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Sonalee
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| | Monday, November 22, 2004 - 11:51 pm: | 
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Ama`utaÊ yaÜgaoXa manaapasaUna AaBaar. ivakasa kivata Canaca.
saÜnaalaI
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Dhruv
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| | Tuesday, November 23, 2004 - 12:10 am: |
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yaavao punha iÔÉnaI
tva kuXaImaQao iXaravao
pdr DÜL\yaaMcao ZLunaI
AEauMcao baaMQa ÔuTavao
ivasaÉnaI vaodnaaMnaI
duÁK tuJaoca jagaavao
hlakoca spXaa-MmaQaunaI
mana maÜripsaaMcao vhavao
Asao GaDavao ekda
ekdaca to GaDavao
vhavao tuJao sava-sva
maI maIpNa ivasaravao
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Tanmay80
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| | Tuesday, November 23, 2004 - 2:55 pm: |
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namaskar mandali,
maayboli site baddal mala thode diwasanpurwi kalale,
ithe baryach sundar kavita wachayla milalya...
majhyakadun lihilya gelelya hya don oli :-)
Ring vaaj,taca fÜnacaIÊtIca Asaola yaacaIÊ
AaXaa prt yaoto...
fÜna lavakr ]calaayacaIÊitcaa Aavaaja, e@nyaacaIÊ
Gaa tovZI hÜto..
prt laT\koca ragavaayacaIÊ qaÜDosao AaDuna baÜlaaiycaÊ
AazvaNa maa~ hÜto....
itcyaa sauroK hasyaacaIÊ AÜz mauD\pUna ragaavlyaacaIÊ
baoirja, saaiK-ca yaoto
XaovTI prt jaulavaayacaIÊ AayauYyaalaa ek~ AnauBavaayacaIÊ
Aasa tI ra*to...
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Gandhar
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| | Tuesday, November 23, 2004 - 10:28 pm: |
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tnmaya Cana AÜLI Aahot.. naivana AsaUnahI tumacaa dovanaagarIt ilaihNyaacaa p`ya%na kÝtukaspd Aaho.. dovanaagarI
ilaihNyaasaazI madt laagalyaasa [qao iTcakI maara 
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gauMta saÜDvatanaa...
maja kLt AjaUnahI naahI gahna gaUZ ho ksalao Æ
baMd manaacaI daro... trI baMQa ksao naa tuTlao Æ
ka nyaahaLt jaato hllaI maI tLhataMcyaa roYaa Æ
lakIr navaI ]maTavaI Â kuzlaI vaoDI AaXaa Æ
manaÜmanaI gad- ipsaara Alavaarsao fulato naato
AMtr jarI maOlaaMcao... maja vaoZUna kÜNa ho Gaoto Æ
iBajaUna icaMba mana Jaalao... XabdaMcaa pa}sa saara
dÜnhI manaamanaaMcyaa... kXaa jauLt caalalyaa tara Æ
maja kLt AjaUnahI naahI... gahna gaUZ ho ksalao Æ
gauMta saÜDvatanaa..... ka DÜLo icaMba iBajalao Æ
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Tanmay80
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| | Tuesday, November 23, 2004 - 11:45 pm: |
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sumati,
sundar lihiilays!
chaanach!
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Pha
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| | Tuesday, November 23, 2004 - 11:57 pm: |
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>>tnmayaI Cana AÜLI Aahot..
gaMQaarÊ " tnmayaI " naahI roÊ " tnmaya " Aaho tÜ.
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Amruta_w
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| | Wednesday, November 24, 2004 - 9:15 am: |
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Qa`uva Cana. tnmaya good 1. saumatI great. mastca
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Naad
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| | Thursday, November 25, 2004 - 1:02 am: |
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pahaat vedi gheun aalis tevha
maazyahi daari gulmohar phulala hota
daar ughadtaach keshari tura
tuzya khaandyavarun gharangalala hota
stabdha ubhi rahilis tevha
doiwar chandrahi thoda rengalala hota
partila nighaalya chaandanyaancha
mukkaamahi jaraasa lambalaa hota
nishabda ubhi rahilis mhanun
mihi aswastha zaalo hoto
oghalalya gulmoharaacha aasra malaa
khara saangu, tuzaach vichaar karat hoto
swapnaatahi vaatle navhte, ashihi yeshil
sobat utkat, vedi pahaatahi aanshil
dawarlelya baharaapari vaatle hote, naatehi phulale
varsha-varshaanchya saathitun, tula poorte olakhale
jevha jevha vaatle umajlis malaa
tuzya kimayene gaath navyaane baandhli..
nemki tevhaach kashi ga haravlis tu?
an maazi preet phiroon tuzya shodhaat ramali!
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Naad
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| | Thursday, November 25, 2004 - 1:22 am: |
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raatrabhar jaagun sujalela chehra mak-up mage lapavat mhanaali hotis.."visrun ja".
Mihi hasun vichaarle hote, "mhanje kaay ga, kahich aathvu nako kaa?"...(visarne shakya hote?)
Aaishapath tevhapasun kahich aathavle nahi..
nital, shubhra nakshatraanche hasu, phulun bunda zaalele taandavi rusu...
tuzya dolyaant jamlele davaache pratibimba aathavle nahi,
paij laavun khalaleli paach-paach plate paanipuri aathavli nahi...
tuzi shabdaat pakadaaychi lakab, tuzi rokhun dharnaari najar..
ghari parattana, tu sobatila dilelei shapathahi aathavli nahi.
premaat bhijleli gaani...evadhech kaay,tuzaa zaalela mich parat malaa aathavlo nahi!
evadhe karunahi,
maazya pratyek kshanaat, tuzhahi kshan...na aathavane, rahunach gele
maazya shwaasat gumphnaara tuzhaahi shwaas, na saamaavane, raahunach gele
aaj sandhyaakali, kityek varshaanni, tu paanipuri khaatana dislis...
an potaat vedyaasaarkhi khalgi jaanavli
shejaari ubhe raahun aadhaashipane paanipuri khalali...
tuze gondhalun jaane swabhaavikach ga....pan kaay karnaar?
geli dahaa varsha tu naslyaane,
bhaan harpun paanipuri khaaychi aathvanahi navhti zaali!
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Jayavi
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| | Monday, November 29, 2004 - 3:17 am: |
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naadÊ Ap`itma ²² AgadI jaIva tÜDuna ilaihlaI Aahosa AsaM vaaTtMya .
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Kiru
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| | Monday, November 29, 2004 - 4:08 am: |
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@yaa baat hO .. naad ²²
sauMdr
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Bee
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| | Monday, November 29, 2004 - 4:43 am: |
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Naad, pahilee khup sundar aahe. thodee Gazal style waTalee.
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Rmd
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| | Monday, November 29, 2004 - 5:23 am: |
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naad: apratim! donhi kavita sundar ahet.
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Bee
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| | Monday, November 29, 2004 - 5:31 am: |
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iqajalyaa manaalaa idsatÜ
Qau@yaacaa Qavala pdr
%yaaAaD gaarzlaolaa
baÔa-L caaMdvaa
sad- caaMdNyaaMcaI
Anaaimak hurhUr
]ra]draXaI kvaTaLlaolaa
Anaaimak gaihvar
ho inaXaacara²
inaGaalaasa dUrdoXaIÊ
dUrdoXaI maIhI Aaho
tU Astalaa yaoXaIla toMvha
jaimanaIvarca maayaocao Gar Aaho
pMQarvaD\yaanaMtr BaoTXaIla toMvha
itcyaa pdratlaI ]ba Gao]na yaoÊ
maaJao baaramaasa ÔulaUna yaotIla..
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Jayavi
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| | Tuesday, November 30, 2004 - 5:33 am: |
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baIÊ sauroK .... ....²²²
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Mrcoep
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| | Tuesday, November 30, 2004 - 9:29 am: |
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%yaaMcyaa mato tuja hsanaMÊ
far dumaI-L AsatM
ÓuLocaM to
%yaaMnaa kaya zavaUk to f>Ê
mhajyaaMcasaazI Aar@XaIt AsatM²²
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Mrcoep
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| | Tuesday, November 30, 2004 - 9:34 am: |
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h@k
tujyaa caoháyaavar yaoNaaro tujao to
naajauk kosa malaa far satavatatÊ
karNa tuj,yaa DÜL\yaat pahNyaacaa Ê
maajaa h@kcaM to ihravatat²²
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Jayavi
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| | Tuesday, November 30, 2004 - 10:21 am: |
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vaaÊ ?iYakoXaÊ sauroK hM ²
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Jayavi
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| | Tuesday, November 30, 2004 - 10:24 am: |
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gaiva-ta
kayaa maaJaI gaMQa fulaaMcaI
rMgabaavaáyaa gaulamaÜhracaI
dvaat iBajatoÊ dvaat nhato
fulavaMtI maI AvanaIvarcaI
fulaat gamato maI gaMQaalaI
saurat rmato maIca svaralaI
gaMQa saUraMcaa paMGaÉna maI
gaaNaI gaato maI caOtalaI
caOtnyaacaI maIca palavaI
kilaka fulatI hasya pahunaI
pDo BaUla maga Ba`maralaahI
iBariBartI to caikt hÜ}naI
eko idvaXaIÊ ksaa Acaanak
vaara CoDI QaUna AagaLI
maI na rahIlao maaJaI tovha
kXaI AÜZ tI jagaavaogaLI
caahUla kÜNaa gaMQavaa-caI
caukvaI zÜka kaLjaatlaa
pMcama %yaacyaa lakorItlaa
vaoga vaaZvaI spMdnaatlaa
iKLlao jaagaI .... maM~maugQa maI
ipyauYa saUraMcao p`aXana kÉnaIÊ
Ajaba tRPtIcyaa saagarat %yaa
ivahrt hÜto saaro ivasaÉnaI
saUr qaaMbatIÊ hvaot ivartI
nayana XaÜiQatI saUrnaayaka
kTU sa%yaacaI jaaNaIva JaalaI
saukUna gaolaI Épgaiva-ta
jaIvana saaro vyaqa- Baasalao
%yaa gaItaivaNaÊ %yaa saUraivaNa
iktI yaugao tI ]laTUna gaolaI
Aqa-XaUnya maI jagalao jaIvana
ApraQaI mana Gao}na vaara
%yaa saUraMnaa punha XaÜiQatÜ
Avya> p`ItIcyaa maUk xaNaaMcaa
tÜca ekTa saaxaI AsatÜ
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Mrcoep
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| | Tuesday, November 30, 2004 - 10:50 am: |
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AÜz...
tujyaa AÜzaMivaYayaI maIÊ
kahIcaM baÜlaNaar naahIÊ
karNaM tsaM k$na malaa fulaaMXaIÊ
duXmanaI krayacaI naahI.
KLM......
tuja ek hsau tuja saarM saÝMdya-Ê
tujyaa gaalaacyaa KLItM ekvaTvatMÊ
malaa maa~ to eka xaNaatMÊ
kaprasaarKM ivarGaLvatMÊ
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Panipuri
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| | Tuesday, November 30, 2004 - 4:25 pm: |
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jayavi sauroK ²² ²²
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Meghdhara
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| | Tuesday, November 30, 2004 - 8:25 pm: |
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baI sauMdr..
jayaavaI saur qaaMbatIÊ hvaot ivartI.. vvaa²
ÉiXakoXa AÜz Cana.
maoGaa
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Naad
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| | Tuesday, November 30, 2004 - 10:30 pm: |
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mitraanno, bharbharun kautukaabaddal dhanyavaad, utshah vaadhla
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Naad
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| | Wednesday, December 01, 2004 - 12:37 am: |
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jayavi, sundar, lay masta japlaays!
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Sonalee
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| | Wednesday, December 01, 2004 - 1:01 am: |
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jayaa² gavaI-toca vaNa-na kovaL Ap`tIma. Avya> ip`tIcyaa maukM xaNaaMcaa....... sauroKca.
?iYakoXa sauroK hM.
naad AiBap`ayaalaa ]XaIr Jaalaa. kivata Cana hÜtI.
baI Canaca.
saÜnaalaI
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Jo_s
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| | Wednesday, December 01, 2004 - 2:30 am: |
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bee chhaan
jayavi sundar, faarch chhaan
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Sonalee
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| | Wednesday, December 01, 2004 - 5:05 am: |
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idlyaa Gaotlyaa vacanaaM smarto
pÜNaI-maocao iTpUr caaMdNao
%yaa tojaat ra~ naahato
phaTocao JauLJauL vaaro
%yaa sauravar Qara gaato
maurlaIQaracaa saurola pavaa
%yaa talaavar raQaa Jaulato
ratraNaIcaa gaMQa nyaara
XvaasaamaQaUnaI p`oma bahrto
vasaMtacao ihrvao Aagamana
%yaa rMgaat rMga rMgato
EaavaNaacyaa naajauk Qaara
%yaa ZMgaat icaMba iBajato
AanaMdacao saur gaL\yaat
%yaa sauraMvar mana DÜlato
vaaTovarcyaa pa}laKuNaa
idlyaa Gaotlyaa vacanaaM smarto
saÜnaalaI
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Jayavi
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| | Wednesday, December 01, 2004 - 5:15 am: |
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paNaIpurIÊ maoGaaÊ naadÊsaÜnaalaIÊ sauQaIr .... AXaI dad imaLalaI naa kI ....idla KuXa hÜ jaata hO manaapasaUna AaBaar.
?YaIÊ AÜz AaiNa KLM mastca ²²²
saÜnaalaIÊ iktI Cana ² phaTocao JauL\JauL vaaroÊ %yaa sauravar Qara gaato... Kupca gaÜD ²²
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Mrcoep
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| | Thursday, December 02, 2004 - 6:32 am: |
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jayaEaIÊmaoGaaÊsaÜnaalaI....
Qanyavaad²²
saÜnaalaIÊ...idlyaa Gaotlyaa....
sahIcaM²
ÉiYakoXa
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Jo_s
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| | Friday, December 03, 2004 - 2:06 am: |
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sonalee vachan smaran chaan,
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Sonalee
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| | Friday, December 03, 2004 - 4:20 am: |
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jayaaÊ ?XaIkoYaÊ sauQaIr tumacyaa kÝtukanao mana ]lhaisat Jaalao.
saÜnaalaI
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Naad
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| | Sunday, December 05, 2004 - 2:55 am: |
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Tu aahes mhanunach kaa, ha paaus malaa kalato?
saawale aabhaal rangataach, swapne thembaanchi zelato....
tuzya smit aavegaat poorta bhijun jaato,
olyaa dhukyaacha gandha, tuzya romaantun vaahaato
raanfulaanchi maaya, ranga saandun jaate
tuzyaa dolyaat sarichi, vedi saawali bhijate
tuzaa haat haatat, dhundi kshitijaala chadhate,
saamavun praneet, tuzya othaavar tekte
nupur ninad, abol antar maapto,
saari hirvataleli srushti, avaghaa shraavan vyaapto...
mi mitlet dole, mhnanunach ka, saare swapna maaze aahe?
nahitar, haa paausahi, kordya shaastraacha olaa tarka aahe!
naad
hey, paaus sarun thandi aali, pan ek kavita, tya paavsaali shraavan aathvaninsaathi...comments havyaa!
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Bee
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| | Sunday, December 05, 2004 - 8:45 am: |
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last two stanza are good.
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Meghdhara
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| | Sunday, December 05, 2004 - 9:39 pm: |
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naad Aata dÜna maihnao Jaalao naa [qao yao}na Aata dovanaagarI PlaIja..
hI naadcaI kivata...
tu Aahosa mhNaunaca kaÊ ha pa}sa malaa kLtÜÆ
saavaLo AaBaaL rMgatacaÊ svaPnao qaoMbaaMcaI JaolatÜ....
tuJyaa ismat Aavaogaat purta iBajaUna jaatÜÊ
AÜlyaa Qau@yaacaa gaMQaÊ tuJyaa rÜmaaMtUna vaahatÜ
ranaÔulaaMcaI maayaaÊ rMga saaMDUna jaato
tuJyaa DÜL\yaat sarIcaIÊ vaoDI saavalaI iBajato
tuJaa hat hatatÊ QaundI ixaitjaalaa caZtoÊ
saamaavaUna p`NaItÊ tuJyaa AÜzavar Tokto
naupur inanaadÊ AbaÜla AMtr maaptÜÊ
saarI ihrvaTlaolaI saRYTIÊ AvaGaa EaavaNa vyaaptÜ...
maI imaTlaot DÜLoÊ mhNaunaca kaÊ saaro svaPna maaJao AahoÆ
naahItrÊ ha pa}sahIÊ kÜrD\yaa Xaas~acaa AÜlaa tk- Aaho²
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