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Kaakaaso
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| | Sunday, December 27, 1998 - 1:41 pm: | 
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ek saaQaa p`Ena maaJaa
ek saaQaa p`Ena maaJaa laaK yaotI ]<aro
ho Kro kI to Kro kI to Kro kI ho Kro
karNaavaacaUna maaJaa XaaoQa GaotI karNao
Ana\ kuNaa zavao malaa maI ivasmaro ikMvaa smaro
BaaovatalaI ihMDtI hI maaNasao p`otMaprI
kaya yaa gaavaatsauQda ekda haotI Garo
jaaLunaI AayauYya maaJao vaaT maI tojaaLlaI
f@t maaJao paoT Aata jaaLNyaasaazI ]ro
dUr Aalaao evaZa kI qaaMbalyaa maagao idXaa
maaiJayaasaMgao ]VacaI caalatI saMva%saro
(aca Aata XaoYa maaJyaa raihlyaa kahI KuNaa
daona maaJaI Aasavao Ana\ caar maaJaI Axaro
sauroXa BaT
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Meera
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| | Sunday, December 27, 1998 - 7:35 pm: |
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ek saaQaa p`Ena maaJaa
ek saaQaa p`Ena maaJaa laaK yaotI ]<aro
ho Kro kI to Kro kI to Kro kI ho Kro
karNaavaacaUna maaJaa XaaoQa GaotI karNao
Ana\ kuNaa zavao malaa maI ivasmaro ikMvaa smaro
BaaovatalaI ihMDtI hI maaNasao p`otMaprI
kaya yaa gaavaatsauQda ekda haotI Garo
jaaLunaI AayauYya maaJao vaaT maI tojaaLlaI
f@t maaJao paoT Aata jaaLNyaasaazI ]ro
dUr Aalaao evaZa kI qaaMbalyaa maagao idXaa
maaiJayaasaMgao ]VacaI caalatI saMva%saro
(aca Aata XaoYa maaJyaa raihlyaa kahI KuNaa
daona maaJaI Aasavao Ana\ caar maaJaI Axaro
sauroXa BaT
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sauroXa BaTaMcaI varcaI sauMdr kivata kakasaahobaaMnaI "paosT" kolaI. tI vaacaUna maaJyaa AlpmatIt Kalacao ivacaar Aalao to maI sahja ilaihto.
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p`Sna saaQaa mauLI na tumacaa, na raoK p`Snaacaa kLo
ho kro kI to Kro p`Snaacyaa ivaYayaavar zro
karNaavaacaUna GaoNao XaaoQa manaujamanaacaI GaDNa Asao
Ana\ kuNaa zavao kaya sauMdr sa%ya %yaatunaI baahorI yao
BaaovatalaI ihMDtI saaáyaa táhaMcaI maaNasao
maaohaoMjaaodarIih samayaI eka na ka sausaMskRit vasao?
jaaLunaI mhNata AayauYya tumacao vaaT tumacaI tojaaLlaI
naOraXya caukIcao Baasao majalaa, vaaT Asata ]jaLlaI
dUr AalaaM evaZo tumhI qaMabalyaa naa maagao idXaa
tumacyaasaMgao ]VacaI naa caalatI saMva%saro?
idsatI majalaa Kasa tumacyaa raihlyaa AsatI KuNaa
AsqaanaI Aasavao tumacaI, vaoDI jarI maaJaI hI Axaro!
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Kaakaaso
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| | Tuesday, April 13, 1999 - 1:03 am: |
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vaNavao
pDtat raoja kanaI bakvao táhotáhocao Ñ
inaGatat baadXaahI ftvao táhotáhocao Ñ
kaoNaI maukabalaahI kolaa na eonavaoLI¸
dDlao Garat saaro naTvao táhotáhocao Ñ
samajaUt maI manaacaI GaalaU kXaI kLonaa¸
Ésavao táhotáhocao Ñ fugavao táhotáhocao Ñ
JaalaI kXaI ibacaarI badnaama caMd`Baagaa
jamatat vaaLvaMTI baDvao táhotáhocao Ñ
maaJaa p`vaasa gaolaa saMpUna jyaa izkaNaI¸
maja BaoTlao itqaohI cakvao táhotáhocao Ñ
ekaca caoháyaalaa maI AazvaU kXaalaa Æ
jaKmaI k$na gaolao ibacavao táhotáhocao Ñ
duinayaot vaaTlao maI AakaXa pavasaaLI
)dyaat kaoMDlao maI vaNavao táhotáhocao Ñ
sauroXa BaT
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Kaakaaso
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| | Sunday, July 04, 1999 - 1:42 pm: |
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manaatlyaa manaat maI
manaatlyaa manaat maI tuJyaasamaIp rahtao ²
tulaa na saaMgata tuJaa vasaMt raoja pahtao ²
Asaoca raoja naahunaI
lapoT AUna kaovaLo
Asaoca icaMba kosa tU
Aunhat saaoD maaokLo
tuJaa saugaMQa maaHa maI [qao hLUca huMgatao ²
ASaIca raoja AMgaNaI
lavaUna vaoca tU fulao
Asaoca saaMga laajaunaI
kLyaMasa gaUja Aapulao
tuJyaa kLyaa, tuJaI fulao [qao iTpUna kaZtao ²
AjaUna tU AjaaNa (a
kuvaar kd-LI prI
gaDo ivacaar jaaNa%yaa
jau[-sa ekda trI
"du$na kaoNa ha tuJaa marMd raoja caaKtao Æ"
tsaa na raihlaa Ata
Audasa ekTopNaa
tuJaI $ppllavaI
ijaqaoitqao krI KuNaa
pha ksaa hvaot maI tuJyaasavao saLaLtao ²
sauroXa BaT
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Milya
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| | Monday, July 05, 1999 - 11:26 pm: |
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Kakasaheb barech divasani alat ithe. Dhanyavad parat ekada ek cha kavita post kelyabaddal
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Supriya
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| | Monday, July 12, 1999 - 7:13 pm: |
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Great Kaakaaso!
Eka sundar kavitebaddal abhar, thanks!
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Milya
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| | Tuesday, March 07, 2000 - 4:51 pm: |
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]YaÁkala haota haota kaLra~ JaalaI
Aro punha AayauYyaacyaa poTvaa maSaalaI
AamhI caar ikrNaaMcaI hI Aasa ka QaravaI
jao kQaIca navhto %yaacaI vaaT ka phavaI
ksaa saUya- AMQaaracyaa vaahtao pKalaI
Aro punha AayauYyaacyaa poTvaa maSaalaI
itjaaorIt %yaaMnaI kolao baMd svaga- saatI
AamhavarI saMsaaracaI ]Do QaULmaatI
AamhI to smaSaanao jyaaMnaa p`ot hI naa vaalaI
Aro punha AayauYyaacyaa poTvaa maSaalaI
]Baa doSa Jaalaa Aaja ek baMdISaalaa
ijaqao dovakIcaa panha duQaanao jaLalaa
ksao puNya dud-OvaI Ana pap BaagyaSaalaI
Aro punha AayauYyaacyaa poTvaa maSaalaI
Qaumasatat AjaUnaI ivaJa%yaa icataMcao inaKaro
AjaUna r> maagat ]ztI vaQastMBa saaro
Aasavaoca svaatM~\yaacaI Aamhalaa imaLalaI
Aro punha AayauYyaacyaa poTvaa maSaalaI
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Asami
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| | Tuesday, March 07, 2000 - 5:34 pm: |
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Kitihi vela hi kavita vachali/aikali tari shevatache kadve vachtana mazya angawar shahare ubhe rahtatatch...
Milya "ElGaar" vachlayas ka ?
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Shahana
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| | Tuesday, March 07, 2000 - 7:18 pm: |
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durdaiva he aahe ki sarvanchyach anggavar ubhe rahanare shahare pudhachyach kshani nahise hotat... mala nahi vatat ekahi chiteche nikhare ajun dhumsat astil ani kunachyahi ayushyachya mashalit itaranna prakash denyakarata tel urale asel... tar mag nustich hi kavita quote karun ani
'vahava vahava' mhanun upayog tari kaay ?
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Ajjuka
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| | Wednesday, March 08, 2000 - 6:37 pm: |
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mag kay karayache? kavita vachayachi nahi? daad dyayachi nahi??
manya aahe vahva mhananyani kahi farak padnar nahi, pan mag kashane padel te sanga na. ANi jyane farak padel ase vatate te karayala tumchi tayari aahe ka? ghardar varyavar sodun deshasathi kam karanyachi tumchi tayari aahe ka? tevdha tyag vaigere tumhi karu shakal ka?
kunalach shakya nahiye te. tevha hi ji aaplich medeocrity aplyala dachat rahate tichi boch thodishi ka hoina ya kavitene kami hot asel tar hou de na.
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Storvi
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| | Wednesday, March 08, 2000 - 11:14 pm: |
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I agree. ani deshsevet pratyekacha kharicha vata astoch, asavach.
Kavi lekhak yanni prerana dayak sahitya nirman karava, itaranni te vachun sfurti ani prerana gheun kaam karava.
ani karo athva na karo, bolnyala manai nahi..
aso, athva naso, pun nuste dad deun kahi honar nahi ase tumhi mhanalat, tyane tari kahi vishesh ghadle ka?
tyanni lihilyane, ani amhi ad dilyane kahi naselahi ghadle, pun deshabhiman balagnari manase tari olkhu ali? hehi nase thodke.
ani besides the point, manal vatel te vyakta nahi kela tar ya deshat kay ani itar kuthehi kay lekhak kavi nirmanach zale naste. pratyek kavita, lekh, nibandha katha lihinyane kahitari honar aste, kinva swatah anubhavle aste tar katha kadambarya, ani sahitya itka pudhe gelach nasta.
ani kahi honar asel asach vyakta karayche, tar peace time madhe kahi sahitya nirmanach hovu naye ase mhanne ahe ka?
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Shahana
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| | Thursday, March 09, 2000 - 1:12 am: |
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mala mhanayache hote ki ya kavitecha uddesh nusti daad milavane ha nasun ti daad krutit yavi ha aahe.ani tyamule ya kavitela kuthalihi kruti na karata daad dene ha shuddha dhongipana aahe.ektar krutine daad vykata kara kinva daad mulich deu naka.
Mhanje ekhada manus oradtoy "are mi budtoy,budtoy mala vachava", tar tumhi mhantay, "vahava! kaay aavaj aahe, kaay avajachi patti aahe, kaay avajachi fek aahe!" ani ha virodhabhas dakhavun dila tar tumhi mhantay, "mag kay konala oradanycha haaka nahi ka ? ani tya oradanyache amhi kautuk nahi karayache ka ?" tumchya ya shabdik kautukacha tya manasala kaay upayog aahe ?
(he rupak tumhala kalel ashi asha aahe!)
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