Shonoo
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| | Wednesday, April 21, 1999 - 1:56 am: | 
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Two more from kusumagraj
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ek tuJaa jaL%yaa udyaaMnaa jalavaMta¸ Aasara
ivarhdgQa maI naoiSala ka ro¸ inaraop maaJyaa Gara Æ
jaaiSala ka Alakosa¸ iSavaovar Qavala iSalaamaMidroM
gamao vaahtao %yaa iSalpaMvar caMd`kraMcaa Jara ²
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BaaLavaÉnaI saairt kuMtla piqakacyaa kimanaI
naIlapqaIM tuja pahtIla mana AaSvaaisat hao]naI¸
GanaagamaIM ro ivarhat-aMcaI ivarhdSaa saMpto¸
maIca ABaagaI¸ praQaIna majaprI na kaoNaI janaIM ²
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Shonoo
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| | Wednesday, April 21, 1999 - 2:09 am: |
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borkaraanni pathik vanita mhatale aahe
mhaNje vaate varachyaa /rastyaa varachyaa striyaa
ase malaa vaaTate.
paN kusumaagrajaanni pathikaachyaa kaamini
mhaTale - pathik mhaNje vaatsaru- tyaachyaa baayakaa /striya ? he kaay goud bangaal aahe.
muL meghdoot koNi vaachale aahe ka ?
sanskrut kaDavyaa madhe shabd pathikvanita : asach aahe.
tumhalaa kaay vaatate ?
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Sasuli
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| | Wednesday, April 21, 1999 - 3:37 am: |
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aho bai mala reply kuthe dilayt mhane? aho tumhi lai bizi zalelya distay aajkal... aho mag jara jansamanyana samzel ase kahitari liha na? mala ha prakar far heavy jatoy ho.....
SARANG
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Shonoo
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| | Thursday, April 22, 1999 - 1:29 am: |
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Saarang :
he sarva kaahi malaa tari purNa kuthe kaLatay ?
paN jevadha kaLatay tevadhach kiti sundar aahe
yaa vicharane post karat aahe.
tula reply yaach thread var Taakalaa hotaa
paN to kuThe tarii gul zaalaay.
navyaa job chyaa party baddal lihile hote.
kenvhaahii Philly la ye, parTy karaayalaa
kaahii tarii kaaraN saapaDelach.
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Sasuli
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| | Thursday, April 22, 1999 - 5:47 am: |
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ok mag, dun..... mi yeto phillya la... kadhi yeu... nahi g...mi yenarach ahe.... mazi ek friend rahate tithe .....ti doctors kartuye....temple univ madhe..... tichya kade mi jare..tenvha nakki yein....pan ag partycha menu kay.... tuza to aadhicha mail messege parat lihila tar kahi bighdnar nahiye.......
SARANG
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Jaganbua
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| | Thursday, April 22, 1999 - 5:51 pm: |
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Shonoo,
malaa waTate "pathik kaaminee" yaachaa arth mulukhgiree / wyaapaaraa laa gelelyaa dhanyaa chee waaT pahaNaaree stree. junyaa kaaLee yaa donhee peshaa madheel lok paawasaaLaa suroo whaayachyaa betaalaa gharee parat yet asat aaNi dasaraa jhaalaa kee punhaa door deshee jaat asat. tyaa muLe Dhag disaNe hee wirah dashaa sa.mpaNyaachee khooN maanat, 'neelapathee' mhaNaje niLyaa aakaashaat Dhagaache darshan hotaach wirahiNee 'aashwaaseet' hotaat, paN yakshiNee chaa priyakar purNa ek warsha haddapaar jhaalyaane tilaa asale bhaagya naahee tyaa sa.ndarbhaat "pathik kaaminee" yogya waaTate. waaTewaroon chaalaNaaryaa streeyaa ashaa arthee bhaya.nkar oDhaataaN hote.
malaa waaTate marathi wyaakaraNaat ek niyam asaa aahe kee jeNe karoon "chaa, chee, che" he pratyay kaaDhoon TakNyaachee soy hote. eg:
raamraajya: raamaa che raajya
maheepatee: mahee chaa patee
baalwaaDee: baalaa.n chee waaDee
tasech pathikwanitaa: pathikaa chee wanitaa or pathikaa.n chyaa wanitaa
What say you?
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Shonoo
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| | Wednesday, April 28, 1999 - 1:26 am: |
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jagan bua :
that explanation makes more sense. I
am trying to locate a prose translation of
Meghdoot, which might shed more light on the
meanings. If you know of any, please let me know.
here's more from Kusumagraj .
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mand gatInaoM vaaya-avartI jaaiSala tUM jaoQavaaM
hYa-BaroM ha krIla caatk maMjauL gaItao%savaa
gaBa-aQaanaxaNaacaIM ica~oM kilpt udyaMgama
Qavala pixaNaIMcaa tujapuZtI yaola sauMdr qavaa ²
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baMQausaKI tva idsaola tujalaa Aivaht jaaiSala jarI
idvasaamaagauna idvasa maaojato¸ Jaurto jair AMtrIM
kusaumaasama rmaNaIMcaIM udyaoM kaomala¸ kaomaojatI
ivarhanaoM¸ pNa AaSaabaMQana %yaaMsa sada saavarI²
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SaINa- Qarolaa flapuYpaMcyaa AaSvaasat dÝlatI
EauitsauMdr tIM tuJaIM gaija-toM naiBaM jaovhaM naadtI
rajahMsa mauiKM doz Gao]naI kmalaaMcao kaoMvaLo
maanasayaa~a kravayaastva yaoitla tujasaMgatI ²
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imarvaI dohIM daSarqaacaIM pdicanhoM maMgala
ramaigarI ha tulaa pahunaI hao snaohakula ¸
tuJaI p`tIxaa kÉna iSaNalaa¸ %yaalaa AailaMgaunaI
ihmaacalaacyaa maaga-avartI pDao tuJaoM pa]la ²
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Gondya
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| | Tuesday, May 18, 1999 - 10:46 pm: |
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Kalidas and shonoo seem to have taken a
sabbatical leave.
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Shonoo
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| | Wednesday, May 19, 1999 - 12:08 am: |
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Gondya :
sabbatical vagaire kaahi naahi.
kalidaasachyaa yakshaa chi baayako bichari ekaTi ghar daar sansaar kasa sambhaLat asel yaacha
anubhav ghet aahe mii. yakshaalaa phuakT kavitaa
karaanyaa kherij dusaraa udyog navhataa paN tyaachyaa patni laa bicharilaa tichyaa velache-
"laundry-groceries-lawn mowing-sweeping-dusting-bill paying" ityadi karaave lagat asaNaar mhaNun tine bicharine varsha bharaat ekahi nirop patHavala navhata.
aNi to yaksha virahaane ksheeN zala ki
swata:ha chya haatache jevaayalaa laagalyaamule ksheen jhaalaa devaas thauk ?
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Shonoo
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| | Wednesday, May 19, 1999 - 12:34 am: |
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inaraop tuja saaMgaona saKIstva prMtu kÉNaaGana ¸
hvaoM krayaa ]icat pqaacaoM tujalaa idgdSa-na
iSaNataM kayaa phuD jarasaa pva-tiSaKraMvar
xaINa vaaTta inaKL Jaya-acao kr paNaI p`aSana
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]QaiLla vaara SaOlaiSaroM ka¸ Baya vaaTuinayaa ]rIM
baGataM vartI pahtIla tujalaa isawaMcyaa sauMdrI
vaotlatakula yaa BaUmaIMtuna jaa ]<arokDo
caukivat SauMDap`har idggaja kritla jao AMbarIM ²
From Kusumagraj
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Gondya
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| | Wednesday, May 19, 1999 - 8:52 pm: |
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Shonoo
Yaksh itakaa vilaap karat ase tyache kaaraN, tyalaahi office madhun ghari aalayaavar, burger ka kahitari tasech ekatyane basun khaave laagat asaNaar.
Varun "aaj mi boss la kasaa jordaar salla deun impress kele" ashya fusharkya eikayla suddhaa koni naahi mhantalyavar jagatalyaa sagalyaa yaksha-jamaatine bhokaanD pasaruun radu naye tar kaay karave?
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Shonoo
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| | Thursday, May 20, 1999 - 2:02 am: |
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Again some more kusumagraj
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dUr TokDyaaMvarI ]BaI hao [nd`QanauYyaakRtI
navar%naaMcyaa tojaaoQaara eki~t vaahtI
SyaamavaNa- tUM SaaoBaSaIla %yaa idvya kmaanaImaQaoM
maaoripsaaáyaamauLoM jasaa tao GanaSyaama EaIptI
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p`omaBaranaoM nao~ inaragasa iKLvauinayaaM tujavarI
k`RYaIvalakaMta mhNaitla AalaoM hoM saÝBaagyaca GarIM
naaMgarlyaa maatIcaa psaro saugaMQa maaLavar
saoivat jaa tao jalad toqaunaI ]<ar doSaaMtrIM
For some reason, things look nice when I preview them before posting, but then some characters show up in a Martian language. Looks much better
in an html file.
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Shonoo
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| | Wednesday, November 24, 1999 - 5:32 pm: |
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Hope this look better.
My web page is www.netaxs.com/~shonoo
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ranajaaL ivaJavaUna¸ qaaMbataM EaaMt sa#yaa hao]na
Aama`kUT tuja maaqyaavartI vaaihla AanaMduna
AazvaunaI ?Na xaud`ih kirtI ima~aMcaa Aadr
ivaSaala Ana ]<auMga igarI tao tsaoMca %yaacaoM mana
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p@va flaaMikt Aama` jayaavar¸ %yaa SaOlaacyaa iSarIM
ivarajataM tUM rMga kRYNa tva koSaklaapaprI¸
dovaaMnaIMhI dRSya baGaavaoM -vasauMQarocaa stna
gaÝrpIt ivastar BaaoMvatIM Syaamala maQyaavarI
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latagaRhaMtuna ivahar kirtI ijaqaoM iBaillaNaI sada
igairvartIM %yaa jara ivasaavauna jaa puZtI naIrda
ivanQyaacaa KDkaL payaqaa toqa pha vaahtI
gajaaMgaicai~t roYaaMsama tI vaogavatI nama-da
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gaMQa madacaa jalaaMt imasaLo vanah<aI naahtaM
kuzo jaaMBaLI vaxa ADivatI vaoga itcaa vaahta
saovauina toM jala samaqa- vhavaoM ma<a samaIrapuZoM
irtopNaalaa imaLo hInata pUNa-alaa EaoYzta
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ihrvyaa ipvaLyaa kdMba puYpaMitla pahuina kosar
navakdlaIMcao saovauina AMkur nadIiknaaáyaaavar
gaMQavatI QartIcaa huMigat vaasa vaaZta vanaIM
sauicat kiritla hirNa tuJaa pqa hao]ina hYa-atur
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this isby shantabai shelake
smarate ka tuj nidrit hotis haat tuza mam kanthhi vedhun
avachit jagi zalis sakhaye radatana tu sfundun sfundun
pusuni dole vadalis mag tu radanyache mi karan pusata
shattha! pahile are tula mi savatisange konya ramata
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kunakade meghdootache chintamanrao deshmukhannee kelele bhashatar aahe ka? aani shoonoo, jara borkaranchya bhashantarala vasant bapatannee lihilelee prastavanaahee chhaap na.
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vaisanty,
Thanks for Shantabainche bhashantar.Tyach shlokacha borkarannee kelela anuwad asa:
.......................asta manchakee ek dees,
skandhee majhyaa musamusat too jagunee sfundalees
lade kode bahut pusataa haasunee bolalees
"dwaadaa! swapnee tuj baghitale toshita veglees"
sorry pahilyaa oleechaa purvardh aathvat nahee ata.
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malaa kusaumaaga`jaaMcao va baÜrkraMcao maoGadUt kuzo imaLU Xakola ³ivakt ikMvaa vaacaNyaasaazI´Æ
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