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Bee
Friday, February 28, 2003 - 1:50 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message


inanaaivaÊ link saapDlaI Aaho. [qalyaa archive maQyao maO~oyaI AaiNa idnaoXa (aMcao postings baGa.


Ninavi
Friday, February 28, 2003 - 8:21 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

baI ³Æ´Ê
Qanyavaad. %yaa dÜGaaMnaI idlaolaa Aqa- pTtÜ. pNa baakI gaaNyaacao kaya Æ


Ninavi
Friday, February 28, 2003 - 8:39 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

svastIÊ
Gana AÜqaMbaUna yaotI banaat raGaU ifrtI
pMKavartI sar AÜGaLtIÊ JaaDatuna JarJartI

Gana AÜqaMbaUna yaotI nadIsa saagar BartI
DÜMgarlaaTa vaoiZt vaaTa vaoiZt majalaa naotI

Gana AÜqaMbauna Aalao ipkaMt kosar AÜlao
AaDÜXaalaa jara baajaulaa saajaNa ColaCbaIlaa Gana hÜvaUna ibalagalaa ..


Rar
Saturday, March 22, 2003 - 2:05 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

maQaucauMbana mhNajao xaNaBar QauMd ivar>I
AailaMgana mhNajao ivarhacaI Aasa>I
ho jaIvana mhNajao dIGa- svaPna saMBaÜga
ho jaIvana mhNajao maRgatRYNaocaI Aaga

malaa vaaTto (a AÜLI ra^ya ikNaIkraMcyaa Aahot..kÜNaalaa na@kI AiNa AiQak maihtI Aaho kaÆ


Ashishchaskar
Monday, March 24, 2003 - 5:32 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

ho.. Kinikarach aahet he!

Rar
Monday, March 24, 2003 - 8:23 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

this is an article by "aruna Dhera"..
http://www.loksatta.com/daily/20030324/chkal.htm

%yaamaQao rNaiQar Óro naavaacyaa kivacaa ]llaoK Aaho.yaa maaNasacao saaih%ya kÜNaI vaacalao Aaho kaÆ
laoK vaacalyaapasauna ]%saukta Aaho Ôar..


Rutu_hirwaa
Tuesday, March 25, 2003 - 9:01 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

hi ninavi
ghan othambun yetee he
mala vattey
na.dho.mahanoranche aahe


Ninavi
Tuesday, March 25, 2003 - 2:41 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

?tU ihrvaaÊ
hÜyaÊ ho gaaNaM mahanaÜraMcaca Aaho.


Bee
Wednesday, March 26, 2003 - 7:18 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

nawawadhu priya mee bawarate hya geetaamaage adhyaatmeek arth aahe ase malaa jenwhaa kaLale tenwhaa dhakkaach basalaa. ithe nawawadhu mhaNaje prarthanaa karaNaaraa tar ishwar.. kinwaa brahma he dusare naate. hyaa doghaanche milan ithe apekshit aahe. maazya kaahee mitransamawe mee Dasbodh waachato aaNi maagil rawiwari maazee ek maitreen malaa mhaNaalee kee nawawadhu priya mee baawarate cha arth saang tar mee tilaa to saangitalaa asataa teene malaa wareel arth saangitalaa. nantar mag meehee tilaa 'samaichya shubhra kaLya' maagachaa bhaawabhakteechaa arth saantun awaak kele.

nawawadhu cha arth kharach asa asawaa ase tumhalaa watate ka?

Kiran
Wednesday, March 26, 2003 - 8:22 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

mala nahi vatat.
lajate pudhe sarte firte.
pudhchya sarv oli shrungarik
bhav pragaT karatat.
hya olincha kaay arth aahe mag?

BTW, he tumhas mahit ahe kay ki hya ganyane "navavadhu" hya gaNavruttas janm dila aahe?


Bee
Wednesday, March 26, 2003 - 9:51 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

SSC la asatana nawawadhu ha alankar hota tyat hyach gaNyache uda. hote.

hya gaNyachee suruwat ashee aahe kee tee shrungareek waaTate paN shewaTachya oLee maatra wegaLe bhaw pragaT karatat.

Saee
Wednesday, March 26, 2003 - 10:54 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

[Midra saMtaMcyaa yaa kivatocyaa dusaáyaa kDvyaacyaa AÜLI hvyaa Aahot malaaÊ kÜNaI do} Xakola kaÆ

baaMQalao maI baaMQalao [Md`acao tÜrNa baaMQalao
iXaMpNa Gaatlao caaFyaacao iXaMpNa Gaatlao


Ashishchaskar
Wednesday, March 26, 2003 - 10:59 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

bee,

barIcaXaI BaavagaItoÊ gaJala AXaI ³ caaMgalyaa Aqaa-nao´ d\vayaaqaI- Asatat. ]d. ‘GauMGaT kI AaD sao idlabar k dIdar AQaura rhta hOÊ jaba tk pDo AaiXak kI najar Ê isaMgaar AQaura rhta hO’ yaacaa Aqa-Ê dovaacaI kRpa JaalyaaiXavaaya tumacaI Ba>I saÔla hÜt naahI AaiNa tumhalaa maÜxa imaLt naahI AsaahI Aaho.

tumacao vaya AaiNa maanaisak Avasqaa yaavar baroca AvalaMbaUna Aaho tumhalaa kÜNata Baava jaast AavaDtÜ AaiNa pTtÜ. :-)



Storvi
Thursday, March 27, 2003 - 6:14 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

I agree with Bee, tyacha artha tasach ahe.. anekda shringarik bhasha adhyatmik karnansathi vapartanna disate.. actually mala asa shikavla hota ki to priyakar mhanje mrutyu ahe ani vadhu mhanje jeevanachya sandhikaali asleli vyakti
kale mala tu pransakha jari, kale tucha adhar jiva jari
mana javala yaavayaa ghabarte.
tyaca artha ata kaltay mrutyu samor ahe, ani tyala gatyantar nahi, tari tyala samora jayla bhiti watate asa hoil...

Surendraharkal
Thursday, April 03, 2003 - 5:12 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

ramdaas futane yanchi cutpis hi vatrtika/kavita kuni mala devu shakel kaay?
Aslyas
surendraar@yahoo.co.in ithe pathava.

Nivant
Friday, April 04, 2003 - 2:34 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

Storvi ne lihilele barobar ahe. amhala kavita shikavali tenva haach artha sangitala hota.

Ja_wadekar
Friday, April 18, 2003 - 4:57 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message


maaJaI DayarI vaacaXaIla tovha
tulaa saapDtIla saMdBa-
p`itsaadaMnaa vaaT maÜkLI
kÉna doNaaro
Anaok Asvasqa xaNa
tuJyaa GarakDo jaaNaaáyaa rs%yaavar
Alagad ]maTlaolyaa pa]laKuNaa
kahI AaXvaasak vacanaM
AaiNa
saÜLavyaa pavasaaL\yaatlao
TvaTvaIt bahr.
KrMca tu jaadugaar Aahosa
maaJaM saarM iktI sahja tuJaM JaalaM.


Bee
Friday, April 18, 2003 - 8:39 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

Ja_wadekar: tula hya kawitetal kay kaLal nahi kinwa mahiti nahi? mala waTate kee ashya kawita hya far wyakteesapeksha asatat. aapapalya anubhawapramane tyache wegaLe arth nighat jatat.

Bee
Friday, July 25, 2003 - 8:13 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

ÉNauJauNau ÉNauJauNau ro Ba`mara
saaMDI tU AvagauNau ro Ba`mara
carnakmaLdLu ro Ba`mara ..

&anaoXvaraMcyaa (a kivatocaa saMpUNa- Aqa- kuNaalaa saaMgata yaoNao Xa@ya Aaho kaÆ varIla kivatot Ba`maracaI ]pmaa kuNaalaa idlaI Aaho.. Æ hI kivata AQyaa%maIk Aqaa-caI malaa vaaTto..


Dafodils23
Tuesday, July 29, 2003 - 11:57 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

$NauJauNau $NauJauNau ro Ba`mara ,
saaMDI tUM AvagauNa ro Bamara ||
carNakmaLdLu ro Ba`mara ,
BaÜgaI tUM inaEcLu ro Ba`mara ||
saumana saugaMQau ro Ba`mara ,
pirmaL ivad`du ro Ba`mara ||
saÝBaagya sauMd$ ro Ba`mara ,
baap rKumaadovaIva$ ro Ba`mara ||

yaa ABaMgaat maa]laI manaalaa Ba`maracaI ]pmaa dotat. Ba`mar jasaa fulaatIla saugaMQaanao fulaakDo AÜZlyaa jaa]na fulaaMtIla maQaU saovana krIt Anaok fulaaMvar baagaDtÜ tsaoca maaNasaacao manahI caMcala Asato. to mana prmaoXvarcao carNakmalaaMt sada rmamaaNa hÜt naahI mhNaUna maa]laI manaalaa ]_oXaUna mhNatat , " manaa tU marmaoXvaracao carNakmalaaMtca sada rmamaaNa hÜ]na inaXcala rha. Ata Anya~ laxa do]M nakÜsa. saumanaaMtIla saugaMd\ga sava-~ psartÜ %yaa idvya saugaMQaalaa maÜhUna ho mana$pI Ba`mara tU kovaL sava-gauNa sampÙ va saÝBaagyasauMdr baap rKumaadovaIvaralaaca var. "

saaQanaotIla rhsyao yaa ABaMgaat vaNa-na kolaI Aahot. saaQanaot p`gatI Jaalyaavar saaQakalaa kahI AiWtIya naad yaotat , %yaaMnaa Anaaht naad mhNatat , jasao baasaurIcaa naad , GaMTa naad , maRduMga naad , duMduBaIca naad , saagaracyaa laaTaMcaa naad AaiNa maoGanaad sauwa !

%yaa naadcao ]%pi<asqaana javaL nasalao trI Asalao idvya naad saaQakala %yaa ]cca Avasqaot satt eokU yaotat , mhNaUna %yaaMnaa na ]%pÙ , hÜtaMnaahI eokU yaoNaaro ' Ana\ Aaht ' naad Asao mhNatat. saaQakaica saQanaot AXaI ]cca Avasqaa AalaI mhNajao ho naad ApÜAap eokU yaotat. yaat klpnaa Aqvaa kanacaI ivaÌtI nasato. maa]laIMnaa %yaa ]cca Avasqaot Ba`marasaarKa $NauJauNau mhNajao mana irJavaNaara naad eokU Aalaa mhNaUna maa]laI %yaa naadanausaMgaat mana $pI Ba`maralaa samajaivatat. EaIÌYNaacyaa hataitla baasarI Asalyaaca Anaaht naadacaI dXa-k klpnaa Aaho. tI baasarI Aaplyaaca AMtrI Aaho pNa AapNa tI pmao-Xvarsva$p EaIiËYNaacao hatat pahtÜ. maMdIratIla GaMTa laavaNyaacaI pwt hahI Asaaca Anaaht naad. kahI saaQakaMnaa maRduMga naad , duMduBaIca naad , eokU yaotÜ. ramayaNaaMt Asalyaaca duMduBaIlaa naXT krNyaakrta saaQakEaoYz vaalaI %yaacao maagao laagatÜ. kahIMnaa tr maoGanaad sauwa eokU yaotÜ. Anaht naadacaI hI sava-EaoYz Avasqaa. yaahI AvasqaaMna par k$na saaQakalaa ]cca Avasqaot jaayacao Asto , tsao na kolyaasa saaQak tsalyaaca Anaaht naadacao Avasqaot gauMga hÜ]na saaQanaotIla plaIkDIla ]cca Avasqa p`aPt k$ XakNaar naahI.

mhNaUna AaNaKI ]cca Avasqaa p`aPt k$ [cCINaara vaalaI saaQak ( vaa : + AlaM ) duMduBaInaad`Up raxasaalaa naYT krNyaacaa p`ya%na krtÜ. tWt\ maoga*naadacao Avasqaolaa sauwaM naYT k$na saaQak [nd`ijat mhNajao [Mid`yaaMvar saMyama zovaNaara ]cca saaQak banaNyaacaa p`ya%na krtÜ. ravaNaacyaa ekuL%yaa ek pu~alaa mhNaunaca valmaIik p`qama maoGanaad AaiNa naMtr [nd`ijat AXaI %yaa %yaa AvasqaotIla naaMvao dotat. saaQanaa Xaas~acao saurmya kqavaNa-na mhNajao ramaayaNa , mahaBaart Baagavat ga`Mqa.

saaQanaotIla AaNaKI ek rhsya saaMgatanaa maa]laI mhNatat , " saumana saugaMQau ro Ba`mara " saaQanaot p`gatI hÜt Asatanaa saaQakala inaina-raLo saugaMQa yaot Asatat. Anaaht naadp`maNaoca saugaMQaacao mauL karna javaL nasatanaahI saaQakalaa idvya saugaMQaacaa AnauBava satt yaot AsatÜ. Asao saugaMQa saaQakalaa maÜiht k$na saaQanaocyaa plaIkDIla Avasqaot jaa] dot naaiht. mhNaUna saaQakanao %yaaMcaa %yaaga kolaa paihjao. maa]laI mhNatat , " manaa Asalao saugaMQa tulaa maayaot ADkvaUna qaovatIla. mhNaUna %yaaMcaa %yaaga k$na tU pirmaLacao maUL sva$p baap`KumaadovaIva$ iva{laacaoca carNaI isqar rha. "
ramaayaNaaMtIla saaQaËUp A%maaramacaI AiXaca id\vaQaa manaisqait hÜto. saIta mhNajao pRiqvat%vaaMtUna ]%pÙ hÜNaarI AaplaI kayaa jaI prt pRiqvat%vaaMtca ivalaIna hÜto ! saIta$p kayaa javaL AsataMnaa saaQak$p rama saItoWaro Anaok saaQanaa$p AnauBava Gaot AstÜ. ba`*ma jaaNaNaara ba`*maNa$p ravaNa saItocao AakXmaagaa-nao mhNjao Qyaanaavasqaot hrNa krtÜ. javaL isata nasalyaamauLo mhNajao XarIr Baavca naYT JaalyaamauLo saaQak rama saaQanaoMtIla navaIna navaIna AnauBava Gao} Xakt naahI. mhNaUna rama AataM , " saIto , saIto ", mhNaUna ivalaap krtÜ , XaÜk krtÜ. prMtU ba`*masva$paMt ivalaIna hÜ} [icCNaarI kayaa$p isata maa~ Aa%maaramaacao satt smarNa krIt AXaÜk vanaaMt kaL kMzIt Asato. saaQanaocao hoca ramaayaNa maa]laI (a ABaMgaaWaro saaMgatat.


**C.B.D.H**






Bee
Wednesday, July 30, 2003 - 1:16 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

Dafodils: hats off! itake surekh rasgrahaN wachayala miLel ashee apeksha nawhatee kharee.. khupach sundar. khup khup aabharee aahe..

Bombayviking
Wednesday, July 30, 2003 - 6:47 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

dafo.... atishay ucchaa....ekatar tuamche vaachan aani aadhytmaa vishayeeche haatotee spasht hote...shivaay he sagale tumhi atishay saadhyaa saral bhaashet lihaly...
gr8...

Ashishchaskar
Wednesday, July 30, 2003 - 8:23 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

good one dafo ...

Ja_wadekar
Wednesday, July 30, 2003 - 11:05 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

Bee, as per what I have understood, this BB has started for poems whose writer is unknown. That is the only reason why I posted the above poem here. And I guess I am not wrong. If you see, other BB, they are named by specific poet's name.

Chafa
Wednesday, July 30, 2003 - 5:44 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

Daf:KUpca sauroK² XaovaTcaa pircCod saÜDlaa tr %yaaAaQaIca saMpUNa- ivavaocana AitXaya Cana.

Bee
Thursday, July 31, 2003 - 6:38 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

Ja_wadekar.. asel asel.. mala waTale hote kee tula tya kawitecha arth nahi mahitee kee kay.. .. aso..

Beti
Thursday, July 31, 2003 - 7:00 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

jayashree u r right.. tee kawitaa sahee aahe... thanks:-)

Asami
Thursday, July 31, 2003 - 11:49 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

lai khaas ahe te kavita...

Champak
Monday, August 04, 2003 - 11:50 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

are pan mudda mhanje tyacha kavi kon he sanga na tya ja wadekarla koniteri re....

Bee
Tuesday, August 12, 2003 - 1:50 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

‘kotkIcyaa banaI itqao
naacalaa ga maÜr
gaihvarlaa maoGa naBaI...’

(a gaItacao rsaga`hNa kuNaalaa krta yaošla kaÆ pUNa- gaIt jamaola tonvha maI pÜYT krIna ...


Chafa
Tuesday, August 12, 2003 - 11:43 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

baIÊ itsarI AÜL cauklaI AahoÊ %yaa AÜLI AXaa AahotÁ

gaihvarlaa maoGa naBaI
saÜDlaa gao QaIr


Bee
Wednesday, August 13, 2003 - 3:53 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

Chafa: keelee neeT. thanks!

Ja_wadekar
Tuesday, October 07, 2003 - 1:42 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message


tuJyaa maaJyaa iXavaaya
kuNaalaa hI maaiht nasalaolao ho saMdBa-
tu naakarXaIla la hI kdaicatÊ

pNa Baaravalaolyaa idvasaaMcyaa
pa]laKuNaa
AVap hI tuJyaa DÜL\yaat TvaTvaIt AahotÊ

kovaL fLca yao} nayao mhNauna
maÜhÜr KuDNyaacaa vaoDopNaa maa~ kÉ nakÜsa.

­ kivata saMga`h ³saMdBa-´


Champak
Saturday, December 06, 2003 - 6:55 pm:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

Ja wadekarla koniteri kaviche naav sanga re.
shappat ti kavita :-) mazi nhai re babano.

me Ja to ata

Bee
Thursday, January 08, 2004 - 6:34 am:   Edit Post Delete Post Print Post  Link to this message

Ja_w.. khup ushira ha BB pahila.. kawita khup surekh aahe.




 
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