`stut krtÜya...

ima~a igairraja ..maaf kr .. pNa hI ek kivata Aaho. ihlaa gaja,la mhNata yaoNaar naahI.

gaja,la cyaa p`%yaok dÜna AÜLIMcaa ek svatM~ Aqa- AsatÜ. ]da

ksao vaodnaomaQaUna naato jauLUna Aalao
tulaa baÜcalaa Asaola kaTaÊ hLhLlaÜ maI

%yaacap`maaNao gaja,la maQyao rdIf AaiNa kaifyaa evaZoca puYkL naahI. jyaamauLo gajala gajala hÜto tI gaÜYT mhNajao vaja,na hÜya.

saaMja jaovha jaraXaI ZLU laagato
duK maaJao idvyaaMnaa kLU laagato

rmya vaaTo kuNaalaa [qaoÊ ra~ hI
caaMdNao dUr jaovha jaLU laagato..

pNa p`ya%na krIt rha. Xa@yatÜvar maa~avaR<aaMcaa ]pyaÜga k$ nayao. AxarvaR<aaMnaa vaja,na caaMgalao yaoto.

cauk Baula doNao GaoNao.
p`saÙa


Prasadmokashi
Saturday, January 22, 2005 - 7:10 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

tuYaarÊ hI maahItI punha [qao post kolaIsa ho barM kolasa.

]dahrNaadaKla varIla pOkI kuzlyaa kivata gaja,la zrtat AaiNa kuzlyaa naaiht saangau XakXaIla ka Æ

AxargaNa AaiNa maa~a vaR<aaMcaI maahItI AaiNa inayama kuzo imaLu XaktIla Æ

XaaLot iXaklyaacao smartya pNa Aata kahIca Aazvat naahI.

~ p`saad

Prasad_shir
Monday, January 24, 2005 - 4:33 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

p`saad

ihtgauja idvaaLI AMk 2002 maQaIla ha laoK baGa...


/user/hda_2002/lalit-gajala%20maaJaI%20saKI-prasadshir.htm

Prasad_shir
Monday, January 24, 2005 - 5:26 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

dusaáyaa kÜNaasaazI

]gaaca raMQatÊ vaaZt hÜtÜ dusaáyaa kÜNaasaazI
]gaaca ]YTI kaZt hÜtÜ dusaáyaa kÜNaasaazI

raMQat hÜtÜ jyaacyaasaazI navhtI %yaalaa pvaa-
maIca sauKanao rabat hÜtÜ dusaáyaa kÜNaasaazI

inavaaMt hÜta tÜ maaJyaa pazIvar Takuna AÜJao
ivaraT gaaDa AÜZt hÜtÜ dusaáyaa kÜNaasaazI

kÜNa kuNaacaaÊ kÜNa kÜzlaaÊ kÜNa kuNaacyaasaazI
KuLIca naatI jaÜDt hÜtÜ dusaáyaa kÜNaasaazI

maOflaIt laÜkaMcyaa AaiNak maOflaIt maaJyaahI
saUr dujyaaMcao XaÜQat hÜtÜ dusaáyaa kÜNaasaazI

Raghav
Monday, January 24, 2005 - 7:19 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

Aata kuzo AsaonaaÊ AEaUsa vaava maaJyaa
Aata kQaI vasaonaaÊ ivaXvaat gaava maaJyaa

tÜDuna baMQa sauTlaÜÊ Qaagao tnaamanaacao
Aata nakÜca AahoÊ naa%yaasa naava maaJyaa

to saUr vaMcanaocaoÊ Xvaasaat baw yaoqao
gaa} ksaa traNaaÊ hu-dyaat Gaava maaJyaa

hLuvaar baasaircaaÊ tÜ ek saUr AMtI
%yaacyaaivanaa na kÜzoÊ vaaNaIsa Baava maaJyaa

ranaavanaat ifrtÜÊ taáyaaMsavao ivahrtÜ
toqao basaUna dotÜÊ duÁKasa zava maaJyaa

Paragkan
Monday, January 24, 2005 - 12:31 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

p`saadÊ tU mahana Aahosa ..²

Good one Raghav !

Prasadmokashi
Monday, January 24, 2005 - 1:38 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

p`saadÊ

hI gaja,la pNa bahÜt Kuba .

tuJaa laoKih AavaDlaa... ma%laaÊ ma>aÊ rdIÔÊ kaiÔyaaÊ bahr hI gaja,laocaI AMga laxaat AalaolaI Aahot.

f> Aat ekca XaMka Aaho kI vaR<a kÜNato AaiNa ksao paLayacao ...

AxargaNa AaiNa maa~a vaR<aaitla gaja,laaMcao ]dahrNa idlasa tr Kupca Cana.

thanks re

raGavaÊ Canaca ²

~ p`saad

Jayavi
Tuesday, January 25, 2005 - 3:38 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

raGavaaÊ ekdma jamaoXa :-) ²²

Sonalee
Tuesday, January 25, 2005 - 5:23 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

rGava Kupca mast. ekdama manaalaa jaa]na iBaDNaarI

Raghav
Tuesday, January 25, 2005 - 5:45 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

p`saadÊ pragakNaÊ jayaaivaÊ saÜnaalaI savaa-Mnaa p`itiËyaoba_la Qanyavaad

Tusharvjoshi
Tuesday, January 25, 2005 - 6:30 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

raGavaaÊ

tU punaXca ilaihta JaalaasaÊ vaa vaa. Cana gaja,la ilaihlaIsa ro.

ilahIt jaa ro
saucaola saaro

tuJaacaÊ
tuYaar

Prasad_shir
Tuesday, January 25, 2005 - 5:22 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

raGava sauroK....

p`saadÊ praga... Qanyavaad²

Prasad_shir
Tuesday, January 25, 2005 - 5:25 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

maugQa baÜlaI

jaayacao Aaho kuzo to spYT kÜzoÆ
qaaMbalaÜ Aaho [qao to [YT kÜzoÆ

dUr maI laÜTU kXaI saMidgQata hI
janmatÁ maaJaIca jaI tI duYT kÜzo

jaayacao naahI malaa maI jaat naahI
qaaMbaNyaasaazI kXaacao kYT kÜzo²

inaNa-yaalaa vaoL qaÜDa laavaNaarI
maMd bauwI hI jaraÊ hI Ba`YT kÜzoÆ

jaaNatÜ Aata jara yaa jaaNaIvaaMnaa
AMtrIcaI maugQa baÜlaI i@laYT kÜzoÆ


Gandhar
Wednesday, January 26, 2005 - 11:18 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

p`saad bahÜt KUba.. ek na@kI kI tuJyaa gaJala vaacaUna hLU hLU yaa p`karatlaI gaÜDI vaaZto Aaho maaJaI.. gaJalavarIla laoK maahItIpuNa- Aaho.. laoK vaacaUna Jaalyaavar punha ekda gaJala vaacalyaa AaiNa ek vaogaLaca AanaMd imaLalaa.. Qanyavaad

Hems
Thursday, January 27, 2005 - 11:48 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

Sorry for not using devnagari.. Currently I am getting errors,somehow.

Prasad, thanks for that link.. I was looking for it actually!Very good info.
One question: gajhal should follow "laghu-guroo kram" in both lines of its all five or more "shers", is that right?

Can Prasad/any "gajhal-pir" help me here?Please!


 
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