malaa vaaTto to
Baaskr Baa
Asao Asaavao
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vaR<aamaQaIla gaNa hI saMklpnaa AitXaya mah%vaacaI Aaho. yaa saazI p`%yaok
carNaacao 33 AxaraMcao gaT paDayacao. AaiNa p`%yaok Axar áhsva ikMvaa
dIGa- Aaho ho zrvaayacao.
áhsva AaiNa dIGa- 3 AxaraMcaI zraivak permutations hÜNaar. yaa permutations
naa naavao doNyaasaazI ho saU~ vaaprNyaat yaoto :
ya maa ta ra ja Baa na sa la gaM
^ - - - ^ - ^ ^ ^ -
Aqaa-t :
ya : ^-- : áhsvaÊ dIGa-Ê dIGa-
ma : --- : dIGa-Ê dIGa-Ê dIGa-
t : --^ : dIGa-Ê dIGa-Ê áhsva
r : -^- : dIGa-Ê áhsvaÊ dIGa-
ja : ^-^ : áhsvaÊ dIGa-Ê áhsva
Ba : -^^ : dIGa-Ê áhsvaÊ áhsva
na : ^^^ : áhsvaÊ áhsvaÊ áhsva
sa : ^^- : áhsvaÊ áhsvaÊ dIGa-
la : ^ : áhsva
ga : - : dIGa-
ya p`maaNao varIla ]dahrNaacaI AÜL AXaI analyze krta yao[la :
rmaanaa | yaka du | K maaJao | inavaara
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hyaa AlaMkaraMcaa AaiNa vaRtaMcaa avIcaar krta krta ponsaIla kagadalaa laagalaI.
AaaNI jao kahI kagadavar ]maTlao to maI yaoqao laIhIt Aaho. raop ho gaulaabaacyaa fulaalaa ]VoSauna Aaho.
bahuda yamak Asaavao Asao vaaTto. ho vaacauna jar kaoNaalaa malaa haNaavaosao vaaTlao tr maagao puZo pahu nayao.
jarur haNaa.
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janaasa majalaa ha saaMgaavaa
.. SaovaTIcaa ha inaraop Gyaavaa
janaa samajalaa hasaaM gaavaa
.. SaovaTI caaha ina raop Gyaavaa
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bhale anilbhai!
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anilbhai.. ekdam moropant style?? sahi ahe
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charcha changalich rangat aalelee distey..
barachasa bolun zalay tarihi thodasa swabhavokti baddal: yat niyam ha kee ekhadi vastu/prani/ghatana/jaga yache jivant vatel ase hubehub varnan aste... nehamichech udaharan mhanaje
matit te pasarale atiramya pankha..
kele vari udar pandur nishkalanka..
chanchu tashich ughadi pada lambavale..
nishpran deha padala shramahi nighale...
yashivai ke hota te aata neetsa aathavat nahiye.. konala purna yet asel tar sanga..
ganapat vani bidi pitana chavayacha nusatich kadi..
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mhanayacha an manashich mag ya jagevar bandhin madi..
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Sagarya: He kavita khalil thikani purna karnyacha
prayatna kela hoto. pan ajun purna zali nahi.
Tula jamat asel tar paha
Hitguj: Looking for: Kavita aani Gaani: ganyachya oLi
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mala waTate 'mungi uDali akashi' paN atishyoktichech udaharaN hoil.
mala awaDaNara alankar mhanaje 'vyatirek'. yaat upmaanaapeksha upameya shrehTa (ki ulaTe) ase dakhawale jate, jase:
niShkala.n sadaapuurNa mukh su.ndarii he tuze
kala.nkii ni kshayii chandraasamaan mhaNatii kase ?
ajun ek shabdalankar ahe ani mala tyache nav athawat nahi, bahuda dwandwa ? erawi jyala apan dwarthi bolane mhanato te. tyache pustakatil udaharN bahuda he asayache, 'mUk-naayak' madhil :
sundar tonDacha muuka koNaalaa awaDaNaar nahi ?
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shubha : mala hi tya alankarache naav dwandwa ahe asecha waTate, nakki nahi, khalil oL tyachecha udaharaN ahe asa waTaT:
aushadha na lage majala
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Anu, ho barobar. ajun ek hote pan mala pahilya don Li athawat nahit, pudhachi asha ahe:
adhikari adhikanurag tethe
tyache don arth hote. hadalit chuna misalala ki adhikadhik lal hoto ani dusara ki sahawasane prem waDhate asa. pan athawatach nahiye :(
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mungi uDali aakashi he atishayokti peksha kahitari adhyatmik arthache "roopak" ase mala waTate. karaN uDNarya mungya soDalya tar nehemichya mungya uDatach nahit. puN P.K. Atre jase sarva goshTit "daha hazar varshat hoNar nahi" mhaNat asat ti atishayokti.
Tasech dwandwa (WMW) he samasache nav ahe, dwyarthi (WyaqaI-) he alankarache nav asave.
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nahi, "mungi udali akashi" madhe ashakya, asambhavya goshtinchi yadi yete, tyatali pahili "mungi udali akashi, tine giLile suryasi" ase ahe.
khare tar ya alankarache nav hi mala aThawat nahi, jyat ekasarakhe dusare ashi udaharane deun mudda mandalela asato, jase:
saawaLaa war baraa gaur wadhulaa
niyama haach devaadikii paripaaLila
gaur tanuu jaanakii, raam ghan-niiL to
rukmiNii gaur tii, kruShNa kaaLaa
shubhra gangaa nadii saagaraalaa warii
viij tii meghaas ghaalii maaLaa
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shubha : mala awaDala "anamik" alankar. Mala navate mahit tyabaddal. udaharaN khupacha chhan ahe.
atishayokti alakanche udaharan mhaNun khalil "bharuD" prakar hotil ase waTate. te paN zakki mahNataat tasa adhyatmik arthache "roopak" ahe.
damaDicha tel aaNal
sasubaicha nhaNa zaal
nNandabainchi veNi zali
mamajinchi shenDi zali
uralel tel zakun Theval
lanDoricha paay lagala
veshipatur oghaLa gela
tyatun hatti vahun gela
## he bharuD tase barech prasidhha ahe, mala purna aThavat nahiye
kaTachya aNivar vase tin gaav
don osaD ek vasechina
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dwyarti alankara varun Dada Konkenchi athavan Zali. Tyanchya navavar amhi barech dwyarthi
cineme(nave) tayar kel hote.
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arre pudheel kavita kuthlya alankarat yete..anupras ka?
hata tatane jata rangvuni pata dharishi ka shiri
mathachi uthathev ka tari ..
dand kamandalu band majvishi mund mundishi tapa
na sarthak latkya sarya gapa..
mala sampurna aathvat nahi..konala aathvat asel tar lihal ka ..
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ho.. ha anupras aahe... mazyakade ram joshi chi cassette aahe.. lagech nahi pan thode divas kal kadhlis tar kadhitari mee te post karen....
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shubha : tya dwayarthi walya alankarache naav "shlesha" ase ahe, dandwa nahi.
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Thanks, Anu ! mazyamate yamak, anupraas, shleSha evadhe 3 ch shabdalankar ahet. tula ajun athawatat ka ?
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malaa vatate dvandva haa samaas aahe.
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of course, kiran. dwandwa ha samas tar ahech, pan tyache hi prakar ahet.
ubhayanvayi dwandwa madhe donhi shabda sarakhya darjache asatat, jase 'bhaji-bhakar'.
ajun konate aThawatat ?
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Arre, hya prakarala itaretar dwandwa mhantat ka?
eg. lambodar - lamb ahe jyache udar asa to..
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prafull : asa jo to mhaNaje "bahuvrihi" samas.
dwandwa mhaNaje don shabda joDun kinvaa tatsam prakaracha samas asa mala waTataty.
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patpani - pat ani pani
zunkabhakar - zunka ani bhakar
he ubhayanvayi dewandwa ase watate.
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khatri nahi, pan itaretar dwandwat bahuda tya don shabdanshivay anek itar ghoShTi adyarut asatat. bahutek, mitramanDaLi sarakhe, mnaNaje mitra + manDaLi + itar.
ajun eka dwandwat viruddharthi shabda asatat, kruShNadhaval sarakhe.
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Khalil wakya ekhadya alankarat model ka (Virodhabhas namak alankar asato ka?)?
Ek puNekar mhaNala: "sarva puNekar nehmi khote boltat"
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Anaup`asaacaI kahI }dahrNao
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pausvedya, anuprasachi chaan udaharaNe aahet. itar aksharachi miLalyas apaN ek chaan sangrah banawu shaku.
khaadaaD khaarkaraanni kharmure khaataakhaataa khaDu khaallaa.
madhyantari eka pustakat mala sanskrut madhil sarva alankar sapadale. Anek up-alankar dekhil ahet. "sanskrut alankar"
Sadhhya english madhye type kele ahet, wel milalyas devnagarit rupantar karin.
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aaj prathamach ha bb pahila, va shaletlaya navavi, dahavi iyattech athavan zali. ani te walimbyache pustak. khup bare watle ha bb vachun.
bryachasha visarat challelya goshti punha manat tajya zalya
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Rangy kharay tuza......malahi ya goshti faarsha athwat nahi........pan ithe wachlyawar punha ekda te pustak wachaychi iccha zali
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kuNaalaa mau> kavya kaya p`kar AsatÜ to maaihtI Aaho kaÆ
p`ÔullaÊ maaJyaa mato lambaÜQar ha d\vaMd\va samaasa naahI. tÜ ]BayaanvaI samaasa Aaho. d\vaMd samaasaamaQao
sahsaa AaiNaÊ vaÊ iknvaa vaap$na XabdaMcaI ÔÜD kolyaa jaato. vartI ]dahrNao idlaolaI Aahotca²
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Shriramb
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mau> kavya p`kar ikMvaa mau>cCMd mhNajao Asaa kavya p`kar kI jyaat vaR<aÊ CMdÊ gaoyataÊ kDvaIÊ
[%yaadIMcao inayama paLavao laagat naahIt.
laMbaÜdr ha laMba Aaho ]dr jyaacao AXaI fÜD kolyaasa bahuiva`hI samaasa hÜtÜ.
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hllaIcyaa kaLat kuzlao kvaI vaR<aoÊ CMd (aMcao inayama vaapÉna kivata krtatÆ malaa tr baáyaaca kivata
maga mau> kavyaatca idsatat. yamakÊ kDvaI ha Baaga vagaLta [tr kuzlaoca inayama hllaIcyaa kvaIMcyaa
kivatot idsat naahI.
caU. BaU. Qyaa. Gyaa.
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Beti
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| | Friday, May 10, 2002 - 9:52 am: |
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kaheehee kay re? ilahee jamadar, shankar waidya, Shantabaee, sudheer moghe, mahanor, grace kitee taree jan ajoon Akrutibandh paaLoon kawita lihitat-- changochee charoleedekhil paha na-- shiway Anilne tuza maganyawaroon postkelelee AruNa dheryanchee kaif kinwa itar kawita paha-- wachalya ahes na tya?
dusare ase chandogamee kawita lihiNare mukt-chhand lihit naheet ase nahee and vice-versa!
Ani yamak-kaDawee mhaNaaje kaay? I dont understand. ya 2 poorNataha wegaLyA goShTee Ahet.
muktchandala kuThlehee bandhan nasate---to ek awaghad kawyaprakar ahe-- aNi ugeech naween kaweenwar Teeka kinwa agadee commentshee kashala karayachya?
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Asami
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| | Friday, May 10, 2002 - 2:24 pm: |
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yash tula effective nava kavya ethe hitgujwar vachayache asel tar Kavitanche archives ughad ani Peshwyachya kavitaa vaach. Tyachya baryachsha kavita muktchhandi asataat.
Mukta chhandababat lokanche ase gairsamaj aahet ki kahihi lihile tari te mukt chhand hote. Arthaat he poornapane chuk aahe. Mukta chhand hi hatalnyaas atishay kathin ashi shabdarachana aahe. Jari muktchhandi kavitelaa kasalehi gana matranche bandhan palayache nasale tari tya kavitecha mul gabha sashakt hava tarach chapkhal shabda vaprun jorkas vakyarachana karane shakya hote. Tya kavitethi ek prakarachi lay kinva gati asane jaroori asate. Kavita vachalyawar ek samadhanachi janeev jagawali geli pahije. He samadhan kasalyahi prakarache asu de. Kavitecha artha samajalyache, kavita bhavalyache kinva nustech shabda avadalyache.
arthat he nivval muktachhanadalach nahi tar baki kavutananhi laagu hote pun at least bakichya kavitana ek akrutibandh asalyamule tya swabhaviktah vachaniy asataat, tyana tyanchi antrabhut lay asate. mukta chhanadache tase nasalymule hya goshtinchi bandhane palane muktachhandamadhe atishay jarooriche aahe.
my 2 cents worth ....
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