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| | Thursday, January 13, 2005 - 3:09 am: | 
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ka^mPyauTrvar najar iKLvaUna basalaolyaa maItalaa Xaojaarcyaa ÔÜnacyaa irMganao jaaga AalaI.
" maItaÊ AgaM Aa^iÔsamaQyaoca Aahosa ka AjaUnaÆ " AMjaU baÜlat hÜtI.
" hmmm ... " ]<aradaKla maItanao evaZMca mhTlaM.
" [tkM kama baakI Aaho ka tuJaMÆ malaa trI saaMgaayacaMsa maI qaaMbalao Asato eKada tasa tuJyaasaÜbat...
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" jaa} do gaM.... Aaja maaJaM kXaatca laxa naahIyao. tulaa tr saaMigatlaM kI maI sakaLIca² "
" AÜhÊ ivanaItbarÜbarcyaa BaaMDNaaba_la mhNato Aahosa ka tUÆ ho baGaÊ navaIna navaIna
hÜtat gaM BaaMDNaM... hÜla sagaLM zIk² tU Ôar manaalaa laavaUna Gaotosa kahI kahI gaÜYTI² "
" AgaM navaIna navaIna mhNaayalaa AamhI kaya nauktoca AÜLKayalaa laagalaÜ AahÜt ka ekmaokaMnaa² caar vaYa-M
JaalaI Aata AamhI ekmaokaMnaa pihlyaaMda BaoTlaÜ %yaalaa² "
" AgaM pNa lagnaalaa caarca maihnao Jaalaot naa AjaUnaÆ AaiNa hÜ jyaasaazI ÔÜna kolaa to rahUnaca gaolaM...
tU kdaicat baahor DÜkavalaI nasaXaIla pNa baahor tuÔana pa}sa sauÉ Aaho AaiNa isalk baÜD-cyaa F,laaya
AÜvhrjavaL BayaMkr paNaI saacalaMya... tU Xa@yatÜ saaDo AazcaI basa caukU do} nakÜsa.... naahItr GarI
pÜcaayalaa tulaa iktI vaajatIla saaMgata yaot naahI. maI saaDo pacacaI inaGaalaolao tI Aa<aa pÜcatoya.
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ÔÜna zovaUna maItanao GaD\yaaL baiGatlaM.... Aaz vaajalao hÜto. itcaM kama tsaMhI AaTplaM hÜtM... itnao
mah%vaacaI maolsa pazvalaI. baakIcyaa gaÜYTI caok kolyaa AaiNa tI saaDo Aazcyaa basa saazI inaGaalaI.
baahor KrÜKrca tuÔana pa}sa sauÉ hÜta... BarIlaa baÜcara vaara AaiNa ivajaaMcaa kDkDaT.... maItanao C~I
doKIla AaNalaI navhtI. tXaat sao@yauirTIjavaLhI C~\yaa ]rlyaa navh%yaa.
" saa^rI ma^ma... Aaja baairXa bahÜt jyaada hO tÜ saba laÜga vaÜ dUsaro gaoTtk Cata laoko gayao hO.... Aba
vahaMsao kÜ Aayaogaa tÜhI imalaogaa Cata... "
%yaacyaa hatat idsaNaarI C~I maagaavaI AsaMhI itlaa vaaTUna gaolaM.... %yaanao idlaI
nasatI AaiNa Ôar vaaT pahNyaat kahI Aqa- navhta... tI tXaIca iBajat gaoT 2 kDo
inaGaalaI. pavasaacaa jaÜr caaMgalaaca hÜta. Aata maItalaa qaMDI vaajaayalaa laagalaI.
basamaQyao iXa$na itnao ek javaLpasa maagacaI jaagaa pkDlaI. basalyaavar itlaa jara barM vaaTlaM. itnao
AajaUbaajaUlaa ek najar TaklaI... basamaQyao ÔarXaI gadI- navhtI² laÜk AaQaIca inaGaUna gaolao AsaNaar....
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Shraddhak
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| | Thursday, January 13, 2005 - 3:21 am: |
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basa sauÉ JaalaI tXaI maItacyaa ivacaaraMnaIhI vaoga Gaotlaa. sakaLI sakaLI
ivanaItbarÜbar Jaalaolyaa BaaMDNaanao Aaja idvasaBar kamaat itcaM laxa laagalaM navhtM.
%yaamauLo Aaja idvasaBar itnao ivanaItlaa naohmaIcyaa iXars%yaap`maaNao fÜna krNaMhI TaLlaM..
Aata laavaUna pahUyaat ka fÜna... itlaa vaaTUna gaolaM tsaa caTkna itnao %yaacaa saola naMbar Dayala kolaa...
'The number you are dialing is switched off or moved out of coverage area.'
maItanao ÔÜna kT kolaa. gaolaa Asaola kuzotrI ima~aMbarÜbar ]naaD@yaa krayalaa... itlaa sakaLI Aalaolaa
raga Aata duPpT ]ÔaLUna Aalaa.
' ivanaItlaa jara mhNaUna kaLjaI naahI. baahor [tka pa}sa pDtÜya ...baayakÜ inaGaalaI kI naahI Aa^iÔsamaQaUna
... kXaacaMca yaalaa kahI vaaTt naahI. Aaja XauËvaar.. gaolaa Asaola jaunyaa Éma paT-nasa- barÜbar baahor.
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itcyaa DÜL\yaaMt paNaI AalaM....
maIta AaiNa ivanaIt dÜGaMhI saa^F,TvaoAr [MijanaIAsa- ... dÜGaaMcaI BaoT JaalaI baMgalaÜrmaQyao caar vaYaa-MpUvaI-.
ekaca Í,oXasa- ba^calaaÊ ekaca kMpnaIt hÜto to dÜGaM. yaa inaima<aanao JaalaolaI AÜLK hLU hLU vaaZt
gaolaI AaiNa dÜGao yaqaavakaXa ekmaokaMcyaa p`omaat pDlao. ivanaIt idllaIt vaaZlaolaa AaiNa pMjaabaI AsaUnadoKIla
maItacyaa GarcyaaMnaI lagnaalaa ÔarXaI hrkt GaotlaI naahI.
%yaaMcaI pihlaI BaoT Jaalyaacaa p`saMga Aa<aahI itlaa Aazvalaa... ek idvasa T/oinaMga saMplyaavar basasaazI
Qaavata Qaavata maIta kXaalaatrI ADKLUna Kalacyaa dgaDI ÔrXaIvar AapTlaI. tIhI naoma@yaa ]javyaa hatavar...
hat lagaoca duKayalaa laagalaa.. first aid box maQaUna AaNalaolaa sp`o maa$nahI hat duKayacaa qaaMbaonaa tovha kÜNaItrI itlaa mhTlaM...
" Aap ha^ispTla calaÜgaoÆ Í,^@car lagata hO.... "
itnao var baiGatlaM. ivanaIt %yaacyaa dÜna tIna ima~aMsaÜbat itqao Aalaa hÜta. ' Aroccaa ha tr Aaplyaa ba^cacaaca Í,oXar .. ' itlaa lagaoca AazvalaM... pihlyaa idvaXaI sagaLI ba^ca ek~ hÜtI tovha paihlaM hÜtM yaalaa. maItacaa hat
baraca duKt hÜta %yaamauLo itlaa ha^ispTlamaQyao jaaNyaavaacaUna ga%yaMtr navhtM.
" kOsao jaayaoMgaoÆ basa tÜ calaI ga. " tI mhTlaI.
" maaJyaakDo kar Aaho... " tÜ XaaMtpNao mhNaalaa...
maItalaa p`caMD AaXcaya- vaaTlaM. Í,oXarkDo pNa kar AsaU Xakto ha p`kar itlaa navaIna hÜta. %yaacyaa ima~aMnaI
maItacaM ivaKurlaolaM saamaana Aavaropya-Mt ivanaIt kar Gao}na Aalaa.
" tU rahtosa kuzoÆ itqalyaaca eKaVa javaLpasacyaa ha^ispTlamaQyao jaa}
AapNa... "
" kÜrmaMgalaa... malaa vaaTtM St. John's saÜyaIcaM pDola. "
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Shraddhak
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| | Thursday, January 13, 2005 - 3:30 am: |
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ivanaItcao ima~ isalk baÜD-javaL ]t$na gaolao AaiNa kar maQyao ivanaIt AaiNa maIta dÜGaMca raihlao.
" tU Í,oXar Aahosa naaÆ maI tulaa paihlaM hÜtM pihlyaa idvaXaI. " maIta mhTlaI. itlaa KrM tr tr tuJyaakDo Í,oXar AsaUna kar kXaI ho ivacaarayacaI Anaavar [cCa hÜt hÜtI
pNa tÜ Ôarca Aagaa}pNaa Jaalaa Asata......
" %yaapoxaa tU sarL ivacaar maI kar kXaI kaya Gao}na AalaÜya.... " ivanaIt hsat ]d\gaarlaa.
" AaÐ tulaa ksaM kLlaMÆ "
" AgaM %yaat kaya Aaplyaa Aa^iÔsamaQyao baáyaaca laÜkaMnaI ivacaarlaMya ho malaa... baaya d vaoÊ yaacaM
saaQaM karNa mhNajao maaJyaa GarI dÜna kar Aahot jyaatlaI ek kuNaIca sahsaa vaaprt naahI. maI jaovha baMgalaÜrlaa
AalaÜ tovha Gao}na AalaÜ tI kar maga... "
' majjaa Aaho yaacaI² ' maIta manaat mhTlaI.
baÜlata baÜlata to St. John's paXaI yao}na pÜcalao. Da^@TrnaI maItacaa hat vyavaisqat caok k$na Í,^@car nasalyaacaa inavaa-La idlaa.
maItalaa to eokUna hayasaM vaaTlaM....
...pNa to X-ray vagaOrocao saÜpskar AaTpopya-Mt ra~Icao saaDo Aaz vaajaUna gaolao.
" tU jaovaayalaa yaoNaar maaJyaabarÜbarÆ " ivanaItnao ivacaarlaM tXaI maIta p`caMD
AvaGaDlaI. Aajaca nauktI AÜLK JaalaolaI... jaavaM ka jaovaayalaa ... naahItrI GarI
gaolyaavar svayaMpak krNyaacaI itlaa mauLIca [cCa ]rlaI navhtI.
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Tulip
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| | Thursday, January 13, 2005 - 4:00 am: |
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wow Eawo.. sahI sTaT- Jaalaaya.. AgadI TayaTla sakT Í,oXa vaaTtya vaacatanaa. pNa lagaoca Tak ga puZo.
pNa ho kaya sagaLo S/W vaalyaaMba_lca kqaot Asat. jagaat dusarI hI fields Asatat mhMTla. 
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Kandapohe
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| | Thursday, January 13, 2005 - 4:09 am: |
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Ababa²² Ea tuJyaa maQao ha gauNa pNa AahoÆ ho malaa maaiht navhto²² jabarIca²² calaa Aat puZo jaa] do
kqaanak²²
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Sayonara
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| | Thursday, January 13, 2005 - 6:42 am: |
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Aro vaa sauÉvaat Cana JaalaIyao. yao} dot puZcaM pTapT.
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sahI ilaihto Aahosa.  . .... ..
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Swabhi
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| | Thursday, January 13, 2005 - 12:45 pm: |
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Cana caalalayaÊ
yao]do puZca lavakr lavakr
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Manee
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| | Friday, January 14, 2005 - 7:02 am: |
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EawaÊ lavakr ilahI naa puZcaM.
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Gandhar
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| | Friday, January 14, 2005 - 7:23 am: |
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Eawa sahIca gaM... pNa Aata puZcyaa BaagaasaazI saÜmavaarcaI vaaT baGaavaI laagaNaar 
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Jayavi
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| | Sunday, January 16, 2005 - 10:11 am: |
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EaQdaÊ sauÉvaat Kupca ]%saukta vaaZvato AahoÊ lavakr puNa- kr gaM ²²
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Eawo.... tU kqaa ilahItIyaosa²²² ga`oT²²² puZcaM ilahI pTkna...
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Shraddhak
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| | Sunday, January 16, 2005 - 9:41 pm: |
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" tU ksalaa ivacaar krto Aahosa evaZaÆ maI kahI tulaa DoTvar naot naahIyao. vaaTlyaasa (a jaovaNaacaM ibalasauwa
XaoAr k$ AapNa² " ivanaIt maÜkLopNaanao mhNaalaa tXaI irla^@sa hÜ}na tI %yaacyaasaÜbat jaovaayalaa gaolaI.
(a inaima<aanao JaalaolaI AÜLK puZo vaaZt gaolaI. sauÉvaatIlaa trI BaoTIMmaagao kuNaacaItrI vaaZidvasaacaI
paTI-Ê ikMvaa ga`upnao Pla^na kolaolao Aa}iTMgsa Asao inaima<a Asao. jaovha ivanaakarNa BaoTI vaaZayalaa
laagalyaa tovha maa~ dÜGaaMnaahI jaaNaIva JaalaIca p`omaat pDlyaacaI....
........jaÜrat ba`ok laagaUna basa qaaMbalaI tXaI maIta ekdma Baanaavar AalaI. samaÜr dUrpya-Mt vaahnaaMcaI
raMga laagalaI hÜtI. kovha pÜcaNaar AapNaÆ itnao htaXapNao GaD\yaaL paihlaM. saaDo na} hÜt Aalao hÜto..
baapro ek tasa Jaalaa basamaQyao basaUna AaiNa trIdoKIla kÜrmaMgalaacyaa javaL naahIyao AapNa... manaatlyaa
manaat itnao AMjaUcao AaBaar maanalao. basalyaa jaagaI kahItrI Tamapasa mhNaUna itnao saolavar gaoma
KoLayalaa sauÉvaat kolaI. ' punha laavaavaa ka ivanaItlaa ÔÜnaÆ ' itlaa vaaTlaM tsaa itnao punha %yaacaa saola naMbar Dayala kolaa..
"The number you are dialing is switched off or moved out of coverage area."
haca yaaMi~k maosaoja punha eokU Aalyaavar itlaa jara ivaica~ vaaTlaM. sahsaa ÔÜna baMd nasatÜ yaacaa²
Aaja kuzo gaolaaya dova jaaNaoÆ itlaa jara kaLjaI vaaTlaI. itnao punha iKDkIbaahor najar TaklaI. sagaLI
vaahnaM AgadI mauMgaIcyaa gatInao puZo sarkt hÜtI. itnao maagao rolaUna saITcyaa kazavar DÜkM ToklaM.
....pUvaI- itlaa Asaa ]XaIr Jaalaa kI ivanaIt iktI Asvasqa vhayacaa. saarKa saarKa ÔÜna krayacaa. Aata
kuzvar AalaIyao basaÆ ha ekca p`Xna. maga %yaacaM to itlaa inammyaa AMtravar Gyaayalaa yaoNaM.. maga ' Aata tU GarI jaa}na nakÜca k$sa svayaMpak² ' mhNat itlaa baahor jaovaayalaa Gao}na jaaNaMÊ ra~I baora~I ek dID vaajata itlaa ÔÜna krNaM² Aata sagaLM
kmaI kmaI hÜt jaaNaar kI kayaÆ hoca hÜtM ka lagnaanaMtrÆ kI AapNa yaalaa parKayalaa cauklaÜÆ
to ekmaokaMcyaa p`omaat pDlyaalaa caar vaYa-M JaalaolaI AsalaI trI ekmaokaMnaa pUNa-pNao jaaNaUna Gyaayalaa
to dÜGaM saarKo saÜbat hÜto kuzMÆ kQaI %yaacyaa tr kQaI itcyaa onsite assignments cyaa inaima<aanao Jaalaolyaa prdoXavaaáyaaÊ naMtr ivanaItcyaa jaa^ba caoMjacaa gaÜMQaLÊ %yaatUna %yaanao
hOdrabaadlaa ksao basao kaZlaolao saat maihnao..... navaI naÜkrI Asalyaanao ibacaara jaast BaaMDUhI Xakt
navhta.
tÜ pihlyaaMda saat Aaz maihnao onsite jaaNaar hÜta tovhacaa p`saMga maItalaa Aazvalaa. rDUna rDUna iktI gaÜMQaL Gaatlaa hÜta itnao. baMgalaÜr
eArpÜT-var %yaacyaa gaL\yaat pDUna rDtanaa XaMBar vaoLa itnao %yaacyaakDUna ' maI itqao saat maihnyaaMhUna jaast ek idvasahI rahNaar naahI ' ho vadvaUna GaotlaM hÜtM.
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Shraddhak
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| | Sunday, January 16, 2005 - 10:06 pm: |
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.... ivanaIt navaIna jaa^bamaQyao qaÜDa saoTla Jaalyaavar maga maa~ dÜGaaMnaI lagaocaca lagna krNyaacaa
inaNa-ya Gaotlaa. iktI dRYT laagaNyaasaarKa saÜhLa hÜta tÜ. maItacyaa hÝXaI saasarcyaaMnaI itcyaasaazI
mhNaUna dÜnhI pwtInao lagnaacaa GaaT Gaatlaa hÜta. ivanaIt [klaÝta baoTa Asalyaanao lagnaat kXaalaa kahI
kmaI navhtM.
'Clashes are directly proportional to the time you spend together. AsaM AsaNaar bahutok. maItalaa vaaTlaM. karNa lagnaanaMtr saarKo naahIt trI dÜGaaMt KTko ]Dayalaa laagalao.
karNa xaullak AsaayacaM barocada.... trIsauwa ' AaQaI AsaM navhtM² ' ho maItalaa vaarMvaar vaaTayacaM.
ivanaItcaa ima~ maOi~NaIMcaa ga`up tsaa baraca maÜza.... AaiNa tÜ %yaaMcyaamaQyao rmaayacaahI ittkaca²
maItacaI Apoxaa hÜtI lagnaanaMtr %yaanao jaastIt jaast vaoL AaplyaabarÜbar Gaalavaavaa AXaI. to tI %yaalaa
vaarMvaar baÜlaUna daKvao.
" Come on Meeta. Don't be so childish." ivanaIt ek idvasa vaOtagaUna mhNaalaa. " to pNa maaJao javaLcao ima~ Aahot. AaiNa rÜja rÜja jaatÜya ka maI %yaaMnaa BaoTayalaaÆ kahItrIca ivacaar
krt Asatosa tU² "
%yaaMcyaa [tr savayaIMmaQalaohI Ôrk maItalaa Aata spYTpNao jaaNavaU laagalao. Garcaa saQana AsalyaamauLo
Asaola kdaicat pNa ivanaIt pOsaa saZL hsto Kca- krI. sahja mhNaUna Xaa^ipMgalaa gaolyaavar manaalaa Baavaola
tI vastU garja nasalaI trI Gao}na yaoNaM ho ina%yaacaMca.
ek idvasa AitXaya ]%saahanao GarI yao}na %yaanao iD@laoAr kolaM...
" maItUÊ maI navaIna baak GaotÜya² plsar... ksalaI Jakasa Aaho. Then we will go on a looong drive." Garat ek gaaDI tI hI kar Asatanaa navaIna baak GaoNaM ho maItacyaa AaklanaapilakDcaM hÜtM. itnao karcaa
ivaYaya kaZlyaavar %yaanao tÜ ]DvaUna laavalaa.
" h^T tI jaunaI kar Aaho. AaiNa tI maI kuzo ivakayalaa caalalaÜyaÆ tI hI rahIla kI Garatca laagalaI tr....
pNa baak caalavaNaM ksalaM kUla Aaho naaÆ " puZo baÜlaNyaat kahIhI Aqa- navhtaca.
tsaMca to TV AaiNa ip@casa- pahNyaacaM vaoD.... ivanaIt GarI Asaola tovha %yaalaa TV samaÜ$na hlavaayalaa maItalaa p`ya%naaMcaI iXakst kravaI laagao.
" ivanaItÊ ba`okÔasT krayalaa yaotÜsa naaÆ "
" [kDoca do AaNaUna² "
" ivanaItÊ BaajaI naahIyao Garat ekhI. jaatÜsa ka ÔUD\valD-laa... "
"Ummm... qaÜD\yaa vaoLanao ... ha evaZa ip@car saMpU do naM² "
ho dr rivavaar sakaLcao saMvaad... maItacaI AXaanao Ôar icaDicaD hÜ.
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Shraddhak
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| | Sunday, January 16, 2005 - 10:59 pm: |
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ivanaIt tsaa KUp inaragasa hÜta. tI ragavalaIyao ho kLlaM kI tÜ Asvasqa hÜ. maga itcaI manaQarNaI krNyaasaazI
itcyaasamaÜr iÔlmaI sTalanao gauDGao TokUna basaNaMÊ AazvatIla to Dayalaa^gsa eokvaUna itlaa hsavaNyaacaa
p`ya%na krNaMÊ itlaa svat : jaovaNa tyaar k$na BarvaNaM Asao naanaa p`kar tÜ krayacaa. %yaacyaa evaZ\yaa p`ya%naaMnaMtr maItacaa raga
iTkt nasao.
pNa jaovha jaovha %yaaMcaM kDa@yaacaM BaaMDNa hÜ tovha maIta Ôar ]dasa hÜ}na jaa. Aalaa ÔÜna laavaUna
ho sagaLM saaMgaavaM AsaM itlaa hjaarda vaaTo. pNa itlaa itcyaa lagnaaAaQaI Aanao mhTlaolaM Aazvao...
" maItaÊ Aaplyaat AaiNa ivanaItcyaa background maQyao Ôar Ôrk Aaho. tulaa Ka~I Aaho naa tU adjust k$ XakXaIla mhNaUnaÆ Aamhalaa tulaa satt sauKI pahayacaMya... tovha naIT ivacaar k$naca kaya tÜ inaNa-ya
Gao. "
%yaamauLo Aata %yaaMcyaa BaaMDNaaMba_la Aalaa saaMgaNaM maItalaa kmaIpNaacaM vaaTo. na jaaNaÜÊ GarcyaaMnaI
' trI AamhI AaQaIca mhNat hÜtÜ..... " Asaa saUr laavalaa trÆ itlaa tÜ Aaplaa praBava vaaTayacaa.
..... " kaya ro marayacaM Aaho kaÆ " D/ayavhr jaÜrat AÜrDlaa tXaI maIta caaMgalaIca dcaklaI. savvaa dha²²² baapro AjaUna iktI laoTÆ ivanaItnao
ÔÜna ka naahI kolaaÆ
itnao %yaacyaa Aa^iÔsacaa naMbar Dayala kolaa.... baraca vaoL irMga Jaalyaavar ÔÜna ]calalaa gaolaa. p`tIk
baÜlat hÜta.. ivanaItcaa p`Üjao@T maoT²
"Hey Meeta, how are you?"
" p`tIkÊ ivanaIt kuzoyaÆ "
" AgaM tÜ sahalaaca inaGaUna gaolaa Aa^iÔsamaQaUna² tU %yaalaa dma idlaolaasa kI kayaÆ karNa Aaja AamhI
baahor jaaNaar hÜtÜ tÜhI Pla^na %yaanao k^nsala kolaa tU ragavaXaIla mhNaUna² " p`tIk hsat hsat mhNaalaa.
"Be serious pratik... are you sure he left office by 6 o'clock?"
"Yep Meeta, what's the matter anyway?"
%yaalaa kXaalaa AaplaI ramakhaNaI saaMgaa Asaa ivacaar k$na maItanao %yaacyaaXaI qaatur maatur baÜlaUna
ÔÜna kT kolaa.
.... Aata tI KrMca kaLjaIt pDlaI. Aa^iÔsamaQyao naahIyaoÊ saola laagat naahIyaoÊ GarIÆÆÆÆÆ
itnao Garcaa ÔÜna laavalaa. nausatI irMga jaat hÜtI pNa kÜNaIca ÔÜna ]calaonaa.
"Oh my god, vineet!!!!" Aatapya-Mtcaa itnao ksaa basaa maoMToMna kolaolaa QaIr KrMca sauTlaa.
' kuzo gaolaa Asaola haÆ ' %yaatUna Aaja pa}sa AaiNa ivanaItlaa baak fast caalavaayacaI savaya Aaho... pavasaanao KD\Do BarlyaamauLo AaiNa to ra~I na idsalyaamauLo Jaalaolyaa A^i@saDoMT\sacyaa
hoDlaansa itcyaa DÜL\yaaMsamaÜr trLUna gaolyaa. tXaat nauktaca paihlaolaa " saaiqayaa " DÜ@yaat tajaa hÜta. ivanaItlaa A^i@saDoMTÆÆÆ
" XaI ksalao BayaMkr ivacaar krtÜya AapNa² " itnao svat : laa dTavalaM KrM pNa tÜ ivacaar manaatUna jaanaa.
Aaja sakaLI prmaItcyaa ÔÜnava$na JaalaolaI vaadavaadI itlaa AazvalaI. prmaIt ivanaItcaa Kasa dÜst. tÜ
australia laa caalalaa hÜta kayamacaa. %yaanao XauËvaarI ivanaItlaa p^ikMgalaa madtIlaa yao mhNaUna sakaLI sakaLI
ÔÜna kolaa tsaM maItacaa maUD gaolaa.
" AgaM pNa malaa vaaTlaM tuJaM Xaa^ipMga ek idvasaanao hÜla pÜsTpÜna... so I promised him that I will come!"
KrM tr maItalaa itcyaa vaaZidvasaacaM Xaa^ipMga krayalaa jaayacaM hÜtM Aaja. itnao Cana pOkI Pla^na kolaa
hÜta... Cana pOkI Xaa^ipMga tohI ivanaItcyaa AavaDIp`maaNao maga eKaVa ha^TolamaQyao kÐDla laaT iDnar.....
pNa prmaItcaM p^ikMga maQyao AalyaamauLo Aata itcaa Pla^na k^nsala hÜNaar hÜta.
" ivanaItÊ AjaUnahI maaJyaasaazIcaa vaoL tU dusaáyaaMnaa sahja do}na TaktÜ Aahosa. maaJaI tulaa kahIca ikMmat
naahIyao kaÆ "
" maUKa-saarKM baÜlaU nakÜsa. tuJaa Pla^na AapNa ]VahI pUNa- k$ XaktÜ pNa prmaItcyaa madtIlaa jaaNaM garjaocaM
Aaho. ekTI BaaBaI AaiNa BarIlaa %yaacaI tI lahana maulaM... ksaM ma^naoja krtIla toÆ "
maItalaa to pTt hÜtM pNa kuzotrI itcaa AhMkar duKavalaa gaolaa hÜta. maaJyaapoxaa prmaIt jaast mah%vaacaa
AahoÆÆ (a eka mau_\yaalaa Qa$na itnao %yaacyaaXaI baraca vaad Gaatlaa. baÜlata baÜlata itnao poinsala
]calalaI AaiNa samaÜrcyaa k^laoMDrvar Aajacyaa tarKolaa ek Ëa^sa kolaa.
" ho kaya navaInacaÆ "
" saaiqayaacaI hI idea Cana Aaho naahIÆ Ô> evaZMca hÜla kI Aaplyaa k^laoMDrcyaa p`%yaok DoTvar AXaa Ôulyaa AsatIla. " tI ]phasaanao mhTlaI.
ha TÜmaNaa maa~ ivanaItlaa caaMgalaaca laagalaa.
" [tka jar maI vaaT maaNaUsa Aaho tr do saÜDUna malaa² " AsaM mhNaUna ba`okÔasThI na krta baakcaI caavaI ]calaUna tÜ tIrasaarKa Garabaahor pDlaa.
..... ivanaIt icaDlaa kI baak r^Xa caalavatÜ ho maItalaa AazvalaM. Aaja AsaMca kolaM Asaola tr %yaanao²
dovaa²
Acaanak maItacyaa DÜ@yaat T\yaUba poTlaI. prmaIt²
" BaOyaa maO maIta² ivanaIt hO naa Aapko yahaMÆ " itnao AQaIrpNao ivacaarlaM.
" naa ro maIta. maora p^ikMga tÜ vaÜ T/ansapÜT-vaalao nao Ktma kr idyaa dÜphr mao hI. tÜ Xaama kÜ maOnao
ivanaItkÜ ka^la kr ko baÜlaa Aanao kI jaÉrt naa hO Aba² @yaa huAa maItaÆ " %yaacyaa svarat kaLjaI hÜtI.
prmaItcaa ÔÜna baMd kolyaavar maga maa~ maIta KrMca p^inak JaalaI.
' ivanaItÊ i am so sorry! ÔÜna ka naahI krt Aahosa malaaÆ [tka pNa ragavaU nakÜsa ro² maI cauklao AsaonaÊ pNa tulaa kahI JaalaM
tr maI jagaUca XakNaar naahI ro... '
maItacyaa DÜL\yaaMtUna Aata AEaU vaahayalaa laagalao.
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Sashal
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Cana vaaTto Aaho kqaa ..
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Jayavi
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| | Monday, January 17, 2005 - 4:48 am: |
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mast pkD Gaotoya kqaa .......²
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Shraddhak
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| | Monday, January 17, 2005 - 6:05 am: |
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"Hey are you alright? You are crying." XaojaarI basalaolyaa maulaInao itlaa AasqaonaM ivacaarlaM.
"Oh yes! It's just... it's just... I am stressed because of work, having back ache!" maItanao itlaa qaap maarlaI. %yaa maulaIlaa to pTlaM bahutok. itnao puZo kahI ivacaarlaM naahI.
maItalaa AMjaUcaM baÜlaNaM Aazvat hÜtM.
" maItaÊ try to think . tU tuJyaa kamaacaM tension, frustration GarI jaa}na ivanaItvar tr naahI naa kaZtÆ ikMvaa %yaacyaakDUna sauwa AsaM hÜt naahIyao naaÆ ho Ôar ka^mana
Aaho gaM [qaM. ektr (a Xahrat Ô> dÜGaMca dÜGaM. AaiNa %yaatUna Aaplyaa field maQalao ho Asao taNa tNaava² sagaLa raga maga inaGatÜ jaÜDIdaravar² ho kQaI trI zIk Aaho gaMÊ pNa satt
AsaM vhayalaa laagalaM tr puZo tumhIca tuTt jaala ekmaokaMpasaUna² " AsaMca ekda itcyaa AaiNa ivanaItcyaa BaaMDNaanaMtr AMjaU itlaa samajavatanaa mhNaalaI hÜtI. ' tovhahI Ô> to eokUna saÜDUna idlaM ka AapNaÆ %yaavar ivacaar ka naahI kolaaÆ ' maIta ivacaar krt hÜtI.
ivanaIt kQaI %yaacyaa kamaacaM tension GarI jaaNavaU dot naahIÊ maItalaa Acaanak vaaTUna gaolaM. %yaalaahI kaLjyaa AsatIlaca naM pNa to kQaIca
tÜ maaJyaasamaÜr idsaU dot naahIÊ maIta svat : XaIca ivacaar krt hÜtI. itlaa AazvalaM ivanaItcaM naohmaI itlaa AanaMdI zovaayasaazI QaDpDNaM... tÜ kQaI
kQaI vaagatÜ caukIcaM pNa AapNa kahI kahI gaÜYTI KrMca ]gaIcaca manaalaa tr naahI naa laavaUna GaotÊ AMjaU
mhTlaI tsaMÆ
May be I need to know Vineet more, for our life together... may be we both need to change a bit to accept each other completely !!
punha ekda basa jaÜrdar Qa@ka basaUna qaaMbalaI tXaI maItacyaa ivacaaraMcaI ilaMk tuTlaI.
' pNa... pNa Aa<aa ivanaIt kuzo AahoÆ dovaaÊ tÜ zIk AsaU do.... '
puZcaa AQaa- tasa maItanao p`caMD Asvasqatot kaZlaa. pa}sa kmaI vhayacaM naava Gaot navhta. rs%yaat izkizkaNaI
paNaI saacaUna vaahnaM ADklaolaI hÜtI. maItacaM maa~ yaa kXaakDoca laxa navhtM. itlaa Ô> ivanaItcaa
Qyaasa laagalaa hÜta.
hLU hLU sarkt basa itcyaa sTa^ppaXaI pÜcalaI tXaI maIta basamaQaUna ]trlaI AaiNa GarakDo javaLpasa pLt
sauTlaI. AMQaarÊ pa}saÊ rs%yaavarcao KD\Do ... kXaakXaacaMhI itlaa Baana ]rlaM navhtM. gallaIcyaa TÜkalaa
vaLUna tI GarasamaÜr AalaI AaiNa GaagadI-t ÔaTk ]GaDUna Aat iXarlaI.
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Shraddhak
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.... baahor vhraMD\yaat zovalaolyaa KucaI-var ba^ga pÜTaXaI Gao}na tÜ gaaZ JaÜplaa hÜta. itcaa ivanaIt.
XaojaarI TIpa^yavar pDlaolaa sauMdrsaa bauko... payaaMt ~aNa nasalyaasaarKI tI hLU hLU payaáyaa caZUna
var AalaI AaiNa %yaacyaakDo ekTk pahat raihlaI.
tÜ sauKÉp Aaho %yaasaazI AanaMdI vhavaM kI %yaacyaamauLo [tka vaoL jao tension AalaM hÜtM %yaaba_la %yaalaa jaaba ivacaaravaaÊ ho itlaa ]magaonaa. tXaIca itqao ]BaI rahUna tI maUkpNao
rDayalaa laagalaI.
tovaZ\yaat itcyaa caahulaInao tÜ jaagaa Jaalaa. tI rDtoya ho %yaalaa kLayalaa dÜna saokMdhI laagalao naahIt.
" maItUÊ kaya gaM kaya JaalaMÆ " %yaacyaa %yaa p`Xnaanao itcyaa AEaUMcaa baaMQa AjaUnaca ÔuTlaa. %yaacyaa imazIt iXa$na tI hmasaahmaXaI
rDU laagalaI.
" maItUÊ AgaM tulaa kÜNaI kahI baÜlalaM kaÆ Aa^iÔsamaQyao kahI JaalaM kaÆ " ivanaIt purta gaÜMQaLUna gaolaa hÜta.
" maUK- maaNasaaÊ saola ka baMd zovalaa Aahosa tuJaaÆ AaiNa Asaa baahor ka basalaa AahosaÆ Garat jaata yaot
naahI tulaaÆ " rDU AaiNa saMtapamauLo maItalaa QaD baÜlata doKIla yaot navhtM.
" AgaM Aaja sakaLI tuJyaavar icaDUna baahor pDlaÜ AaiNa GaracaI caavaI GyaayacaI ivasarlaÜ. %yaatUna tUhI
XaojaarI caavaI zovalaI naahIsa. AaiNa maaJyaa saolacaI ba^TrI iDscaaja- JaalaIya. maI saaDo sahalaa GarI
pÜcalaÜ AaiNa ivacaar kolaa qaÜDa vaoL tuJaI vaaT pahUna maga piblak ÔÜna baUqa va$na tulaa ÔÜna kravaa.
pNa malaa [qaoca JaÜp laagaUna gaolaI
pNa tulaa kaya JaalaM maItUÆ "
maga itnao AqapasaUna [itpya-Mt %yaalaa sagaLM eokvalaM. %yaacyaapasaUna duravaNyaacaI tI Asa( klpnaa....
"Oh my god! maItU vaoDI kI kaya gaM tUÆ maI kuzo jaaNaar Aaho tulaa saÜDUnaÆ "
" maga Aaja idvasaBarat ÔÜna ka naahI kolaasaÆ "
" icaDlaÜ hÜtÜ tuJyaavar KUp² vaaTlaM kaya Aqa- Aaho yaa relationship laa... sakaLI tr baak r^Xa caalavatanaa AapTNaar hÜtÜ eka izkaNaI²²²²
saMQyaakaLI XaaMt basaUna DÜLo imaTUna Gaotlao tovha tuJaaca caohra Aalaa DÜL\yaaMsamaÜr... maaJyaavar
ragaavaNaarIÊ ÉsaNaarI tU.. maaJyaa manavaNyaanao KUXa hÜNaarI tU... tulaa saÜDUna maI trI kuzo jaaNaar
hÜtÜÆ
%yaatca prmaItcaM kama Jaalyaacaa ÔÜna Aalaa AaiNa tulaa sarp`aJa VayacaM mhNaUna tsaaca GarI AalaÜ.
"
" AaiNa to kayaÆ " TI pa^yavar zovalaolyaa baukokDo baÜT daKvaUna itnao ivacaarlaM...
" tulaa manavaNyaasaazI maItU... AaiNa ekca saaMgatÜ... tU maaJyaavar ragavaÊ AÜrD pNa $saUna jaat jaa}
nakÜsa gaM.... p`caMD Asvasqa hÜtÜ maI... kaya kravaM maaJaM malaaca saucat naahI.
tuma Éza naa krÜÊ mauJao manaanaa nahI Aata² " tÜ AgadI p`amaaiNakpNao mhNaalaa.
" ha XaovaTcaa kuzlyaatrI isanaomaacaa Dayalaa^gaca naMÆ " tI %yaalaa punha ibalagaUna hsat hsat ]d\gaarlaI.
...samaaPt
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Charu_ag
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| | Monday, January 17, 2005 - 8:53 am: |
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AgadI sauroKÊ AaiNa svat : XaIca Kup p`amaaiNak vaaTlaI kqaa.. AitXaya AÜGavatI Aaho. manaapasauna AavaDavaI AXaI.
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Yog
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| | Monday, January 17, 2005 - 11:31 am: |
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vaa² very realistic .. !
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Manee
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| | Monday, January 17, 2005 - 12:42 pm: |
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vaah²² mastca Aaho kqaa² ekdma AavaDlaI²
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Maitri
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| | Monday, January 17, 2005 - 1:32 pm: |
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vva²²²²² AitXaya saundr kqaa jamalaIya.
EaQda sauroKca²
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Madhura
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| | Monday, January 17, 2005 - 3:41 pm: |
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Eawa Ê vaa mastca Aaho kqaa. caaMgala ilaihtosa.
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Ldhule
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| | Monday, January 17, 2005 - 7:52 pm: |
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Cana ilaihlaIya kqaa....
jaovaNaalaa imaza iXavaaya AaiNa saMsaaralaa Ésavyaa fugavyaaMiXavaaya kahI Aqa- naahI...... ek Dayalaa^ga.
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EawaÊ Canaca ga. AavaDlaI gaÜYT ²
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Chinmay
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| | Monday, January 17, 2005 - 9:59 pm: |
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Eawa.. kqaa mastca.. ²²
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Upas
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| | Monday, January 17, 2005 - 11:12 pm: |
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EaÊ Cana ilaihlayasa.. gaÜD AgadI.. baGa naa iktI ]qaL ivacaar krtat naa maulaI kahI vaoLa.. AaiNa maga
XaMka kaLjaI... ~d
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Tulip
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| | Tuesday, January 18, 2005 - 12:40 am: |
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Eawo.. pihlaa p`ya%na stu%ya Aaho (at XaMka naahI.. pNa...
marazI XaIYa-k Asato tr kqaocaI gaÜDI Ajauna vaaZlaI AsatI Asao naahI ka vaaTtÆ naayak pMjaabaI kaÆ marazI
t$Na Asata tr BaaMDNao jaast KmaMga JaalaI AsatI Asao naahI ka vaaTtÆ XaovaTI tÜ ibacaara vhraMD\yaamaQao
JaÜplaolaa daKvalaa Aahosa. baMgalaÜra maQao XaojaarQama- mhNaUna Garat baÜlaavaNyaacaI pwt naahI Asao
saucavaayacao Aaho kaÆ ( ivacaaraMmaQao saKÜlata iktI AahoÊ XaovaT gauMDaLlaa Aahosa ka naaihsaÊ t%sama baabaIMvar jara ivacaar
k$na p`itiËyaa TakIna ga ) ...
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Jayavi
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| | Tuesday, January 18, 2005 - 2:54 am: |
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EaQdaÊ just great ²² Ôarca sauroK ilaihlaM Aahosa gaM ²² AgadI KrIKurI vaaTto AaiNa %yaamauLoca manaalaa iBaDto ²²
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Shraddhak
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| | Tuesday, January 18, 2005 - 3:02 am: |
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sagaL\yaaMcyaa p`itiËyaaMsaazI manaapasaUna Qanyavaad...
T\yauilapÊ tuJyaa p`XnaaMcaI ]<arM pUNa- ivacaaraMtI dona hÜ... 
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Kedard
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| | Tuesday, January 18, 2005 - 4:31 am: |
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Jabardast Shraddha !!!
There r many words to describe your Story, but i feel this one is more appropriate.
keep it up.
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Zashi
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| | Tuesday, January 18, 2005 - 5:49 am: |
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atishay sundar katha lihili ahes. ani lamb lachak ratal ani far wat phayala lavnari naslyamule farach awadli.
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Avdhut
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| | Tuesday, January 18, 2005 - 1:56 pm: |
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EaQda Ôarca Cana kqaa.
Tulip kdacaIt Káyaa kqaotlaa tÉNa Punjabi Asaavaa ikMvaa marazI tÉNaa javaL Job laagataca Car daKvaaNao EaQdalaa pTlao nasaola.
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Apurv
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| | Tuesday, January 18, 2005 - 2:29 pm: |
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farca Cana Aaho kqaa
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