Bhaktisb
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| Friday, December 31, 2004 - 6:25 am: |
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jayavi, Suryaasta kavita pan nehemi pramanech sundar. andhar dohi dhara dinvaani - khupach chaan... bhaktisb
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Avikumar
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| Monday, January 03, 2005 - 4:32 am: |
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Ba>IÊ jayavaIcaI kivata hI naohmaIsaarKIca kI sauMdr..Æ na@kI kaya mhnaayacaoya tulaaÆÆ Ba>I AaiNa
jayavaIÊ dÜGaIhI idvao Gyaa ²²² 
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Amarja
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| Tuesday, January 04, 2005 - 12:47 pm: |
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namaskar maMDLIÊ baroca idvasaaMnaI yaot Aaho. ksao Aahat Æ ivasarayacaI naatI fulavaayacaI nasatat AaiNa fulavaayacaI naatI ivasarayacaI nasatat. AXaaca eka na ivasarlyaa
jaaNaaáyaa naa%yaasaazI.. DMK tuJaa DMK Asaa Xvaasaapar Jaalaa jaagaopNaIcaa kanha svaPnaat yao]na gaolaa tuJaa DMK iktI manaapasauna Jaolalaa saarM ivatLuna gaolaM trI tÜca tovhZa ]rlaa tuJaa DMK iktI iktI KÜlavar Étlaa naohmaIca ekaMtat tÜ maaJyaaXaI baÜlalaa tuJaa DMK AsaM "yaXa "do]na gaolaa maaJao p`aNa tuJyaasaazI vaXa kÉna gaolaa² saÝ.?jauta
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Mayura
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| Tuesday, January 04, 2005 - 2:05 pm: |
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Amarja atishay surekh kavita
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yaÜga maÜxa Ôarca Cana.
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tuJao DÜLo Qaardar vaar hÜtÜ Aarpar saUr yaotI AmaRtacao vaodnaocaI maI satar jaIva laavauna kÜNa gaolao jaanaodÜ jaanaodÜ yaar ekTa ]rlaÜ trIhI jaat naahI AhMkar doKNyaa ]sanyaa sauKaro iktI vaahU tuJaa BaarÆ tuYaar jaÜXaIÊ naagapUr
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maÜzopNaacaa kMTaLa Aalaa kI maI baahor jaa}na tasaMtasa caaMdNyaa paMGartÜ lahanapNaacyaa gamatI jamatI AazvaNaIt saajaáyaa krtÜ saumatIÊ tuJaI " Aa%makond`It " kivataÊ Cana. maaJaa ip`ya ima~ p`sanna mhNatÜÊ duÁK icarMtnaÊ sauKacao kaihca xaNaÊ gaDd AMQaaratca maÜhUna
jaatoÊ tarkaMcaI maÜhk pKrNa. AXautÜYaÊ maÜ$ Aazvalaa hÜ lagaoca. kivata AavaDlaI. Qa`uvaÊ abhang effect, but deprived of your punch, may be. yaÜgaÊ Xabd naahIt roÊ saucat. maa}laI kivata r>at saLaLt gaolaI. . . maÜxaÊ sauMdrÊ AavaDlaI. jayaaÊ some words can be deprecated, and poem compacted, may be will provide acute effect then. tuYaar jaÜXaIÊ naagapUr
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Sonalee
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| Thursday, January 06, 2005 - 11:49 pm: |
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tuYaar punaragamana mastca Aaho.
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Sonalee
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| Thursday, January 06, 2005 - 11:52 pm: |
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cauDa rMga tuJaa ihrvaa QauMd jasaa korvaa tulaa baGataca manaI ]klatÜ maarvaa Ép tuJao saaijaro Qyaana gaÜD gaÜijaro tuJaa ikNaikNat vasao malharacao harturo gaÜla tuJaa mauKDa maÜla caMd`acaa tukDa tuJyaa KLaL%yaa naadat kodar ]Baa zaklaa saaqa tuJaI janmaacaI pazraKNa hatacaI tuJyaa savaoca majalaa BaOrvaI laavaayacaI saÜnaalaI
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Giriraj
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| Friday, January 07, 2005 - 2:11 am: |
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idnaoXaÊho tumacyaasaazI... sau)d - svar BaoTtat kahI gaaNaIÊ barIca ]XaIra... pNa roMgaaLt rahtat svarÊ kayamaca².. janmaBar² BaoTtat tXaIca kahI maaNasaMÊ barIca ]XaIra... AaiNa JaMkart rahtat sau)d - svarÊ kayamaca²... janmaBar² igarIraja
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Itsme
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| Friday, January 07, 2005 - 3:55 am: |
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Giriraj, mastca .. ..
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saÜnaalaIÊ klpnaa Cana. igarIÊ farca CanaÊ AaiNa idnaoXa yaa vyai>ma%vaa saazI tr yaa AÜLIÊ tMtÜtMt. tuYaarÊ naagapUrÆ
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taMDva r%naakracyaa AqaaMga maMqanaatUna vaahtat ina%yanavyaa lahrI Amayaa-d Aayaamaacyaa laaTaMcaM mayaa-idt ËmaNa² yaugaanaMyaugaM tÜ hoca krt Aalaaya² Aaplyaa vyaaPtIcyaa dpa-t %yaanaM kQaI Qarolaa igaLMÌt kolaM naahI² inatIma<aocyaa mayaa-da AÜlaaMDt.. saaáyaa jagaalaa ivakaragnaIt lapoTt ivanaaXaakDo JaÜkUna doNyaacaM kama krNaaáyaa maaNasaacyaa baaMD laaTahI tÜ Aajavar pcavat Aalaaya² yaaca laaTaMmaQaUna Aalaolaa ivaYaarI rsaayanaacaa AÜGahI tÜ pcavat Aalaaya² maga Aajaca %yaanaM ka GaDvalaM saunaamaIMcaM Bayaavah AaËaLivaËaL dXa-naÆ AaiNa p`layaaMkarI hahakarÆ pRqvaItlaavar p`%yaokanaMca maaigatlaMya AlpvyaaPt BaUBaagaat ma`u%yaÜ<ar ek AZLsqaana² marNaÜ<ar icarinad`a GaoNyaasaazI jaimanaIcyaa pÜTat ek lahanaXaI jaagaa² AaiNa Aaja maa~.... ekaca maÜz\yaa KD\D\yaat Anaok p`otM² r>amaaMsaacyaa icaKlaat saamaUhIk AM%yasaMskar² AvatIBaÜvatI vaavarNaarI.. ijavaMt maaNasaMÊ pNa %yaaMcaI maolaolaI manaM² yaa taMDvaacyaa Bayaavah naaT\yaanaMtr Aaplyaaca AaPtaMcaM ma`u%yaucyaa KatlaM dXa-na² AakaXaalaa BaodNaaro AsaM#ya Aat- Tahܲ lahanaXaa AavaajaanaMhI dcakNaaáyaa baaLasa Aaplyaa pÜTaXaI GaoNaarI Aa ma`u%yaucyaa dXa-naacyaa vaoLosadoiKla AXaI XaaMt kaÆ AaQaarspXaa-saazI AasaavalaolaI icamauklaI kÜvaLI manaM² ho saarM pahUna vaaTtM yaa dudO-vaI p`layaamauLM sagaL\yaa saMvaodnaa par gaÜzUna gaolyaa par gaÜzUna gaolyaa
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Peshawa
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| Monday, January 10, 2005 - 2:36 pm: |
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hI kivata saMvaodnaa gaÜzNyaa AaiQacaI idsatoya ~D caaMgalaI Aaho...
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Kiru
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| Monday, January 10, 2005 - 11:12 pm: |
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Amarja Á DMK saundr saÜnalaI Á cauDa Ap`itma. tuYaar Á DÜLo tuJao Qaaradar KUp AavaDlaI.. iXavaaya manaapasaUna idlaolyaa p`itiËyaa manaapasaUna AavaDlyaa..
igairraja Á sauá*d svar Jakasaca eosao hI ilaKto rhÜ..
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Sonalee
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| Monday, January 10, 2005 - 11:53 pm: |
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ikÉÊ tuYaar manaapasaUna AaBaar. maI A<aa jara iXaktoya. tumacao AiBap`aya KUp AaQaar dotat.
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Dhruv
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| Tuesday, January 11, 2005 - 5:01 am: |
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Baula yaa Anaama saMQyaavaoLI manaasa ksalaI Baula kÜsaL%yaa BaavanaaMcao maI saavartÜ pula AMgaar dXaidXaaMcaa ivatLuna yaotÜ vaara AakaXa AQaaMtrIcao ivaNatÜ ekT tara vaLuna AaNaIk kÜzo hrvauna jaatI vaaTa gaava tuJao ]jaLayaa tma paMGartI laaTa }jaoD vaoZunaI Bagavaa sa%va jaaLto pNatI lao}na inaLI }dasaI QauL gaÜkuLa BavatI DÜL\yaaMt nauro caahula tu Aat maulaI yaonaa qarqar%yaa saavalyaaMcao AMga saavaÉna Gaonaa.
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Daksha
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| Tuesday, January 11, 2005 - 7:32 am: |
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dhruv,tushar,giri,sonali fantastic yar.keep it up.
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Giriraj
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| Tuesday, January 11, 2005 - 7:37 am: |
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QaRvaaÊkuzo Aahosa baroca idvasaÆ BaUla AgadI sahI ro²pNa ga`osabaabaa jaaNavalao ² saÜnalaIÊcauD Canaca² tuYaar jaÜXaI naagapUrÊ sahI hO yaar²
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Giriraj
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| Tuesday, January 11, 2005 - 7:41 am: |
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dxaaÊtU kivatahI vaacatosa tr²
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Dhruv
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| Tuesday, January 11, 2005 - 7:51 am: |
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hÜ igarIÊ tI ga`osacaIca Baula Aaho..... manaavar pDlaolaI Ajauna na }trlaolaI....
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