aamcha Saprem namaskar,
Mazi bayako sou Jaya maharashtrat shikli aahe. Tine vicharle aahe ki khalil dilelya kavitachya pahilya oli tumhala mahit aslyas kalvavya.
kaviteche nav MI KAGAD ZALE AAHE - Kavi VIR SAVARKAR
Dagadachi parthiv bhint, Ti pudhe akalpit sarali !
Me kagad zale aahe, Chal lihi ase ti vadli !!
Papnyat jalali lanka, Lahyanpari aasu zale!
Uccharun honya aadhi, Ucchatan shabda aale!!
Dusri Kaviteche Kavi mahit aslyas Kalvave.
Kaviteche Nav : Ghatatali Vaat
Ghatatali Vaat, Kaay ticha Thaat
Girakat Murakat Lavate Pathopath
Nili Nili Paradi, Koni Keli Khalati
Pann Pula Sandli, Varati aani Kalti
Khali Khol Dari, Varr Unch Kada
Bhala Motha Naag, Janu Fana Kadhun Ubha
shireesh_mp@mantrafreenet.com
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Mee kagad azale ahe hee kawita Sawarkaranchee nahee. Windanchee asawee.
Kawita ashee ahe:
Mee multanmadhale mukt,
too kaidyanmadhala kaidee,
tuze ni maze whawe te soor kase samwadee?
Mazyawar lihitee geete ya mand sameeraN laharee
mazyawar chitrit hote garuDachee gard bhararee,
jaD langar tuziya payee too pees kasa hoNar ?
Mazyahoon ahe yogya bhoomeela prashna wichar.
AbhaL mhaNale nahee, Bhoomeehee mhaNalee nahee,
Winayakane mag tyanchee aLawaNee kelee nahee,
PapaNyant jaLalee lanka, lahyanparee asoo zale,
uccharoon hoNyaadheech, uchchatan shabda ale,
dagaDachee parthiw bhint to puDhe akalpit
saralee,
mee kagad zale ahe, chal lihee; ase tee wadalee!
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Beti,
Kavita pathavnya badda aabhar. Pan ek vicharayche aahe. Windanchee mhanje Savarkarhi Vinayak Damodarach na. Tarihi tu konty Windanchee mhanat Vinda Karandikar ka?
Shireesh_mp@mantrafreenet.com
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Shirish, Beti,
hee kavitaa vindaa yaanchee hee naahee aaNi vi.daa. yaanchee hee naahee. Tee lokkavee manhoman yaanchee aahe. Sandarbh asaa : sant dnyaanesharaanee bhint chaalawalee hotee ashee akhyaayikaa aahe. saavarkar andamaanaat asataanaa tyaanaa kaagad-pen paN dile jaat nase. tyaa kaaLee tyaanee anek sundar kavitaa rachalyaa, paN lihaayachyaa kuThe asaa praSHn tyaanaa paDalaa. ["kamalaa" he mahaakaavya tyaatalech.] to tyaanee kavitaa kaadeene bhintivar lihun soDavilaa. (hee 'akhyaayika' naahee..vastusthitee aahe!) tyaavaroon manmohanaanee tyaanchee kavitaa lihilee.
Shirish,
mee 10-12 diwasaanpoorveech hee maahiti "poSHT" kelee hotee. kaa milaanee naahee te malaa samajat nahee. paN aataa shankaasamaadhaan hoeel ashee apekshaa aahe.
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Kakasaheb,
kawinche naw sangitalyabaddal dhanyawad. Wisarale hote. mala watat hote Winda Karandeekaranchee ahe mhaNoon. Kawita paTh hotee. Sandarbhahee maheet hota.
Tumhee Kamala wachale ahe ka? te kuThe upalabdh ahe ka? krupaya kaLawa.
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Beti,
kamalaa faar poorvee (aamachyaa baaLpaNee!) bhaarataat asataanaa vaachale hote. tyaanantar 1988-89 saalee "Uni. of Texas, Austin" (ho!) chyaa granthaalayaat samagra saavarkar che kaanhee bhaag chaaLale hote tyaat kamalaa chaa samaavesh aslyaache aathawate. jamalyaas avashya vaachaave!
kaakaasaaheb
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Kaakasoo
Namaskar,
Kadachit tumhi mazyavar ragavle asal karan me thode far jastach lihilele aahe. aso. pan maza fakta ekch dhyey aahe to asa ki jasa me marathi sahitya vina rahilyamule mi kay kay gamavale te fakta dusryanni gamvoo naye ashich maza prayatna aahe.
Kharokharach madhya pradesh mhanje, ethe marathi nahich. tumchya javal Kavinchi chitre astil tar ti mail karavit.
tumchi mail aaleli pahilya var konachihi mail pahayachi icchhhhhha hot nahi. Smita Manohar, Swati aani, Robeenh aani kahi dusryanchya mail milalyat. mazya sarkhya sathi tevdhech khup hote.
tumhi kuthe astat. Tumchya javal barech kahi aahe. Shakya tevdhe hyach site var pathwave mhanje etar lokannahi vachta yel.
shireesh
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Kakasaheb
Dhanyawad. Jamalyas jaroor wachen. Ani shakyato jamaweenach.
Maza ShreeShala dujora ahe. Kharech tumachyakade deNyajoge khoop ahe aNi ithe khoop zoLya rikamyahee ahet.
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sagaraa pran talamala..krupaya hya kaviteche lyrics astil tar mala sangavet !!!
dhanyavad
sanjay
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sausvaagatma !!!
Sanjay Phadke urf Manoharvithal,
ihtgaujavar Aaplao haid-k svaagat. ihtgaujatfo- Aaplyaalaa hI CÜTIXaI BaoT .
ihtgaujavarIla sava- ivaBaagaaMnaa AvaXya BaoT Va .
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doXaBa>a p`asaad baindXaalaa
hI saavarkrancaI kivata kÜNaakDo puNa- Aaho kaÆ
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are. shevti ek savarkarnteel kavi shodhnara nighalach vattai!
Mitranno, mi ekda savarkar samagra vangmayateel kavya-natya vibhag wachla ahe. tyat tyanchya khoop sundar - sundar kavita ahet. Gomantak Kamala vagaire mahakavyehi ahet. tyatil eka chhotyasha kavitela (anantachi aarti - kaviteche nav) mi aaplya alpa-budhhi pramane chaal hi laavleli ahe.
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Vinayak
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mi savarkaravnvar ek nava BB suru kelaa aahe. tyaat hyaa kavitaa dein.
unmesh, majhyaakade savarakar samgra aahe. malaa tu sangitalelee kavitaa, mahit naahee. paN miLalee tar jarur taaken.
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Surthorat
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| | Sunday, November 07, 2004 - 1:45 pm: |
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ivaXvaasa basaNaar naaih
pNa hI saavarkraMcaIca kivata
tnauvaola
sakaLIca tU taoiDt Asata jaa[jau[-cyaa fulaa
maaDIva$naI sauMdr knyao paihyalaI maI tulaa
]McavaIta kr CatIvair yao caaoLI tTtTunaI
kurL koXa $Ltait gaaorTyaa maanaovair sauTunaI
pdr Kaovalaa patL gaolao kiTtiTlaa lagaTunaI
smaRtI saKyao tva manaI maaiJayaa saMgatIcyaa ]zunaI
baGasaI caaorTo maI tuja idsatao vartI ka kuzunaI
idsatacaI maI hsaU ]Yaosama mauiK tva yao fuTunaI
AXaI sakaLI fulao taoiDta paihyalaI jaO tulaa
fulavaolaIhunaI tnauvaolacaI tva maaohk idsalaI malaa
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Sarivina
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| | Monday, November 08, 2004 - 10:40 am: |
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ya& yaa Baa d Kor AaiNa XaOlajaa rajao yaaMnaI saavarkraMvar ilaihlaolyaa pustkat yaa kivatocyaa
paXva-BaUmaIcao Cana vaNa-na kolaM Aaho
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Menikhil
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| | Tuesday, November 09, 2004 - 7:16 am: |
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iXarIYaÊ
maaÔ kra pNa tumhI svatahalaa marazI mhNata AaiNa vaInda AaiNa saavarkr ekca Aahot Asao mhaNata ho pahuna
Ôar vaa[T vaaTlao. Aasaܲ vaInda mhNajao vaI. da. krndIkr.
saavarkrainca saagara p`aNa tLmaLlaa ho kvaIta A<aa puNa- maaJyaakDo naaihÊ pNa jaovhDI paz Aaho
tovhiD ilahItÜ
nao majasaI nao prt maa~uBaUmaIlaa
saagara p`aNa tLmaLlaa ÈÈQa`uÈÈ
BaU maatocyaa carNatlaa tuja QaUta
maI ina%yaa pahIlaa hÜta
maja vadlaasaI Anya doYaI cala jaa}
sa`uiYTcaI ivaivaQata pahU
tiya jananaI áhud ivarhXainkt hI JaalaI
pir tUvaa vacana tIja idQalao
maaga-& svayao maIca pRYzI vaahIna
%varI tyaa prt AaiNana
ivaXvasalaÜ yaa tva vacanaI maI
jagad\nauBava yaÜgao banaunaI maI
tva AiQak Xa> ]wrNaI maI
yao[na %varo kqauna saÜiDlao tIjalaa...
saagara p`aNa tLmaLlaa ÈÈ1ÈÈ
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Chinmay
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| | Tuesday, November 09, 2004 - 7:56 am: |
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Xauk pMjair vaa hirNa iXaravaa paXaI
hI Ôsagat JalaI tOXaI
BaU ivarh ksaa satt saahu yaapuZtI
dXa idXaa tmaÜmaya hÜtI
gauNasaumanao maI vaoicayalaI yaa Baavao
kI itnao saugaMQaa Gyaavao
jair ]wrNaI vyaya na itcyaa hÜ saacaa
ha vyaqa- Baar ivaVocaa
hI Aama`vaRxa va%salata ro
navakusaumayauta %yaa saulata ro
tÜ baalagaulaaba hI Aata ro
Ôulabaaga malaa haya parKa Jaalaa
saagara p`aNa tLmaLlaa ÈÈ2ÈÈ
naBaI naxa~o bahut ek pir Pyaara
maja BartBaUimacaa tara
p`asaad qao Bavya prI maja BaarI
AacaI JaÜpDI PyaarI
itjaivaNa nakÜ rajya maja ip`ya saacaa
vanavaasa itcyaa jarI vainacaa
BaulaivaNao vyaqa- ho Aata ro
bahu ijavalaga gamato ica<aa ro
tuja sair%pto jaI sairta ro
td ivarhacaI Xapqa GaailatÜ tujalaa
saagara p`aNa tLmaLlaa ÈÈ3ÈÈ
yaa ÔonaimaYao hsaXaI inad-yaa kOsaa
ka vacana BaMigaXaI eosaa
%va%svaaima%vaa saaMp`t jaI imarivato
iBa]naIka AaMglaBaUima to
mana maatolaa Abala mhNaUnaI ÔsaivasaI
maja ivavasanaa to doXaI
trI AaMglaBaUima BayaBaIta ro
Abalaa na maaJaI hI maata ro
kiqala ho Agaistsa Aata ro
jaÜ AacamanaI ek xaNaI tuja Pyaalaa
saagara p`aNa tLmaLlaa ÈÈ4ÈÈ
cauka AsaNyaacaI Xa@yata Aaho...
Asalyaasa plz saaMgaavao
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inaiKla
iXairYa maQya p`doXaat rahtÜ trIhI tÜ AapulakInao marazI kivata Ê kvaIMcaI maaihtI jamavatÜ ho kÝtukaspd
Aaho. %yaalaa to vaatavarNa imaLalao naahI mhNaUna tÜ jaaNaIvapUva-k jaÜpasatÜ Aaho %yaaba_la %yaacao
kÝtuk kolao paihjao . %yaacyaakDUna caUk JaalaI tr %yaalaa naavao na zovata duÉst kolaI paihjao.
AaiNa tU tr Xauw marazI tU caukIcaI maaihtI dotÜ %yaacao kayaÆ ivanda mhNajao vaI. da . krndIkr Asao jao
tU zÜkUna idlao Aaho %yaaba_la tulaa kaya mhNaavaoÆ
ivanda krndIkr mhNajao gaÜivand ivanaayak krndIkr . %yaatIla gaÜivandacaa ivanda Jaalaaya ²²
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Zakki
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| | Tuesday, November 09, 2004 - 3:38 pm: |
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ibacaaro vaIr saavarkr² %yaaMcaa Aa%maa AjaUna kuzo Aasapasa Asaola tr %yaalaa iktI yaatnaa hÜtIlaÆ ik%yaok
vaYao- ihrIrInao marazIkrNaacaa p`ya%na %yaaMnaI kolaa² tr AaMgla XabdaMcao marazIkrNa tr saÜDacaÊ [qao
%yaaMcyaa naavaacyaa KalaI ca@k marazI sauwa laÜk AaMgla BaaYaot ilaihtat²
ha hMt hMt²²
maaf kra. rahvalao naahI mhNaUna varIla sava- ilaihlao. pNa maaJaI Ka~I Aaho kI sava- laÜkaMnaI marazItca
ilaihNyaacaa p`ya%na kolaa AsaNaarca. pNa %yaaMnaa vaoL nasalyaamauLo jaast vaoL p`ya%na krta Aalaa naahI.
pNa manaatlao ilahUna TakNyaacaI %yaaMcaI tLmaL p`XaMsanaIya Aaho²
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Bee
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ra^baInaÊ gaÜivaMdacao ivanda Jaalao ho malaa zavaUk navhto. Qanyavaad²
Ja@kIÊ kaya hÜ tumhI lahanasaana maulaaMXaI vaad Gaalata. jaa itkDo iXalpacyaa baIbaIvar
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